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高中英语应用文写作
—— 咨询信
铜梁二中 龙列
1. 考什么?
2. 怎么评分?
3. 学什么?
语域
学习目标
咨询信的结构;
必备句型;
句间连接词。
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a high school student from China. I’ll graduate this year and I’m planning to apply for the Summer Session 2020. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
Firstly, I’d like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Secondly, I wonder if all the students should live on campus or rent houses outside the school. In addition, my utmost concern is to see whether the students will have time to visit some places of interest in America on weekends.
I would appreciate it if you could provide me with the relevant information. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
书面表达
假如你是李华,一名即将高中毕业的中国学生,你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2020的课程学习,向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。内容包括:
(1)课程安排:课程安排的细节、课程的数量及科目
(2)住宿情况:住校内还是校外租房
(3)周末活动:是否有时间参观风景名胜
注意: 1.必须包括所给要点,但不要逐条翻译。
2. 词数:100左右。
观察思考:
作文的结构
文章与题目的对应
Introduction and purpose
inquiry
thanks & hope
Mind map
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
感谢+希望
咨询详情
课程安排
住宿情况
周末活动
介绍+目的
My name is Li Hua, a high school student from China. I’ll graduate this year and I’m planning to apply for the Summer Session 2020. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
假如你是李华,一名即将高中毕业的中国学生,你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2020的课程学习,向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。
介绍+目的
1. Who are you?
2. What is the situation?
3. What’s your purpose?
My name is Li Hua, a high school student from China. I’ll graduate this year and I’m planning to apply for the Summer Session 2020. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
假如你是李华,一名即将高中毕业的中国学生,你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2020的课程学习,向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。
介绍+目的
1. Who are you?
I am Li Hua.
My name is Li Hua.
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School.
我是李华,育才中学的学生会主席。
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai High School.
Yes, 本帅哥就是李华!
My name is Li Hua, a high school student from China. I’ll graduate this year and I’m planning to apply for the Summer Session 2020. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
假如你是李华,一名即将高中毕业的中国学生,你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2020的课程学习,向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。
介绍+目的
2. What is the situation?
假设你叫李华,一名新华中学的高中生,你对中美高中生交流项目很感兴趣。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。
My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua High School. I the Sino-American High School Exchange Program.
假设你是李华,暑假期间你计划和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封电子邮件,询问不明确的信息。
I’m Li Hua. My family are . Hong Kong Disneyland this summer vacation. I’ve got some information about
on the Internet.
am very interested in
planning to visit
the ticket prices
My name is Li Hua, a high school student from China. I’ll graduate this year and I’m planning to apply for the Summer Session 2020. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
假如你是李华,一名即将高中毕业的中国学生,你打算要申请参加美国培训机构the Summer Session 2020的课程学习,向其负责人Smith先生咨询培训的有关信息。
介绍+目的
3. What’s your purpose?
1)我写信是为了获取有关详细的信息。
I’m writing to ask for /get/ obtain/gain some detailed information about it.
2)我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关的信息。
I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information about / regarding / concerning it.
Firstly, I’d like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Secondly, I wonder if all the students should live on campus or rent houses outside the school. In addition, my utmost concern is to see whether the students will have time to visit some places of interest in America on weekends.
内容包括:
(1)课程安排:课程安排的细节、课程的数量及科目
(2)住宿情况:住校内还是校外租房
(3)周末活动:是否有时间参观风景名胜
咨询详情
2. How to inquire?
3. How to combine?
1. what to inquire?
咨询详情
1. What to inquire?
假设你叫李华,一名新华中学的高中生,你对中美高中生交流活动很感兴趣。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。
内容包括:
(1)对申请者的相关要求;
(2)课程的相关事宜;
(3)住宿和吃饭的条件;
(4)需要做的相关准备。
假设你叫李华,一名新华中学的高中生,你对中美高中生交流项目很感兴趣。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。
内容包括:
(1)对申请者的相关要求;
(2)课程的详细情况;
(3)住宿和吃饭的条件;
(4)是否需要做准备。
1. What qualifications are _________ for applicants?
2. ______________________
3. ______________ the accommodation
4. Do I need to ____________________?
the details of the courses
the conditions of
make any preparations
required
1) I want to know… 我想知道…
2) I would like to know…. 我想知道…
3) I would be very interested in …我有兴趣了解…
4) I also wonder…我还想知道…
5) I would also like to inquire about…我还想咨询…
6) The most important thing that I want to know is …
我最想知道的是…
7) What I want to know is …我想知道的是…
8) Would you be so kind to tell me…?你能否告诉我…
9) Could/Would you please tell me …?你能否告诉我…
10) Could you explain exactly…? 你能否确切地解释一下…
咨询详情
2. How to inquire?
1) I want to know… 我想知道…
2) I would like to know…. 我想知道…
3) I also wonder…我还想知道…
4) I would be very interested to know…我有兴趣了解…
5) I would also like to inquire about…我还想咨询…
6) The most important thing that I want to know is …我最想知道的是…
7) Would you be so kind to tell me…?你能否告诉我…
8) Could/Would you please tell me …?你能否告诉我…
9) Could you explain exactly…? 你能否确切地解释一下…
咨询详情
2. How to inquire?
1. I would like to know ____________________________________.
2. I would also like to inquire about ______________________.
3. Could you please tell me something about ______________________________?
4. Would you be so kind to tell me______________________________?
1. What qualifications are required for applicants?
2. the details of the courses
3. the conditions of the accommodation
4. Do I need to make any preparations?
the details of the courses
the conditions of the accommodation
what qualifications are required for applicants
if I need to make any preparations
咨询详情
2. How to inquire?
假设你叫李华,一名新华中学的高中生,你对中美高中生交流活动很感兴趣。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。
内容包括:
(1)对申请者的相关要求;
(2)课程的相关事宜;
(3)住宿和吃饭的条件;
(4)需要做的相关准备。
1. I wonder children under 5 need to .
2. Is it for us to get a discount if we as a group?
3. Could you please tell me if we can ?
4. I’d like to know if we are allowed to
our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip .
假设你是李华,暑假期间你打算和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封电子邮件,询问不明确的信息。
内容包括:
1. 5岁以下的孩子可否免票?
2. 团体购票是否可以打折?
3. 可否在网上订票?
4. 可否因个人原因取消订票?
1) I want to know… 我想知道…
2) I would like to know…. 我想知道…
3) I also wonder…我还想知道…
4) I would be very interested to know…我有兴趣了解…
5) I would also like to inquire about…我还想咨询…
6) The most important thing that I want to know is …我最想知道的是…
7) What I want to know is sth/从句。我想知道的是…
8) Would you be so kind to tell me…?你能否告诉我…
9) Could/Would you please tell me …?你能否告诉我…
10) Could you explain exactly…? 你能否确切地解释一下…
if /whether
pay for a ticket
possible
buy tickets
book tickets on line
cancel
for personal reasons
咨询详情
3. How to combine?
表示列举:
第一,第二,第三… 最后
Firstly, secondly, thirdly… finally
首先
first,/firstly/first of all,/to begin with,
表示增补——其次、此外
besides, ?in?addition,? additionally, moreover, furthermore, what's?more,
最重要的是
most importantly,
顺便问一下
by the way,
(first and foremost, besides, last but not least表达观点)
咨询详情
3. How to combine?
1. I would like to know what qualifications are required for applicants
2. I would also like to inquire about the details of the courses.
3. Could you please tell me something about the accommodation?
4. Would you be so kind to tell me if I need to make any preparations?
, I would like to know what qualifications are required for applicants. , I would also like to inquire about the details of the courses. , could you please tell me something about conditions of the accommodation? , would you be so kind to tell me if I need to make any preparations?
Firstly
Secondly
Thirdly
Finally
表示列举:
第一,第二,第三… 最后
Firstly, secondly, thirdly… finally
首先
first,/firstly/first of all,/to begin with,
表示增补——其次、此外
besides, ?in?addition,? additionally, moreover, furthermore, what's?more,
最重要的是
most importantly,
顺便问一下
by the way,
咨询详情
3. How to combine?
表示列举:
第一,第二,第三… 最后
firstly, secondly, thirdly… finally
首先
first/firstly/first of all/to begin with,
表示增补——其次、此外
besides,?in?addition,? additionally, moreover, furthermore, what's?more
最重要的是
most importantly
顺便问一下
by the way,
1. I wonder whether children under 5 need to pay for a ticket.
2. Is it possible for us to get a discount if we buy tickets as a group?
3. Could you please tell me if we can book tickets on line?
4. I’d like to know if we are allowed to cancel our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip for personal reasons.
, I wonder whether children under 5 need to pay for a ticket. , is it possible for us to get a discount if we buy tickets as a group? , Could you please tell me if we can book tickets on line? , I’d like to know if we are allowed to cancel our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip for personal reasons.
To begin with
In addition
What’s more
Besides
感谢+希望
感谢:
Thank you very much. 非常感谢。
Thank you very much for your kindness.非常感谢你的善意之举。
Thanks for your time. 感谢你的时间。
I would be grateful if you could offer me the information in detail. 如果你能为我提供详情,我将十分感谢。
I would appreciate it if you could give me the relevant information. 如果你能给我相关的信息,我将十分感谢。
希望:
I hope to receive your reply soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope to hear from you soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope that I will hear from you soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope that you will write to me soon. 我希望你很快给我写信。
I am looking forward to your early reply. 我期待着你尽快的回信。
I am looking forward to hearing from you.我期待尽快收到你的来信。
假设你叫李华,一名新华中学的高中生,你对中美高中生交流项目很感兴趣。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。
内容包括:
(1)对申请者的相关要求;
(2)课程的相关事宜;
(3)住宿和吃饭的条件;
(4)是否需要做准备。
Dear Sir of Madam,
My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua High School. I am very interested in the Sino-American High School Exchange Program. Now I’m writing to ask for some detailed information about it.
Firstly,I would like to know what qualifications are required for applicants. Secondly, I would also like to inquire about the details of the courses. Thirdly, could you please tell me something about the conditions of the accommodation? Finally, would you be so kind to tell me if I need to make any preparations?
I would be grateful if you could offer me the information in detail. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,暑假期间你打算和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封电子邮件,询问不明确的信息。
内容包括:
1. 5岁以下的孩子可否免票?
2. 团体购票是否可以打折?
3. 可否在网上订票?
4. 可否因因个人原因取消订票?
Dear Sir of Madam,
I’m Li Hua. My family are planning a visit to Hong Kong Disneyland this summer vacation. I’ve got some information about the ticket prices on the Internet. Now I’m writing to gain some detailed information about it.
To begin with, I wonder whether children under 5 need to pay for a ticket. In addition, is it possible for us to get a discount if we buy tickets as a group?What’s more, Could you please tell me if we can book tickets on line? Besides, I’d like to know if we are allowed to cancel our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip for personal reasons.
Thank you very much and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Mind map
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
感谢+希望
咨询详情
介绍+目的
事项1
事项2
事项3
……
1. 掌握咨询信的结构
2. 掌握必备句型
1. I am Li Hua.
2. My name is Li Hua.
3. I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School.
4. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai High School.
1)我是谁?
1. I’m writing to ask for/get/obtain/ gain some detailed information about it.我写信是为了获取有关详细的信息。
2. I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information about/regarding / concerning it.我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关的信息。
2)目的
3)咨询
1) I want to know… 我想知道…
2) I would like to know…. 我想知道…
3) I also wonder…我还想知道…
4) I would be very interested to know…我有兴趣了解…
5) I would also like to inquire about…我还想咨询…
6) The most important thing that I want to know is …我最想知道的是…
7) What I want to know is …我想知道的是…
8) Would you be so kind to tell me…?你能否告诉我…
9) Could/Would you please tell me …?你能否告诉我…
10) Could you explain exactly…? 你能否确切地解释一下…
4)感谢
Thank you very much. 非常感谢。
Thank you very much for your kindness.非常感谢你的善意之举。
Thanks for your time. 感谢你的时间。
I would be grateful if you could offer me the information in detail. 如果你能为我提供详情,我将十分感谢。
I would appreciate it if you could give me the relevant information. 如果你能给我相关的信息,我将十分感谢。
5)希望
I hope to receive your reply soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope to hear from you soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope that I will hear from you soon. 我希望很快收到你的回信。
I hope that you will write to me soon. 我希望你很快给我写信。
I am looking forward to your early reply. 我期待着你尽早的回信。
I am looking forward to hearing from you.我期待着收到你的来信。
3. 掌握句间连接词
表示列举:
第一,第二,第三… 最后
Firstly, secondly, thirdly… finally
首先
First/firstly/first of all/to begin with,
其次、此外
besides,?in?addition, additionally, moreover , furthermore , what's?more
最重要的是
most importantly
顺便问一下
by the way,
书面表达
假如你是李华,一名重庆的高中生,你听说传染病专家Dr. Bill Schaffner正在武汉帮助抗击新冠肺炎(NCP)。请你给他写一封邮件询问相关情况,要点如下:
传播:病毒是怎样传播的?
预防:怎样预防?
治疗:是否有特效药?
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
课后作业
Thank you!