高考英语二轮专题复习课件：定语从句专题复习之：定语从句写作讲评（31张PPT）
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定语从句专题复习
Attributive Clause（2）:
Writing
Lesson Type:
Comments on Attributive Clause Writings
Teaching Focus:
errors and mistakes in Students’ writing materials
Teaching Difficulties:
how to improve sentences into correct attributive clauses
语篇翻译
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
Part 1. Common Mistakes
1.Words and expressions
(1)有960万平方公里的土地
wrong: have 9.6 million square kilometre area/space/place …
Right:
with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/
cover an area of 9.6 million square kilometers
(2).世界第三大国
Wrong:
the world third big country/
the third large country…
Right:
the third largest country in the world
(3). 有56个民族 (下文：汉族人the Han Ethnic)
Wrong: have 56 nation…
Right: 有：
There is/ are…
Be made up of…
consist of…
56个民族:
56 nationalities/ ethnics
(4).占94%
Wrong: occupy 94%
have 94% of..
Right:
making up 94% of the whole/
94% of … are…
(5).有许多大河流
Wrong:
have many big river
Right:
there are many big rivers in…
(6).长江,黄河
Wrong:
Changjiang, Huanghe
Right:
the Yangtze River and the Yellow River
(7) 曾有一段时间
Wrong:
have a time/ having a time
Right:
There was a time when…
(8).中国的经济
Wrong:
China economic/ China’s economic
Right:
Chinese economy
(9).落后于
Wrong:
later/ less/ behind
Right:
be far behind/
fall behind
(10).被歧视的日子
Wrong: are thought lightly of days/
were made fun of days/
are looked down upon days
are laughed at days…
Right:
the days when … were thought lightly of/ were made fun of/ were looked down upon/ were laughed at
(11).为此感到自豪
Wrong:
pound/ pround
Right:
be proud of…
take pride in…
2. Imcomplete clauses(句子成分不完整）
(1).Wrong: China covers 9.6 million square kilometers, which the third biggest country in the word.
Right:
…, which is the third biggest country in the word./ which ranks the third biggest in the word/ ranking the third biggest in the word
(缺少从句谓语动词）
(2).Wrong:
It is known to us all that China is the third biggest country in the world, which the total area of about 960 square kilometers.
Right:
…, with a total area of about 960 square kilometers/
…, which covers a total area of about …
(缺少从句谓语动词）
(3). Wrong: As we all know, China, which is the third biggest country in the world.
Right:
As we all know, China, which is the third biggest country in the world, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.
(主句不完整）
3. Incorrect relative pronoun/ adverb （关系代词或关系副词用错）
（1）Wrong:
China has 56 ethnics, during which the Han Ethnic are about 94%.
Right:
…94% of which are the Han Ethnic
(2). Wrong: China which the Han Ethnic take up 94 percent has 56 nations.
Right:
China, in which the Han Ethnic take up 94%, has 56 ethnics./
China, 94% of whose population are Han Ethnic, has 56 ethnics.
(3).Wrong:
There are many rivers in China, the most important are the Changjiang and Yellow River.
Right:
There are many rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
Part 2. Translation
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
As is known to all/ As we all know, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/ which covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. （1416黄秋丽，周茜茜，吴智林，莫培英，刘芳铭）
或
As is known to all/ As we all know, China，the third largest country in the world/ which is the third largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers. （1416黄莹，陈沛清，易冲）
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, 94% of which are the Han Ethnic Group.(1416陈远铖，徐冰冰）
或The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, making up 94% of the whole.
或
China is made up of 56 ethnics, including an ethnic which is called the Han Ethnic with a percentage of 94. (1416黎轩成）
或There are 56 ethnics in China， where the Han Ethnic make up 94%. (1416李秋焰）
或China is made up of 56 ethnics, of which The Han Ethnic makes up 94%. (1416钟嘉榕）
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River./
Besides, there are many big rivers in China, including the Yangtze River and the Yellow River which are the most important rivers in China.(1416朱欣仪，朱坤兰）
或
In addition, there are many big rivers in China, where the most important are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River. (1416练嘉惠，吴智林，）
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
There was a time when Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world.（1416李杰萍，陀森，覃剑宁，唐金妃，莫燕玲）
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
However, with the development of the economy, the days are gone forever when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of. （1416徐冰冰，莫燕玲）
Part 3. Filling the blank
______is known to all, China with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, among ______the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, making up 94% of the whole. Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of _____are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.
As
which
which
There was a time _____Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world. However, with the development of the economy, the days are gone forever ______the Chinese people were looked down upon, ______all Chinese are proud of.
when
when
which
定语从句专题复习
Attributive Clause（2）:
Writing
Lesson Type:
Comments on Attributive Clause Writings
Teaching Focus:
errors and mistakes in Students’ writing materials
Teaching Difficulties:
how to improve sentences into correct attributive clauses
语篇翻译
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
Part 1. Common Mistakes
1.Words and expressions
(1)有960万平方公里的土地
wrong: have 9.6 million square kilometre area/space/place …
Right:
with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/
cover an area of 9.6 million square kilometers
(2).世界第三大国
Wrong:
the world third big country/
the third large country…
Right:
the third largest country in the world
(3). 有56个民族 (下文：汉族人the Han Ethnic)
Wrong: have 56 nation…
Right: 有：
There is/ are…
Be made up of…
consist of…
56个民族:
56 nationalities/ ethnics
(4).占94%
Wrong: occupy 94%
have 94% of..
Right:
making up 94% of the whole/
94% of … are…
(5).有许多大河流
Wrong:
have many big river
Right:
there are many big rivers in…
(6).长江,黄河
Wrong:
Changjiang, Huanghe
Right:
the Yangtze River and the Yellow River
(7) 曾有一段时间
Wrong:
have a time/ having a time
Right:
There was a time when…
(8).中国的经济
Wrong:
China economic/ China’s economic
Right:
Chinese economy
(9).落后于
Wrong:
later/ less/ behind
Right:
be far behind/
fall behind
(10).被歧视的日子
Wrong: are thought lightly of days/
were made fun of days/
are looked down upon days
are laughed at days…
Right:
the days when … were thought lightly of/ were made fun of/ were looked down upon/ were laughed at
(11).为此感到自豪
Wrong:
pound/ pround
Right:
be proud of…
take pride in…
2. Imcomplete clauses(句子成分不完整）
(1).Wrong: China covers 9.6 million square kilometers, which the third biggest country in the word.
Right:
…, which is the third biggest country in the word./ which ranks the third biggest in the word/ ranking the third biggest in the word
(缺少从句谓语动词）
(2).Wrong:
It is known to us all that China is the third biggest country in the world, which the total area of about 960 square kilometers.
Right:
…, with a total area of about 960 square kilometers/
…, which covers a total area of about …
(缺少从句谓语动词）
(3). Wrong: As we all know, China, which is the third biggest country in the world.
Right:
As we all know, China, which is the third biggest country in the world, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.
(主句不完整）
3. Incorrect relative pronoun/ adverb （关系代词或关系副词用错）
（1）Wrong:
China has 56 ethnics, during which the Han Ethnic are about 94%.
Right:
…94% of which are the Han Ethnic
(2). Wrong: China which the Han Ethnic take up 94 percent has 56 nations.
Right:
China, in which the Han Ethnic take up 94%, has 56 ethnics./
China, 94% of whose population are Han Ethnic, has 56 ethnics.
(3).Wrong:
There are many rivers in China, the most important are the Changjiang and Yellow River.
Right:
There are many rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
Part 2. Translation
1.众所周知,中国有960万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国.
As is known to all/ As we all know, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/ which covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. （1416黄秋丽，周茜茜，吴智林，莫培英，刘芳铭）
或
As is known to all/ As we all know, China，the third largest country in the world/ which is the third largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers. （1416黄莹，陈沛清，易冲）
2. 中国有56个民族,其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic) 占94%
The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, 94% of which are the Han Ethnic Group.(1416陈远铖，徐冰冰）
或The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, making up 94% of the whole.
或
China is made up of 56 ethnics, including an ethnic which is called the Han Ethnic with a percentage of 94. (1416黎轩成）
或There are 56 ethnics in China， where the Han Ethnic make up 94%. (1416李秋焰）
或China is made up of 56 ethnics, of which The Han Ethnic makes up 94%. (1416钟嘉榕）
3.中国有许多大河流,其中长江,黄河是最重要的河流.
Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River./
Besides, there are many big rivers in China, including the Yangtze River and the Yellow River which are the most important rivers in China.(1416朱欣仪，朱坤兰）
或
In addition, there are many big rivers in China, where the most important are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River. (1416练嘉惠，吴智林，）
4.曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界许多国家.
There was a time when Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world.（1416李杰萍，陀森，覃剑宁，唐金妃，莫燕玲）
5.随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
However, with the development of the economy, the days are gone forever when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of. （1416徐冰冰，莫燕玲）
Part 3. Filling the blank
______is known to all, China with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, among ______the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, making up 94% of the whole. Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of _____are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.
As
which
which
There was a time _____Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world. However, with the development of the economy, the days are gone forever ______the Chinese people were looked down upon, ______all Chinese are proud of.
when
when
which