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Unit 3 Travel journal
如何写解决问题建议信 ？
人教版 高一 第1册
Unit 3 Travel journal
如何写解决问题建议信 ？
（人教版必修一）
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情景导入
如何写建议信？
定 义
建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。
基本框架
1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。
2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。
3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
亮点句式
①I am writing to express my views/ideas about/concerning...
②Thanks for trusting me. It's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/ advice/tips.
1．开头常用句式：
亮点句式
①I would like to suggest that...
②If I were you，I would...
③As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...
④For one thing...，for another...
⑤Last but not least(最后但同样重要的)．..
2．表达建议常用句式：
亮点句式
①These are only my personal suggestions/tips. I hope you will find them useful/helpful.
②I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in further detail.
③I will highly appreciate your consideration of my suggestions / advice /tips.
3．结尾常用句式：
写作任务
假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示用英语给他写一封词数100左右的信。
1．要交朋友首先要成为一个朋友；
2．要和朋友同甘共苦，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；
3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
审题谋篇
体裁 建议信
话题 交友
时态 一般现在时
人称 第一人称
组词造句
Ⅰ.词汇
1．成为一个朋友 _______________
2．交朋友 __________________
3．与……分享…… _________________
4．全身心投入…… ____________________
5．需要 ______________
be a friend
make friends
share...with...
put one's heart into...
call for/need
组词造句
Ⅱ.句式
1．You should be a friend if you want to make friends.(用why not改写)
________________________________________________
2．A friend in need is a friend indeed.(在句子前加入Just as a saying goes)
_____________________________________________________
Why not be a friend if you want to make friends?
Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed.
组词造句
Ⅱ.句式
3．你应该全心全意地来交朋友。
You should put your heart into making friends.
(改成否定疑问句Wouldn't it be a good idea if...)
________________________________________________________
Wouldn't it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends?
组词造句
Ⅱ.句式
4．我们都知道交友需要时间和投入。
We all know that friendship calls for time and effort.
(使用形式主语改写)
______________________________________________________
It is well? known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
妙笔成篇
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参考范文
Para. 1
开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点
Dear Su Ru，
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，you should share happiness and sorrow with your friend. Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least，wouldn't it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends？It is well ?known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
参考范文
Para. 2
对问题进行分析并说明理由，提出建议
参考范文
Para. 3
前后呼应，表达期待
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours，
Li Hua
亮点概述
建议信写作
主体——进行分析并说明理由，提出建议
结尾——呼应开头，重申观点
开头——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点
谢谢
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