人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Women of achievement Reading and writing 课件（共34张PPT）

(共34张PPT)
Book 4 Unit 1
Women of achievement

Why not carry on her work?
(Reading and writing)



Q1:What’s the general idea of the text?

Q2:What’s the main idea of each paragraph?
General idea of the passage:
This reading is about __________and __________ of a famous Chinese doctor-- ___________. She devoted all her life to _______________ for Chinese women and children. Her work encouraged many other women to __________________.
the life
career
Lin Qiaozhi
medical work
become doctors
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
main idea of each paragraph:
The writer wondered what
to study at university.
Lin’s great achievements in
medicine
What made her succeed.
Lin’s influnce on the writer.
Detailed reading:
Brief introduction(简介)：
Q1:When was Lin born and passed away?
Q2:Did she get married? Why?
Main achievements(成就)：
Q3: What made her famous?
Q4：What are her achievements?
Her influnce(影响)：
Q5：Why does the writer choose to study at medical college?
Brief introduction(简介)：

Q1:When was Lin born and passed away?




Q2:Did she get married? Why?
She was born in 1901 and passed away in 1983.
She didn’t get married during her life
because she was devoted to her work.
Hard work
Kindness
Determination
Q3:Can you guess what
made her famous?
Consideration
Good nature
Main achievements(成就)：
Q4:What are the three achievements of Lin Qiaozhi?
specialist
medical

training
babies
She chose to study at medical college
because she wanted to carry on
Lin Qiaozhi’s work.
Reading summary
Describe a person with
great achievements
from three aspects(方面)：
Brief introduction


Achievements


Influnce
Situation 1: what do you think of her?
Situational practice
Situation 2 : Writing task
Step1: 仔细审题
体裁：
时态：
人称：
一般现在时为主
第三人称
说明文（人物介绍）
Writing steps(步骤)
Situation 2 : Writing task
Step2: 谋篇布局
Part 1:

Part 2:

Part 3:
Brief introduction (birth,death,job….)
Achievements
Influnce
Step3: 遣词造句
Part 1
Brief introduction
她年少时
毕业后
After graduation，……

After she graduated from….
Step3: 遣词造句
Part 2
Achievements
①作为一位
as a famous artist
在国内外
at home and abroad
② 在 … … 中起重要作用
play an important part/role in
①＋②→
As a famous artist at home and abroad,
she plays an important part/role in spreading
Chinese culture.


著名的艺术家
Step3: 遣词造句
Part 2 Achievements
③ As a famous artist at home and abroad,
she plays an important part/role in spreading
Chinese culture.
这让越来越多的外国人
It makes more and more foreigners
③ ＋④ →
As a famous artist at home and abroad, she plays an important
part/role in spreading Chinese culture, which makes more and
more foreigners know China better.
更好地了解中国。
know China better.
( have a better understanding of China.)
④
Step3: 遣词造句
be named as
Goodwill Ambassador against AIDS (艾滋病亲善大使)

take part in, social welfare activity(社会公益活动)

Part 2 Achievements
⑤ She was named as Goodwill Ambassador against AIDS.
她经常参加社会公益活动。
⑥ She often takes part in social welfare activities.
She was named as Goodwill Ambassador against AIDS, so she
often takes part in social welfare activities.
⑤ ＋ ⑥→
她被任命为艾滋病亲善大使。
With her help, many patients recover from illnesses and lead a healthy life.
在她的帮助下，许多患者从疾病中康复并过着健康的生活。
Step3: 遣词造句
Part 2 Achievements
It is with her help that many patients recover from illnesses and lead a healthy life.
It is that
Step3: 遣词造句
她有自己的中国梦。


她希望所有儿童能接受良好的教育。
⑦She has her own Chinese dream.
⑧She hopes that all children can receive
a good education.
Part 2 Achievements
⑦ ＋⑧ →
She has her own Chinese dream all
children can receive a good education.

Sentences:
1. 简单句
2. 复合句 （定从、状从、名从）
3. 强调句
4. 现在分词/ 过去分词 （定语、状语）
Step3: 遣词造句（summary）
Step4: 连句成篇
表递进：
besides; also; in addition; moreover; furthermore; what’s more
表原因：
because; as; for; since; because of; due to; owing to; thanks to; as a result of
表结果：
therefore; thus; so; as a result
表转折：
however; but; nevertheless
表结论：
in conclusion; in a word; in brief; to sum up; all in all
表目的：
in order to\so as to; in order that\ so that; in case
Show time!!!
Read and fill in the blanks
Peng Liyuan was born in Shandong

province in 1962. _______ a girl, she studied hard

and _________(graduate) from China

Conservatory of Music.
As
graduated
Read and fill in the blanks
She has made great contributions ___ the development of
China. Firstly, as a famous artist at home and abroad, she
_____(play) an important role in _________(spread) Chinese
culture, ______ makes more and more foreigners have a better
Understanding of China. __________, she was named ________
Goodwill Ambassador against AIDS, ____ she often takes part
in social welfare activities. It is with her help ________ many
patients recover ______ illnesses and lead ____ healthy life.
Finally, she attaches importance to education. She has her
own Chinese dream ______ all children can receive a good
education.
to
spreading
plays
which
Secondly
so
that
a
as
from
that
Read and fill in the blanks
She is ________ a great and kind woman ______

the Chinese love and support her. ________ she

has done encourages more people to join

her in ____________ (realize) our Chinese dream.
such
that
What
realizing
Summary
Writing steps:
Step 1: 仔细审题
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Step 3: 遣词造句
Step 4: 连句成篇

Describe a great person:
brief introduction, achievement,influnce
Homework
Polish your writing.

Surf more information about great people
on the internet.

3. Write another composition .