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2019江苏高考作文之summary
Summary writing
(约30个词概括)
概要:约30词,少于25或多于40词均扣2分
抄袭原文材料为无效要点;改变句式表达方式,并有适当发挥,不认定为抄袭。
读写作文写好summary 的意义
第一段是定调子,阅卷老师往往读
完第一段就已经打出基本分了。
---高考阅卷老师
相对于写作的其他要求来说,这一
部分较难写,这一部分先读后概括,
而其他部分都是有中文提纲的。
---往届实验班考生
What is a Summary?
A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.
以约30个词概括主要内容
A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it.
“It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!”
“Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!”
“Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can’t you just be happy about what you have already got?”
人称时态
The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got.
feels
comforts
you
you
过多细节
In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what he didn’t possess.
53 words
直接引语
A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got.”
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过早表达观点
Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .
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A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.
dos and don’ts
1、注意人称时态正确;
2、不写过多细节:实行精“兵”裁“员”
3、不用直接引语;
4、不能过早表达观点;
5、不可完全照抄原文;
6、不可加入自己的观点;
7. 思路清晰,巧用关联词增强文章的
连贯性。
Styles of passage
Narration(记叙文)
1
Argumentation(说明文)
2
Exposition(议论文)
3
图文并茂的材料
4
三要素:论点、论据、论证。
文章结构:总分结构、分总结构、
平行结构。
3、议论文
Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.
1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):
Getting up early /a good habit
/of great importance
2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences)
a better memory
a healthier body
a better preparation for the day
3. Conclusion/suggestions.
a good habit / benefit a lot
Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.
Q1:图文并茂的读写归纳要涉及图吗?
审题
看图画或图表的作用
漫画通常可忽略
图表看作用,有时不可忽略
2015高考作文
Tip1
多个并列语段只要找出其共性
主题, 为某一段落服务的插图
可不涉及。
Model 1: Topic + support
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also?threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.(2015高考范文)
The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius(孔子), Beijing opera and Kung fu.
“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.
The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.
Think:以上的三段文字和图之间是什么关系?
图表中的内容在文章中体现了吗?要写吗?
Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2
The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
Q2 summary如何踩点
抓住主题句中心词
理清逻辑关系
不遗漏信息,但决不罗嗦
有概括性思考,但决不画蛇添足
简约而不简单
simplicity but not simple
Assignment:
Polish up the summary writing .
Good luck!