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高考专题:短文改错
Teaching goal:
1. Understand the importance of correcting errors;
2. Learn how to correct mistakes in the passage
Teaching important points:
1. Learn details of correcting errors;
2. How to correct errors;
Teaching difficult points:
How to design a test of correcting errors
Step 1
Step 1 A. Examples of mistakes---- Chinglish
How are you?
How old are you?
You ask me, me ask who?
You Give Me Stop!
You have seed, I will give you some color to see see.
Let the horse come on.
怎
么
老
是
你?
你
有
种
B. The importance of correction
高考重要题型。占分10分。
题型概括。
体裁大多为记叙文,偶尔也有说明文和应用文。
通常具有积极向上的教育意义。
其中大部分为简单句或并列句;
平均每篇短文为8-10 个句子,每行为9-12 个单词,总词汇量为100 -120 个单词
以考查学生书面表达中的常见错误为主
Step 2
Step 2 A. 改错格式
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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10处错误
每句中最多有两处错误
增加一个单词
删除一个单词
改正一个单词
从第11处错误起不计分
If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.
If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.
If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.
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∧
∧
for
for
for
X
X
加词
My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.
honesty
X
X
错词
My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.
My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.
honesty
honesty
We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and make our own way to home.
We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and make our own way to home.
We finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and make our own way to home.
X
X
删词
Step 2 B. 体验真题 (2018年全国卷二)
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Step 2 B. 体验真题 (2018年全国卷二…)
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Friday
sorts
a
watch
me
∧
was
with
were
when
Step 2 C. 改错考点
points
冠词
名词
代词
介词
词性
动词
连词与从句
Step 2 C. 改错考点
In a fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me.
冠词
冠词的特指、泛指,a/an的用法
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
She gets up early every morning to study a bit before class. Now she had made great progresses.
名词
名词的可数与不可数,单数与复数
progress
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
In fact, the problem can be deal with in many ways.
动词
时态、语态、非谓语动词
dealt
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
In 1980s, researchers at Cleveland State University made a surprising discovery. We conducted an experiment by creating two imaginary job candidates.
代词
逻辑性问题、it
They
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.
介词
固定搭配,具体语境
of
∧
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
She had some difficulty communicating with people at the beginning of this term. However, She works very hardly.
词性
形容词(修饰名词;表主语状态;系动词后表语或宾补)
hard
副词(修饰形容词、动词、全句)
比较级
ouyangyang:
Step 2 C. 改错考点
I am sorry to hear that you are upset about the fact what you are laughed at by your classmates because you are short and fat.
连词与从句
that
ouyangyang:
Step 3 设计题目
给你一段话(每组不一样),请你们将这段正确的英文改为改错题(共三处错误),五分钟后,你将你的题目放在展示台上展示,你可以抽任何一组(除本组外)来回答,对方答后,你需要说明正误并解释你出的题考的是哪一个考点。
1. 通读全文, 把握大意.
2. 分句阅读, 逐句找错.
3. 对照考点, 重读全文
Step 2 B. 改错套路
Step 4 做题步骤
Every year, some poor students can afford to enter colleges. In fact, the problem can be deal with in many ways. The most common way is to get all the money their parents. If their parents can’t to afford the tuition, students can apply for a loan from the bank. There are still another way that students can do some part-time jobs in their spared time to earn some money.
As for me, my parents can pay a greatly part of the tuition for us. So I can put all my hearts into studying. I would like to pay a rest by doing a part-time job and I can know more about society by working.
Step 2 B. 改错套路
Step 5 Homework