Unit 3 protecting ourselves Grammar and usage： The development of a text 课件（30张PPT）

(共31张PPT)
How
to better your writing
better
假设你是李华，下周日是你校外教辛迪（Cindy）的生日。你班
同学决定为她举办生日聚会。请你用英语给她写一封邮件。
内容包括 1 写信目的 2 活动内容 3表示祝福
注意： 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 100字左右。

Dear Cindy,
We know your birthday is next Sunday. Our classmates
decide to hold a birthday party for you.
On that day ,we can go to Quandu Hotel to have the party.
The hotel is not far from our school. About 10 classmates and 4
teachers will take part in it. At the party, we can dance and sing.
We can play games. We have prepared some small gifts for you.
In the end, we hope you’ll have a happy birthday.
Yours,
Li Hua

Dear Cindy,
We are happy to know your birthday is next Sunday. Our
classmates decide to hold a birthday party for you. Here is
some detailed information.
On that day ,we can go to Quandu Hotel to have the party,
which is not far from our school. About 10 classmates and
4 teachers will take part in it. At the party, we will make a short
speech, thanking you for your hard work. And then we will
have dinner, followed by dancing , singing and playing games.
We have also prepared some small gifts for you.
In the end, we hope you’ll have a happy birthday.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.Help the students to learn to use some techniques to better their compositions.
2.Make the students aware that appearance is not so important
and that they should pay attention
to health.
Aims :
Round 1


Part 1----- sentence
My uncle liked cooking and could make tasty dishes. I thought of it suddenly.
My uncle was interested in cooking
and could make tasty dishes. I
thought of it suddenly.
liked
My uncle showed much interest in
cooking and could make good
dishes. I thought of it suddenly.
No.1


She took a lot of weight-loss pills.
Her parents were worried .
No.2


Inner quality determines true
beauty, not appearance.
No.3


Exercising regularly can help us lose
weight. And it can help us reduce
stress.
No.4


I’m Bob and I’m Principal(负责人) of the fitness centre.
No.5


Skipping meals is bad for health. You are unwise if you skip meals .


Round 2

Part 2----- paragraph
When we have difficulties, we shouldn’t give up. We can turn to our parents and teachers . They can help us find good ways. We can deal with difficulties.
When we are faced with difficulties, never should we give up. Instead, we can ask our teachers and parents for help, who are more mature and have more experience. So they can help us find good ways, in which we can deal with the difficulties.
So
Instead,
Amy is one of my cousins. She is slim
and beautiful now. She was overweight
in the past. She did many things to lose
weight. She succeeded at last.
假定你是李华，听说你的美国笔友Lily 最近在通过节食来减肥。请根据所给提示用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
节食对健康的危害
就如何节食给她提几点建议。
Dear Lily,
I learned that you want to lose weight. You are on a diet.
I think it is bad for your health. If you don’t eat, you will feel uncomfortable. You will be ill. I think you can do exercise every day. You can eat more vegetables and fruits. You should eat less meat.
I hope you can lose weight successfully.
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 3 ----passage
Summary:

从句 (定语从句,状语从句,同位语从句)
非谓语 不同句型
强调 同位语
多样短语 倒装句
连接词 虚拟语气
词性活用 被动语态
此外 注意开头结尾及内部衔接和整洁的书写。
Homework:
Try to use techniques you’ve learned today.
假如你是在英国学习的交换生李华，住在同学 Peter家里。你上周网购的联想（Lenovo）笔记本电脑于本周日到货，但你因陪同父母到伦敦游览不能按时返回取货，请你给Peter写一封电子邮件，让他帮忙代收验货。注意：1 词数100左右；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。