Unit 3 the secret of success Project(1) Writing and making a speech 课件（24张PPT）

(共24张PPT)
How to polish up your writing
---- Language
Compare these two paragraphs
and tell the reasons why one is
better than the other.
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many
ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives
will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They
show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short
messages too and it is becoming very popular.

Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays
in various ways. Usually, a party is held where best
friends as well as relatives can get together and have
fun. They usually buy a small gift with which to
express their best wishes. Sometimes, people send
short messages too, which is becoming very popular.

Vocabulary
Sentence patterns
Transitional words
vocabulary
Small words
Advanced words
Phrases
1.At dusk, many people, especially the elderly, are fond of having
a walk outdoors.

Dusk often_____ many people,
especially the elderly, taking a
walk outdoors.

sees

At the _____of his death, she went
pale with sorrow.

2.When she heard he had died,
she went pale with sorrow.

news
3.The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.

The bus stopped ___________
the traffic light turned red.

the minute
4.One day, they were
going home by bike.
One day, they were
_________home by bike.
heading
Small words have great effect
in improving the writing
1.We offer hot water 24 hours
every day and the swimming
pool is free to use at any time.

Hot water is ________24 hours
every day and you can have free
______to the swimming pool at
any time.

available
access
2. My mind went blank and my heart was full of anger.
My mind went blank and
my heart _______with anger.
swelled
3. Young people don’t want to watch TV, so they pay attention to other forms of entertainment.
Young people ______their attention on other forms of entertainment instead of ________ themselves in TV.
focus
invoving
Advanced vocabulary is the
Guarantee of improvement.
1.You can find my house easily.
You’ll __________________
finding my house.

have no trouble/difficulty
We all __________________
independence.
attach greater importance to
2. We all think that independence
is more important.

We all think that independence
is___________________.

of greater importance
3. Don’t worry . We’ll try to help you.
make every effort to
make great efforts to
spare no efforts to
try every means to
do all we can to
do what we can to
do our utmost to
do everything possible to
Phrases are priority in
improving the writing
Sentence patterns


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with复合宾语

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强调句型






Only by using various sentence patterns can we greatly improve our writing.

Various Sentence Patterns
Polish a short passage
according to what we
have learned in class

An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. School was over. Li Hua and Wang Lin were going home from school by bike. They were talking and laughing happily. When they saw a bus which was passing by, they started to ride after it. They thought it was very interesting. The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. The two students were very close to the bus and they couldn’t stop their bikes in time. They fell off the bikes. Li Hua broke his left arm and Wang Lin hurt his leg.


An accident occurred to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. After school was over, Li Hua and Wang Lin were heading home by bike, talking and laughing happily. Seeing a passing bus, they started to chase it, thinking it was great fun. Unfortunately, the bus stopped the minute the traffic light turned red. So close were the two students to the bus that they were not able to stop their bikes in time. As a result, they were knocked off the bikes, one with his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt.

Thank You!