(共25张PPT)
From reading to writing
Recipe for success
success
Who is successful?
What is success?
What leads to success?
How can I achieve success?
warming up
Who do you think is successful in your life? Why?
warming up
Success means differently to people from various backgrounds.
Who is successful and influential in our world? Why?
A successful person should be one who not only lives his or her dream but also benefits the world.
Warming up
What is success?
成功是什么?
To laugh often and love much;
笑口常开,爱心永在,
To win the respect of intelligent people
赢得智者的尊重,
And the affection of children;
孩子们的爱戴;
To earn the approbation of honest critics
博得真诚的认可,
And endure the betrayal of false friends;
容忍损友的背叛;
To appreciate beauty;
欣赏美好的东西,
To find the best in others;
发现别人的可爱。
To give oneself;
学会无私地奉献,
To leave the world a little better,
给世界增添光彩:
Whether by a healthy child,
要么培育出健康的孩子,
A garden patch,
要么留下花园一块,
Or a redeemed social condition;
亦或是改善社会条件;
To have played and laughed with
enthusiasm
尽情娱乐、笑得畅快,
And sung with exultation;
把欢乐的歌唱起来;
To know even one life has breathed easier,
甚至知道一个生命活得自在,
Because you have lived...
因为你的一路走来……
This is to have succeeded.
这就是成功的内涵。
WHAT IS SUCCESS ?
Ralph Waldo Emerson
reading: skimming
Qualities
Reasons
Be optimistic
Have motivation
Do and think about things in new ways
Read about successful people
Practise
Be honest
Qualities
Reasons
Be optimistic
Have motivation
Do and think about things in new ways
Read about successful people
Practise
Be honest
…
When you’re __________to succeed, you are ________ enough to work towards your goal.
…
These stories get you _________.
Pratice boosts your ____________ and others’ ____________ in you.
…
desperate
motivated
inspired
confidence
faith/ belief
reading: scanning
critical thinking
What other qualities are also important?
passion
work
focus
persist
ideas
good
push
serve
courage;
self-confidence; ambition;
devotion; flexibility; discipline;
reliability;
determination
dedication
gentility
intellectual curiosity
TED 8 secrets of success
sentence building
Create a sentence about the quality you think the most important with the following structures:
In order to succeed, it is almost compulsory that you (should) …
… is not optional—it is another way to succeed.
Another quality that helps people to succeed is…
To become successful, you may find it important to…
… is just as important if you want to succeed.
IELTS assessment criteria (band 7)
Task achievement: cover the requirements of the task.
Coherence and cohesion: logically organize
information and use a range of cohesive devices
appropriately.
3. Lexical resource: use a sufficient range of vocabulary
to allow some flexibility and precision.
Grammatical range and accuracy: use a variety of
complex structures and have a good control of
grammar and punctuation.
paragraph building
I have many hobbies. Movies, for example, are my favorite and I am also fond of playing basketball and football. Sometimes when staying with my friends, I’d prefer singing and dancing rather than any other way of amusement.
I have many hobbies. For example, I like movies, I like playing basketball and football, and I like singing and dancing.
lexical diversity
grammatical diversity
coherence and cohesion
paragraph building
paragraph building
Which 2 qualities do you think are crucial to succeed? Why?
In my opinion, some qualities are not optional to achieve success. Firstly, it is compulsory for us to have self-discipline, one quality that enables us to make the best of our time and energy, ensuring us a good chance to succeed. Besides, to become successful, we may find it essential to do and think creatively. It is by thinking innovatively that we are more likely to hit on marvelous ideas which matter a lot in this fast-paced society.
One possible version:
lexical diversity
grammatical diversity
coherence and cohesion
What is your specific resolution to succeed in learning English?
To achieve success in my English study, I plan to go through the vocabulary consistently by memorizing them every day, which I believe will definitely lay a solid foundation. Furthermore, reading comprehensively, scheduled at night, is part of my daily routine. In my opinion, reading passages
covering a wide range of topics not only broadens our horizons but also enhances our reading strategies. What’s more, reflection plays an important role in learning process. By reflecting on the reason why we made mistakes, we tend to figure out innovative ways.
paragraph building
One possible version:
grammatical diversity
lexical diversity
coherence and cohesion
summary
Explore the meaning of success.
Search for recipes for success.
Reflect on how we plan to learn English well.
Know the writing strategies well.
summary
If you want a thing bad enough
To go out and fight for it,
Work day and night for it,
Give up your time and your peace and your
sleep for it
If only desire of it
Makes you quite mad enough
Never to tire of it,
Makes you hold all other things tawdry and
cheap for it.
If life seems all empty and useless without it
And all that you scheme and you dream is
about it,
If gladly you'll sweat for it,
Fret for it,
Plan for it,
Lose all your terror of God or man for it,
If you'll simply go after that thing that you
want.
With all your capacity,
Strength and sagacity,
Faith, hope and confidence, stern pertinacity,
If neither cold, poverty, famished and gaunt,
Nor sickness nor pain
Of body or brain
Can turn you away from the thing that you
want,
If dogged and grim you besiege and beset it,
You'll get it!
如果你对某种东西极度渴望,加倍努力为此奋斗,没日没夜为此劳碌,放弃娱乐、放弃睡眠、放弃舒适一切渴望皆系于此,它的存在让其他一切变得俗艳和廉价.没有它生命对你而言只剩苍白和空洞,你所有的计划都为它而设,所有的美梦都为它而做,所有的汗水都为它而流,所有的烦恼都为它而生.为了它,你不再对人类和上帝畏惧,只用尽你的能力、智慧与才华全身心为此一搏.如果寒冷、贫穷、饥饿与憔悴都不能使你屈服,疾病、疼痛、身体和心灵的双重折磨亦不能使你放弃,你不屈不挠,勇往直前,那么最后的最后,它定是你的囊中之物
Success
By Berton Braley
homework
Polish up what you have written.
Learn the new vocabulary by heart.
Article building
2. Coherence and cohesion: logically organize
information and use a range of cohesive devices
appropriately.
first of all, in the first place, to begin with, currently, at present …
besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, similarly, in the same way …
however, whereas, while, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand …
Article building
IELTS assessment criteria (band 7)
3. Lexical resource: use a sufficient range of vocabulary
to allow some flexibility and precision.
good, kind, wise, nice, clever, great, bright, I think …
ambitious, tactful, eloquent, charismatic,
committed, I argue, I assert …
paragraph building
IELTS assessment criteria (band 7)
Task achievement: cover the requirements of the task.
Coherence and cohesion: logically organize
information and use a range of cohesive devices
appropriately.
3. Lexical resource: use a sufficient range of vocabulary
to allow some flexibility and precision.
Grammatical range and accuracy: use a variety of
complex structures and have a good control of
grammar and punctuation.
I have many hobbies. Movies, for example, are my favorite and I am also fond of playing basketball and football. Sometimes when staying with my friends, I’d prefer singing and dancing rather than any other way of amusement.
Article building
I have many hobbies. For example, I like movies, I like playing basketball and football, and I like singing and dancing.
lexical diversity
grammatical diversity
coherence and cohesion
Article building
IELTS assessment criteria (band 7)
Grammatical range and accuracy: use a variety of
complex structures and have a good control of
grammar and punctuation.
I have many hobbies. For example, I like movies, I like playing basketball and football, and I like singing and dancing.
I have many hobbies. Movies, for example, are my favorite and I am also fond of playing basketball and football. Sometimes when staying with my friends, I’d prefer singing and dancing rather than any other way of amusement.
It is necessary for us to be able to think creatively. Ideas
are very important in this fast-paced society.
If we can think in a creative way, we are more likely to hit on good ideas. They will make us have more access to success.
Paragraph building
Which quality do you think is crucial to succeed? Why?
matter a lot
In my opinion
By thinking
innovatively
marvelous ideas
, which
expose us to
What is your specific resolution to succeed in learning English?
To achieve success in my English study, I plan to go through the vocabulary day after day by reading in the morning and evening because I believe it will definitely lay a solid foundation. Besides, reading comprehensively, which I schedule at night, is part of my daily routine. In my opinion, reading passages
that cover various topics not only broadens our horizons but also enhances our reading strategies. What’s more, reflection plays an important role in learning process. By reflecting on the reason why we made mistakes, we tend to come across innovative ways.
Paragraph building
consistently
, which I believe will
sh
scheduled
covering
crucial
a wide range of topics
Only by reflecting on the reason why we
made mistakes can we come across innovative ways.