Module 4 Life in the future 写作课件：What will life be like in the future?（共11张PPT）

(共11张PPT)
Module4 Writing
What will life be like in the future?
如何写好以“未来的生活”为话题的文章
本模块的话题时谈论“Life in the future（未来生活）”，此类文章常用到一般将来时： “主语+will+动词原形...”和”There will be +主语...”, 在描述未来的生活时，除了要用一般将来时的句式之外，还要注意发挥你的想象力，运用一定的技巧来写作。现在，就让我们一起结合实际来看看此类文章的写作技巧吧！

随着科学技术的进步，现在，人们的生活正发生着翻天覆地的变化，20年后，人们的生活会是什么样子？请你根据以下提示写一篇文章“Life in twenty years` time”
写作案例
提示：1.人们旅游不再开小汽车或者乘公交车、火车，而是做自己的小飞机。
2.机器人帮忙干家务活和一些繁重的活，人们有了更多的空闲时间。
3.将不再有学校，学生们通过网络在家学习，学习时间缩短，可以干
自己喜欢的事。
下笔前考虑几个问题：
1.人称
2. 时态

3.文章结构



第一人称；第三人称

一般将来时

beginning
body
ending
Step 1 审题:
一、注意选择合适的句型

1....won`t ...any more...
2....will/won`t... because/so/but...
3.It will be cheap...
4.There will/won`t be...
5.I`m sure/think...
6....not only... but also...
7. 句子 and 句子
二、注意添加细节以及运用丰富的句型结构

机器人帮忙干家务活和一些繁重的活，人们有了更多的空闲时间。
In the future,there will be many robots. They can do not only the housework but also some heavy and difficult jobs. So people will have a lot of free time and they can enjoy themselves.

思路点拨

1.What will life be like in twenty years` time? Here are my ideas.
2.Life in twenty years` time will be different from life today .Here are my
ideas.
3.Life in twenty years` time will change a lot. Here are my ideas.

1.People won`t travel by... or... any more.Every family will
have a small plane. It will be cheap to travel ...
2.There will be a lot of machines and robots in the future.
They will help us do the housework and heavy and difficult work.
People will have much free time to enjoy themselves.
3.We students will study at home by Internet because there won`t be any
schools in the future. Working hours will be short ,so we can do things...
.. 1.I think/I`m sure life in the future will be wnderful.I`m looking
forward to it.
we will have a happy life

引起下文

详细描述未来生活

感受，评价

Life in twenty years` time
Life in twenty years` time will be different from life today .Here are my ideas.
?People won`t travel by car, by bus or by train any more.Every family will have a small plane. It will be cheap to travel everywhere by plane.?There will be a lot of machines and robots in the future.They will help us not only do the housework but also do some heavy and difficult work.So people will have much free time to enjoy themselves.③We students will study at home by Internet because there won`t be anyschools in the future. Working hours will be short ,so we can do things they like.
I think/I`m sure life in the future will be wnderful.I`m looking forward to it.
we will have a happy life
写作案例
小试身手

未来我们的生活将会是什么样子？根据下面的提示，以“Life in the Future”为题，写一篇70词左右的作文。
提示：1.机器人会帮助人们做家务，跟人们交谈。
2.夏天很热，人们会生活在海里。
3.小汽车会像飞机一样飞行。
4.人们会有很多时间，会去月球度假。
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。











时态：
一般将来时
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Ending
Body
正文
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（满分15分）
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其他，（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法）酌情加减分（1分）
未来生活总述（2分）


未来生活分述（8分）

作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。（满分15分）
作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分




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Body
正文
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Post-writing
(10 minutes)
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你的感受。 （3分）
引起下文
范文展示

What will life be like in the future ? Here are my ideas.
Life in the future will change a lot.?First,robots will be able to not only help with the housework but also talk to people.They looks like good friends.
?Second,it will be quite hot in summer, so people will live in the sea.It will be fantastic. ③ Third,cars will be able to fly ,just like planes. Maybe there will be traffic jams in the air. ④ Finally,robots will help people do the housework and some heavy work, so people will have more free time. In their free time, people can spend their holiday on the moon. It`s amazing.
I`m sure there wIll be a lot of fun in the future.I`m looking forward to it.
Life in the future will be colourful and interesting.