(共19张PPT)
名称:How to correct a composition
版本:人教版
How to correct a composition
短文改错
过去5年高考短文改错题考点分布情况
考查内容
时间 动词 名词 冠词 连词 介词 代词 形容 副词
2019 4 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
2018 3 2 1 1 1 1 0 1
2017 1 1 1 3 1 1 1 0
2016 4 1 0 1 2 1 0 0
2015 1 2 0 3 1 0 1 1
上表显示,近三年全国课标 I卷短文改错高频考点为名词单复数、连词、冠词、介词、形容词和副词、动词时态和代词。
从表中我们可以看出18与19年考查基本一致,连续3年时态语义都是一题,15和16考查了and和or的用法。
大家切记这个规律:改错10处中8处是单词改,1处增词,1处删词。
the keys to correcting a composition :
verbs, nouns, article, conjunction, preposition, pronouns, adjective, adverb
NMET2018 The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. _____ NMET2018 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.
一. 名词和冠词
NMET2017 A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.? ____
NMET2017 Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.?
exercises:
air
parents
the
∧
the
NMET2019:We must found ways to protect your environment . ____
NMET’2018:When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there . ____
NMET’2017 :Unfortunately, with the development of industrialization, it has been polluted the environment.? ______
find
____
————
thought
二.动词
NMET2019: ?My uncle says that he never dreams of become rich in the short period of time.
NMET 2019: After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. .
NMET 2018: Some people even had to waiting outside, My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.?
三. 非谓语动词
becoming
looking
wait
四.介词
2019: One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parents. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window.?
2019: ?Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.?
in
with
NMET 2019 : ?Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.?
NMET 2018 : ?Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ”?
serious
五. 形容词和副词
terribly
NMET2019: There the air is clean or the mountains are green. .
NMET2019: ?Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.?
NMET 2018: The more friends we have, the more we can learn for? one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.?
NMET 2018 : Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .
and
and
六. 连词
and
\
but
\
David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.
When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.
(3) We climb everywhere, not only in America. They have been to Europe many times.
(4) And I can’t forget the good food you cooked for I.
(5) I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.
\
∧
his
—
We
it
\
—
me
\
both
七.代词
\
2019:In the cafe, customers will enjoy?themselves in the historical environment?what?is created for them.?
—
which/that
2018:They also had a small pond which they raised fish.
—
In which /where
八.引导词
小结:
动词形,名词数,
还要注意形和副;
冠词连词常光顾,
非谓语,细辨别,
习惯用法要牢记,
前后一致心要细,
句子成分多分析。
短文改错口诀
!!!2018年全国高考卷Ⅰ
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip. I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
∧
—
—
—
—
—
—
—
﹨
—
1.the 2.found 3.other 4.there 5.chickens
6.where 7.happy 8.selling 9.for 10.and
\
\
!! 2019年全国高考卷Ⅰ改错
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
﹨
—
∧
—
—
—
—
—
—
—
1. interesting改为interested,对...感兴趣的,过去分词做形容词。
2. where改为when,when引导定语从句学生one afternoon。
3. football前加a。
4. but改为and, 这里不是转折关系。
5. hardly改为hard,hard即是形容词也是副词;hardly作副词是“几乎不”的意思。
6. To everyone's surprise,To everyone's 后明显是名词。
7. player改为players, All修饰可数名词,要用复数。
8. say,改为saying,现在分词作状语。
9. now改为then 从那时起,不是“从现在起”。
10. my去掉,play football。
Practice make? perfect. 熟能生巧
makes