Unit 1 building the future Task(1) 课件（38张PPT）

(共38张PPT)




Polish up your writing
---Transform your essay from good to great
Jerry


2019

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1. To learn about the essential factors contributing to a high quality composition
2. To be able to polish up a composition using the skills you have learnt


I say I rule the world
Don't cloud my vision
I'm telling you not today
Cause I'm seeing straight
made my decision
I made it through the shades of grey
Made it my own ring
I materialize the feeling
To carry on, to carry on
I will always say I'm dreaming
I carry on, I carry on
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
Ain't afraid of the walls, I'mma break them down
They say the same. Well, I feel it high as a bird
Ain't afraid of the ground, I'mma stand up
I say yeah, yeah, yeah. They say no, no, no
They say slow, slow, slow. I say go, go, go
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
I've changed illusion
Then I watch it fade to black
Throwing me off track
Found evolution
Found it in a simply fact
I ain't coming back
I materialize the feeling
To carry on, to carry on
I will always say I'm dreaming
I carry on, I carry on
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
Ain't afraid of the walls, I'mma break them down
They say the same. Well, I feel it high as a bird
Ain't afraid of the ground, I'mma stand up
I say yeah, yeah, yeah. They say no, no, no
They say slow, slow, slow. I say go, go, go
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
Ain't afraid of the walls, I'mma break them down
They say the same. Well, I feel it high as a bird
Ain't afraid of the ground, I'mma stand up
I say yeah, yeah, yeah. They say no, no, no
They say slow, slow, slow. I say go, go, go
They saved a whale. I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
I say I rule the world
Learning goals:
Success will always favor / bless / embrace those with strong determination but fails those who lack it.
What makes a charming person ?
wonderful appearance
intelligent
capable
gentle
...


a man of high quality

Those with bad appearance will never have the chance to reveal their capability
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Teachers always have preference for neat and wonderful handwriting









structure
content
language
three &four parts
topic sentence

all points covered
What makes a good writing
words
phrases
sentences
A good writing
Step 1 Diversify your vocabulary
Students in our class are excellent.
outstanding/impressive/exceptional/excelling/wonderful/incredible/marvelous/awesome/fantastic/amazing
/superb/admirable/unparalleled/incomparable/have no equal/have no parallel


variation:
In their opinion, to cultivate children's independence is far more important than a good fortune.

Example :
significant/essential/vital/crucial/beneficial be of significance
The importance of cultivating children’s independence can never be ignored.

neglected /overlooked/ underestimated
variation:
We need to wake up to the urgency to address this issue more than ever before.
We need to realize the importance to deal with this problem more than ever before.

be aware of ; be conscious of; be awake to ; wake up to



address; cope with
Example:
variation:
面对巨大的学业压力，学生往往会利用体育课来补作业(2019南京盐城一模)

faced with
confronted with
facing
in face of
take advantage of
make use of
make the best of
make the most of

make up for
catch up on

Confronted with heavy pressure , students feel they might as well take advantage of PE lessons to catch up on their unfinished homework.



Exercise :
variation:
The picture vividly shows a common phenomenon that people tend to keep a distance from others even if they want to do sth simple ,avoid chatting and eye-catching (2019苏锡常镇一模)

The picture vividly_________ a common phenomenon that people tend to keep a distance from others even if they want to do sth simple ,avoid chatting and eye-catching .

mirrors/demonstrates
For those with special needs ,such as the blind ,audio books can be a good innovation (2019南京模拟)

For those with special needs ,such as the blind ,audio books can be a __________innovation .
variation:
Exercise :
fantastic
Parents who set too high expectations may have a negative effect on children's growth and health.(2019南通二模)

Parents who set________ high expectations may_________ a negative effect on children's growth and health.
variation:
Exercise :
excessively
exert
Game time: Introduce your hobby

Introduce your hobby using some phrases . Avoid using verbal
phrase mentioned by others.
Eg: I like music
be keen on be crazy about
be drunk with be mad about
be hooked on be addicted to
be enthusiastic about& have a great enthusiasm/ passion for

From my perspective, parents should spare no effort to understand their children.
From my perspective, parents should spare no effort to____________________ their children
variation:
Phrases come first
gain a true insight to
Parents should _______________________________ (谚语)
put themselves in other’s shoes
Now students are always buried in so much homework that they usually have no time to exercise, which contributes to obesity. (2019南京盐城一模)

___________________students are always buried in so much homework that they usually can’t __________ time to exercise, which ______________ obesity.
variation:
Phrases come first
Nowadays / currently
spare
gives rise to
On-line voting becomes more and more popular , and many competitions have people take part in it . (2016江苏卷作文）

variation:
Phrases come first
On-line voting ___________ , and many competitions ______________ .
becomes increasingly popular / enjoys its popularity / enjoys its currency
get people involved in it
We should always remember that in order to promote Chinese culture globally , we still have a long way to go .

We should always ____________ that in order to promote Chinese culture globally , we still have a long way to go .

variation:
Phrases come first
bear/ keep in mind
variation:
Phrases come first
Despite the fact that Chinese students can have better academic performance than others ,Chinese education is a typical exam-oriented education in which students are burdened with piles of homework

Despite the fact that Chinese style can give students ___________others in academic performance than others ,Chinese education is a typical exam-oriented education in which students are burdened with piles of homework
an edge over
Chinese students are _____________to students in other countries in academic performance
superior
Variation of sentences
variation:
Advanced sentence structures
1.Clauses (noun clauses, attributive clauses, adverbial clauses)
2.Non-finite verbs(to do, doing, done )
3.“It” sentences(cleft sentences)
4.Inverted sentences
5.Subjunctive mood
6.Special sentence patterns
In fact ,trafic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order and without those regulations people couldn't enjoy harmonious and peaceful environment.
Variation of sentences

In fact ,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order ,without which people couldn't enjoy harmonious and peaceful environment.
Tips :attributive clause
variation:

Only when we view these behaviors as a normal phenomenon can we truly embrace a multicultural society where every individual lives in harmony with others .
When we view these behaviors as a normal phenomenon， we can truly embrace a multicultural society where every individual lives in harmony with others .

Tips :Inversion
Variation of sentences
variation:
Though it may be convenient to employ robots , they may take over the jobs now done by humans ,resulting in many people losing their jobs .
Variation of sentences

Convenient as it may be to employ robots , they may take over the jobs now done by humans ,resulting in many people losing their jobs
as /though

variation:
这种现象如果不及时处理，会引发严重的社会问题
This phenomenon ,if not dealt with in time ,will eventually give rise to some serious social problems.
Variation of sentences
Tips : Non-finite verbs
variation:

如果没有父母恰当的指导，孩子可能会偏离正确的道路。


But for parents’ proper instructions, children might
depart from the right path.
Without parents‘ proper instructions ,children might depart from the right path .



Subjunctive mood
Variation of sentences
variation:

Under the Belt and Road ,concrete projects and measures should be taken to be consistent with local demands to accelerate economic development

Top priority should be given to issue some precisely-targeted laws and regulations tailored for the development of rural regions
passive voice
Appreciating the sentences
variation:



Explicitly illustrated above is a phenomenon that ...
... will eventually give rise to ...
It is universally acknowledged that ...
it largely depends on ...
Excellent education of parents will definitely help shape their kids good personalities
Before long, many of these would undoubtedly end up in...

Appreciating the sentences

Stept 2:Practice and Presentation
Polish up the sentences using the skills you have learned.
An increasing number of overseas universities take Gaokao scores into consideration for new admission, including the university of Cambridge, which indicates that Chinese Gaokao receives more recognition globally.
原句呈现：A lot of overseas universities consider admitting more Chinese students by Gaokao, one of the examples is the Cambridge. That shows Gaokao is popular around the world.
原句呈现：In my opinion, I am for the attempt.
From my perspective, I applaud the practice/trend.
From where I stand, I strongly back up the trend.

原句呈现：From this phenomenon, we know that Chinese education is becoming stronger mainly because many good teachers contribute to it.
This phenomenon reveals that high-quality Chinese education is being acknowledged by the world, resulting from numerous diligent and ambitious teachers and educational workers in China.
With the development of domestic education, more emphases have been laid on students’ critical thinking along with their innovation.
原句呈现：Chinese education develops so fast that it pays much attention to students’ critical thinking and creativity.
Outstanding academic performance and good comprehensive abilities of Chinese students are another main factors that attract overseas universities.
原句呈现： Chinese students are good at study and have improved their abilities. All of these are reasons why overseas universities want to admit them.
原句呈现： We need to take action to improve the global recognition of Gaokao.
In order for Gaokao to be acknowledged by the world better, feasible measures are needed to improve it.
To earn more recognition and appreciation globally, precisely-targeted measures should be taken.
Assessment and evaluation measures of Gaokao are supposed to undergo overall reform to better meet the needs of contemporary society.
原句呈现：We ‘d better change Gaokao assessment and evaluation measures to meet the needs of our society.
The government should better the exam-oriented education system, providing multiple selections for students who therefore can choose their subjects based on their interest.
原句呈现： The government should change the present education system and provide more choices for students, so they can choose their favorite subjects.
Following many other overseas universities, Cambridge will accept Gaokao test scores for the admission of new students. Applicants must enter top 0.1% in their province in order to be successful.
Personally, I applaud the attempt. Firstly, it will bring convenience t0 those planning to study abroad. More importantly, the acceptance is also a sign of our country's education being recognized internationally. After all, educational interaction between nations can benefit human progress.
In order for Gaokao to be better received globally many efforts need to be made. To begin with, students' abilities instead of dead knowledge ought to be the main testing content. Knowledge only remembered but not applied is useless. Secondly, the test should provide multiple selections for students, who therefore can choose their favorite subjects based on their personal strengths and weaknesses. To conclude, only when Gaokao is assessing a taker's real competence can it be acknowledged by all concerned.

苏锡常镇二模范文
I say I rule the world
我说我征服整个世界
Ain't afraid of the walls, I'mma break them down
不要畏惧壁障 我会将其摧毁
I made it through the shades of grey
越过那灰色的阴霾
Made it my own ring
主宰自我的王国
I materialize the feeling
掌管自己的情绪
To carry on, to carry on
继续向前 勇往直前
Appreciate: