高中英语 二轮专题 短文改错Proof Reading 指导课件（共25张PPT）

(共25张PPT)
Can we express the followings like this
马马虎虎
人山人海
心花怒放
给你点颜色看看
Horse horse tiger tiger
People moutain people sea
Heart flowers angry open
Give you some color see see
Chinglish
生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。
写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。
How can we do well in proof reading
1.A good knowledge of ———
2.More ———
3.
English
practice
Some skills
Proof Reading
短文改错
Procedures of the lesson
2. 近年新课标I卷改错测试点统计
1. 短文改错设错方式及规范
3. 解读短文改错口诀
4.练习巩固
Have a match！——Find mistakes and correct them.
be strict at sb
be responsible with sb/sth
be in business
have sth on common
have an effect in sb
lose the heart
make a great progress
the war was broke out
the accident was happened
in the hurry
share sth for sb
a pair of shoe
with
for
on
in
on
the
a
was
was
a
with
shoes
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
一、短文改错设错方式及规范
Right or Wrong
增词（missing word）
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
I have offered a scholarship at a university.
been
∧
∧
X
∨
X
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
X
X
X
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
I have got a good news to tell you.
Right or Wrong
删词(unnecessary word)
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
X
X
Right or Wrong
修改(correct)
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic an
dictionary at a shop.
Three weeks ago I bought the electronic
an
dictionary at a shop.
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Right or Wrong
修改的数量(number)
>10个
数量：整篇文章共10错误，从第11
处不算分数。
Attentons：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tips：
错误类型:增词，删词，改词比例为1：1：8.
年度 介 词 动 词 形或容副词词 代 词 名 词 连词 冠 词 关
系
词
2016 （全国卷Ⅰ） 1 2 1 1 1 2 1 1
2015 （全国卷Ⅰ ） 1 3 2 1 1 1 1 0
2014 （全国卷Ⅰ ） 2 1 3 1 1 1 1 0
测试点
二、高考新课标I卷短文改错
测试点统计
What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition
1. 词汇量太少，看不懂．
２.每个单词都看得懂，但不能找出错误．
３.找得出错误，但无法正确改正．
４. 时间不够．
．．．．．．
“改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。
Any rules？
Any skills？
How to correct？
1动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
2非谓语，细辨别，
代词格,要领悟；
三、短文改错口诀
3介词短语常常考,
冠词连词也光顾；
4习惯用法要记牢，
逻辑错误须关注。
请先念一遍“咒语”吧
Three points that you should
pay attention to
1. 标点符号不改
2. 字母大小写不改
3. 词语顺序不改
The method of correcting:3 steps
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find out the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）
3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）
Each group chooses your lucky letter from the word“Reading”，then we will have a competition.
Game time！
Proof R e a d i n g.
e
a
d
R
n
i
g
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
高考再现：2016全国卷
what
choose
taking
and
the
our
knowledge
think
much
代词、副词误用
动词时态
and前、后要一致
连词误用
少冠词
人称代词误用
名词单复数错误
多词
时态错误
形容词误用
What have we learned today
Summary（总结）
7 3 3
7兄弟 3不改 3步骤
Attention
动词,名词；
形容副词；
非谓，代词；
介词短语；连词冠词；
习惯用法；逻辑错误。
7
兄
弟
Attention
三不改
三步骤
标点符号不改
字母大小不改
词语顺序不改
浏览全文，掌握大意
分句阅读，逐行找错
检查核对，攻克难点
Practice makes perfect！
Thank you for
your attention!