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M8 Self-assessment:
Using Authentic Sentences for Creative Writing
Today’s focus
Analyze multiple choice: 21-30题
Writing: About mobile payment
Apply Sentence Patterns in Multiple Choice to Improving Writing!
About multiple choice
I. 三大从句(Clauses):
22. 状语从句
27. 名词性从句+定语从句
II. 倒装(Inversion):
24. as的倒装
25. 强调句+倒装
28. such和so的倒装
III. 情态动词(Modal Verbs)+虚拟(Unreal conditionals):
21. 情态动词虚拟
IV. 词组(Phrases):
23. 动词词组辨析
29. 介词词组
V. 时态(Tense):26
VI. 情景交际(situational communication):30
I. 三大从句(Clauses):
22. 状语从句
27. 名词性从句+定语从句
22. Peace is the foundation of happiness, for _______ there is anxiety, tension and confusion, joy cannot exist.
A. until B. unless C. where D. while
翻译: 平静是快乐的基础,因为有焦虑、紧张和迷惑的地方,快乐就不可能存在。
They knew the result of the game until the last minute.
Unless invited, he won’t come. = If he is not invited, he won’t come. unless= if…not 除非;
Strike while the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。
状语从句:翻译句意,判断连接词的意思。
27. At _______ he thinks is the appropriate moment, he will tell them all _______ he has suffered these days.
when; that B. when; what
C. that; what D. what; that
Tip: 第一空:介宾,he thinks是插入语,其实缺少主语,用what;
第二空:定语从句,all是先行词,代入定语从句,做suffer的宾语,用that或者省略,定语从句不能用what。
V.S. At _______is the appropriate moment, he will tell them_______ he has suffered these days.
名词性从句:根据句意,判断句子所缺成分,that在名词性从句中不做成分!
定语从句:找到先行词,代入定语从句,判断缺什么成分,用相应的关系词,定语从句没有what!
what
what
II. 倒装(Inversion):
24. as的倒装
25. 强调句+倒装
28. so和such的倒装
24. Hard as the fire was _______, the firefighters didn’t withdraw.
controlled B. to be controlled C. controlling D. to control
翻译:尽管大火很难控制,消防队员们并没有撤退。
还原:Though/ Although the fire was hard to control, … 在形容词后面,用主动表示被动。
25. It was not until Eric Cox died that _______ the truth that the ‘ghost’ was none other than their elder brother.
A. the two brothers had told B. had the two brothers told
C. did the two brothers tell D. the two brothers told
as表示“虽然,尽管”,一定要倒装:n. / a./adv./等+as+ 主语+ 谓语。
考查:强调句和倒装。not until放到强调句中,前后都不倒装, 再判断时态,die在tell前发生。
28. _______________on mobile phones for storing information that people are unable to remember basic things.
A. Such is the dependence
B. Such dependence does
C. So they are dependent
D. So do they depend
考点:so和such的倒装结构:
Such is the dependence on… that…
So dependent are they…that…
III. 虚拟(Unreal conditionals):21. 情态动词虚拟
21. — I can’t understand why he _______ so angry. I meant no offence.
— It’s typical of him to be so sensitive.
must have been B. should have been
C. might have been D. can have been
考点:情态动词+虚拟语气(与过去事实相反)
The ground is still wet now. It must have rained last night.
If they had known what was coming next, they might have had second thoughts.
Where can he have put the key?
IV. 词组(Phrases):
23. 动词词组辨析
29. 介词词组
23. They could hardly___________ where the road was in the darkness.
A. make out B. lay out C. figure out D. let out
考点:动词词组辨析
make out 勉强看见,听见;理解,弄清;写出,开列;装作,假装
lay out 布置,设计;铺开,展开
figure out a problem 弄清楚,弄明白
let out a cry 发出一阵叫声
29. Mr. Green stood up ___________ the 16--year--old boy, saying that he was not the one to blame.
A. in preference to B. in parallel with C. in honor of D. in defence of
考点:介词词组辨析:
Do the emotions develop in parallel with the intellect(智力)?
Many of these products were bought in preference to their own.
They erected(建立) a memorial in honor of the martyrs(烈士).
He spoke out in defence of the book.
与…同时
优先于…
向…表达敬意
捍卫…
V. 时态(Tense):26
26. The students have decided on a final date by which everyone _______ reading the books assigned by their professor.
finishes B. will have finished
C. have finished D. finished
考点:时态:by/ by the end of+一段时间,与完成时态连用。
By the end of next year, my vocabulary ______________(grow) to 4,000 words.
will have grown
VI. 情景交际(situational communication): 30
30. — Going to watch the Women’s Volleyball Match on Wednesday?
—_______! Will you go with me?
You bet B. You got me
C. You there D. You know better
考点:考查情景交际用语
You bet. 当然,一定
You got me. 你难住我了。
You there? 你在么?你在哪?
You know better. 你了解地更清楚。
Sentence power
21. —I can’t understand why he should have been so angry. I meant no offence.
—It’s typical of him to be so sensitive.
22. Peace is the foundation of happiness, for where there is anxiety, tension and confusion, joy cannot exist.
23. They could hardly make out where the road was in the darkness.
24. Hard as the fire was to control, the firefighters didn’t withdraw.
25. It was not until Eric Cox died that the two brothers told the truth that the ‘ghost’ was none other than their elder brother.
26. The students have decided on a final date by which everyone will have finished reading the books assigned by their professor.
27. At what he thinks is the appropriate moment, he will tell them all that he has suffered these days.
28. Such is the dependence on mobile phones for storing information that people are unable to remember basic things.
29. Mr. Green stood up in defence of the 16--year--old boy, saying that he was not the one to blame.
30. —Going to watch the Women’s Volleyball Match on Wednesday?
—You bet! Will you go with me?
Sentence power
About multiple choice
I. 三大从句(Clauses):
22. 状语从句
27. 名词性从句+定语从句
II. 倒装(Inversion):
24. as的倒装
25. 强调句+倒装
28. such和so的倒装
III. 情态动词(Modal Verbs)+虚拟(Unreal conditionals):
21. 情态动词虚拟
IV. 词组(Phrases):
23. 动词词组辨析
29. 介词词组
V. 时态(Tense):26
VI. 情景交际(situational communication):30
Make it right.
Write your best!
第七部分:书面表达(共1题,满分25分)
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章
According to internet research company iResearch, the market of mobile payments reached 38 trillion yuan ($5.5 trillion) in 2016, about 50 times the US market which saw $112 billion.
Alipay, the digital wallet run by e-commerce giant Alibaba Group, occupied 54 percent of the Chinese market, and WeChat Wallet owned by Tencent Holdings had 37 percent. Other third-party companies shared the remaining percentage.
"It is troublesome to get lots of exchanges while buying vegetables, especially when dealing with coins, which are uneasy to carry," said a person who likes to use mobile payments.
Another mobile payment user said "the services, either WeChat Wallet or Alipay, will automatically record the trades, like an account book, which helps to know where money has gone every month."
However, Ye Wentian, a researcher at the Ant Financial Business School, reminded users to refrain from scanning QR codes(二维码)from unknown sources, which might be inset with viruses.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 用约120个词就移动支付谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)简要分析移动支付在中国流行的原因(至少两点)
(2)应该采取哪些措施来提高移动支付的安全性?
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
Structure Review
Summary:
30 words or so
2 sentences
To the point
No mistakes in spelling, phrase usage, sentence structure and also punctuation.
Reasons/ Analysis: TS+SS
Topic Sentence+ Supporting Sentences (Firstly,… Secondly,… Thirdly,…)
Your opinion: TS+SS
Topic Sentence: In my opinion/view,…
From my point of view/ From where I stand/ From my perspective/ angle,…
As for me/ As far as I am concerned,…
Personally, …
Supporting Sentences: First and foremost/ To begin/To start with, …Moreover,… Furthermore, …Besides,… In addition,… What’s more,…; However/Nevertheless,…
Conclusion: PS+P
Passage Summary (1 sentence)+ Powerful appeal(1 sentence)
第七部分:书面表达(共1题,满分25分)
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章
According to internet research company iResearch, the market of mobile payments reached 38 trillion yuan ($5.5 trillion) in 2016, about 50 times the US market which saw $112 billion.
Alipay, the digital wallet run by e-commerce giant Alibaba Group, occupied 54 percent of the Chinese market, and WeChat Wallet owned by Tencent Holdings had 37 percent. Other third-party companies shared the remaining percentage.
"It is troublesome to get lots of exchanges while buying vegetables, especially when dealing with coins, which are uneasy to carry," said a person who likes to use mobile payments.
Another mobile payment user said "the services, either WeChat Wallet or Alipay, will automatically record the trades, like an account book, which helps to know where money has gone every month."
However, Ye Wentian, a researcher at the Ant Financial Business School, reminded users to refrain from scanning QR codes(二维码)from unknown sources, which might be inset with viruses.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 用约120个词就移动支付谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)简要分析移动支付在中国流行的原因(至少两点)
(2)应该采取哪些措施来提高移动支付的安全性?
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
What: Market development of mobile payment
Why: For its conveniences in daily life
Concern: its potential risks/dangers in financial security
Where: In Chinese market
Who: Chinese people
30-word Summary
Key words:
Para1-2: What Where Who
What: Market development of mobile payment
Where: In Chinese market
Who: Chinese people
Para3-4: Why
Why: For its conveniences
Para5: Concern
Concern: its potential risks/dangers in financial security
Nowadays, mobile payment is enjoying rapid development in China, which brings Chinese people various conveniences in their daily life. However, it also has a potential risk in financial security.
Reasons/ Analysis: TS+SS
Topic Sentence+ Supporting Sentences (Firstly,… Secondly,… Thirdly,…)
Your opinion: TS+SS
Topic Sentence: In my opinion/view,…
From my point of view/ From where I stand/ From my perspective/ angle,…
As for me/ As far as I am concerned,…
Personally, …
Supporting Sentences: First and foremost/ To begin/To start with, …Moreover,… Furthermore, …Besides,… In addition,… What’s more,…; However/Nevertheless,…
Conclusion: PS+P
Passage Summary (1 sentence)+ Powerful appealing(1 sentence)
Write meaningful and authentic sentences!
Body + Conclusion
About multiple choice
I. 三大从句(Clauses):
22. 状语从句
27. 名词性从句+定语从句
II. 倒装(Inversion):
24. as的倒装
25. 强调句+倒装
28. such和so的倒装
III. 情态动词(Modal Verbs)+虚拟(Unreal conditionals):
21. 情态动词虚拟
IV. 词组(Phrases):
23. 动词词组辨析
29. 介词词组
V. 时态(Tense):26
VI. 情景交际(situational communication):30
Learning from your peers will make you EARN.
Group activity
5 in a group;
Choose 1 article of your group;
Rewrite your article using sentence patterns on the right!
Roles:
Presenter: Present your group’s work; Recorder: Record the improvement of sentences
Encourager: Encourage other sentence patterns
Questioner: Raise doubt about the new sentences
Paraphraser: Think about other phrases to express the same idea
Time: 8-10min
I. 三大从句(Clauses):
22. 状语从句
27. 名词性从句+定语从句
II. 倒装(Inversion):
24. as的倒装
25. 强调句+倒装
28. such和so的倒装
III. 情态动词(Modal Verbs)+虚拟(Unreal conditionals):
21. 情态动词虚拟
IV. 词组(Phrases):
23. 动词词组辨析
29. 介词词组
Presentation
Sample
Nowadays, mobile payment is enjoying rapid development in China, which brings Chinese people various conveniences in their daily life. However, it also has a potential risk in financial security.
Several factors contribute to the popularity of mobile payment. First, compared with traditional payment, it frees people from exchanging money or carrying too much cash. Besides, the increasing coverage of mobile phone in China makes mobile payment accessible to more citizens. Last but not least, a variety of mobile payment services add to its attraction to a large extent.
Nevertheless, to ensure financial security, both individuals and the service providers should do their part. As for users, basic precautions are recommended. They may as well update their operating system on a regular basis and install protective apps in advance. As for service providers, they are expected to shoulder the responsibility of coming up with new ways to exploit mobile security holes.
All factors taken into consideration, we should take an objective attitude to mobile payment. Only when we make the most of its advantages can we lead a more convenient life!
Homework:
Polish up your writing with these sentence patterns.
Thank You!