高考二轮复习：写作之如何扩句Expanding Sentences（共13张ppt）

(共27张PPT)
Expanding Sentences
in English Writing in the Entrance
Examination in 2016
Made by PangYan
Xianyang Middle School of Shhanxi Province
2016年全国卷一(新课标一)
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
　 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2016年全国卷二(新课标二)
　　第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（Photography club）将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容
包括：1. 主题：环保保护；2. 展览时间：3. 投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。
　注意：　1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2016年全国卷三(新课标三)
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
　　 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：　1. 表达歉意：2. 说明原因：3. 另约时间。
注意：1．词数100左右：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The students are required to expand sentences by translating “我是李华 ”into English with the pattern“ subject+verb+object ” .
卷一：
①I ,Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school.
②I ,Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school , want to do a part-time job.
③I , Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school , want to do a part-time job in a foreign trade company.

④ I ,Li hua , a senior student of Xinhua Middle school , want to do a part-time job in a foreign trade company on the summer holiady.
⑤I ,Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school, want to do a part-time job in a foreign trade company on the summer holiady ,writing to ask you to help me.
⑥ I , Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school , want to do
a part-time job in a foreign trade
company on the summer holiady , writing to ask you to help me with my my application and resume.
⑦I ,Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school,want to do a part-time job in a foreign trade company on the summer holiady , writing to ask you to help me review the format and words with my my application and resume.
卷二：
①I , Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school.
②I , Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school,want to invite you to the international Photograph
exhibition .
③Photography clubI , Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school , want to invite you to take part in the international Photograph exhibition.

④ I, Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school,want to invite you to take part in the international Photograph exhibition held by the school Photography club.
⑤ I, Li hua ,a senior student of Xinhua Middle school,want to invite you to take part in the international Photograph exhibition held by the school Photography club and offer some your favourite photographs .
卷三：
①I am writing to you.
②I am writing to apologize to you for something important.
③I am writing to apologize to you for something important that I can’t go to the bookstore with you .
④I am writing to make an apology to you for something important that I can’t go to the bookstore with you .
⑤I am writing to make an apology to you for something important that I can’t go to the bookstore with you because I have to take care of my mother.
⑥I am writing to make an apology to you for something important that I can’t go to the bookstore with you because I have to take care of my mother who is ill for days in hospital .
⑦I am writing to make an apology to you for something important that I can’t go to the bookstore with you because I have to take care of my mother who is ill for days in hospital,would you like to go there with me in a few days ?
Tips：
First ,we need to make an easy sentence.
Then ,we have to add the other
proper parts , such as adverbial including time , place, reason and so on.
What’s more , some clauses should be added when necessary to make the whole sentences more clear.