高考英语二轮专题 How to correct a composition 短文改错 课件（25张PPT）
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How to correct a composition
短文改错
近几年来 短文改错题的材料内容贴近学生的实际生活，谈论的都是和学生的学习和生活有关的话题。
命题规律
从2016年到2018年各年的话题分别是：
2018年：“我”和父亲回到祖父生活的乡村，发现乡村生活和过去发生了巨大的变化。
2017年：“我”学习开车的经历。
2016年：“我”的叔叔如何开餐馆并成功的经历。
年度 谓语动词 名词 代词 形容词或副词 介词 冠词 连词 非谓语动词
2018 1 1 1 2 1 1 2 1
2017 2 2 0 3 1 1 1 0
2016 2 1 1 1 1 1 3 0
2016-2018改错错误类型统计
测试点
1. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself.
2. I’m sure you will find one you like it. .
3. I like playing piano.
the
错词
∧
talking
改错格式
多词
缺词
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
thought
the
and
with
serious
air
Many
our/the
1增加1删除8修改
动词
冠词
介词
动词
形容词/副词
名词
动词
代词
不定代词
连词
∧
find
1、冠词(a, an, the)
【错误类型】
（1）冠词缺失；（2）冠词多余； （3）冠词a、an、the误用
[例1] As result, the plants are growing somewhere.
a
[例2] In a fact, he never scared my classmates away….
[例3] As a experienced teacher, he is respected and loved….
an
【即时演练】
(1) Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one.
(2) My cousin went abroad at an age of eighteen.
(3) A apple a day keeps doctors away.
∧
a
An
the
2、介词
【错误类型】
（1）介词缺失；（2）介词多余；（3）介词误用
[例1] Luckily I had all my money on my pocket…
in
[例2] Thanks their help, we were all sent to a
nearby hospital.
[例3] Before we left for the restaurant,we discovered that it also sold ice cream.
to
【即时演练】
(1) From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails.
(2) As the development of the Internet, there is a
kind of language called the Web Language.
(3) She wrote on my hand, ”Please come to here as often as possible. ”
∧
in
With
3、代词
【错误类型】
（1）单复数代词误用；（2）前后指代不一致；
（3）反身代词的误用。
(1) I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.
(2)You?may?keep?the?books?for?several?weeks?so?
that?you?can?have?enough?time?to?finish?it.?
(3)When?you?are?away?from?home,?you?should?
look?after?you.
(4) It is a very important thing. You must think over carefully.
∧
yourself
them
his
it
4、名词
【错误类型】
（1）可数名词单复数错误；（2）不可数名词后加s ；
（3）名词所有格错误。
(1) Please give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.
(2) I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.
(3) My cousin George and I went on a trip to my uncle last Sunday.
advice
uncle’s
weeks
5、形容词和副词
【错误类型】
（1）形容词、副词误用；（2）形容词、副词的比较级、最高级误用；；（3）地点副词here、there误用。
【即时演练】
(1) I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!
(2) I am so exciting that you will come to China.
(3) Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public.
(4) Some think online shopping is more convenient and the goods are cheap.
(5)I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
I was …buying a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here.
there
wide
much
cheaper
hard
excited
6、动词
[例1] She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
hold
[例2] After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is
nice and warm.
[例3] And much of the research carrying out is unnecessary.
carried
[例4] We all likes English.
【错误类型】
（1）谓语动词的时态误用；（2）谓语动词的语态误用； (3) 主谓一致（4）to后跟动词原形或动名词的误用；（5）介词后动词形态的误用；（6）非谓语动词现在分词与过去分词的误用。
like
hearing
【即时演练】
(1) My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.
(2) A group of scientists found out that the environment of the country had polluted.
(3) Do we have right to treating animals in this way?
(4) I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing.
been
repaired
treat
were
∧
7、连词
[例1] Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.
[例2] But before long they began to see which was happening.
【错误类型】
（1）连词的多用(although/though与but连用等)
（2）缺连词；（3）and，or，but，so等连词的误用；（4）从句连词尤其是which，what，that等的误用。
what
【即时演练】
(1)All I had to do was to write a story or present it.
(2) It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake.
(3) Though you find something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you.
(4) It’s a pity what some of us were not present.
that
and
which
Exercise
One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out. It’s so many fun! We always invite one of our neighbour, Paul, to go with us. Paul is also my best friend, whom is the same age as me. He is good for swimming and fishing. I still remember last year he catches a very big fish. Every time we go boating, my father drives the boat. Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in front of the boat. We are very excited and happily. My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks. When we are hungry or thirsty, and we can eat them.
One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out. It’s so many fun! We always invite one of our neighbour, Paul, to go with us. Paul is also my best friend, whom is the same age as me. He is good for swimming and fishing. I still remember last year he catches a very big fish. Every time we go boating, my father drives the boat. Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in front of the boat. We are very excited and happily. My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks. When we are hungry or thirsty, and we can eat them.
∧
doing
much
neighbours
who
at
caught
it
the
happy
Homework
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only?four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
??I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black?toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town , he was?strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do?homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Thank you!
How to correct a composition
短文改错
近几年来 短文改错题的材料内容贴近学生的实际生活，谈论的都是和学生的学习和生活有关的话题。
命题规律
从2016年到2018年各年的话题分别是：
2018年：“我”和父亲回到祖父生活的乡村，发现乡村生活和过去发生了巨大的变化。
2017年：“我”学习开车的经历。
2016年：“我”的叔叔如何开餐馆并成功的经历。
年度 谓语动词 名词 代词 形容词或副词 介词 冠词 连词 非谓语动词
2018 1 1 1 2 1 1 2 1
2017 2 2 0 3 1 1 1 0
2016 2 1 1 1 1 1 3 0
2016-2018改错错误类型统计
测试点
1. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself.
2. I’m sure you will find one you like it. .
3. I like playing piano.
the
错词
∧
talking
改错格式
多词
缺词
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
thought
the
and
with
serious
air
Many
our/the
1增加1删除8修改
动词
冠词
介词
动词
形容词/副词
名词
动词
代词
不定代词
连词
∧
find
1、冠词(a, an, the)
【错误类型】
（1）冠词缺失；（2）冠词多余； （3）冠词a、an、the误用
[例1] As result, the plants are growing somewhere.
a
[例2] In a fact, he never scared my classmates away….
[例3] As a experienced teacher, he is respected and loved….
an
【即时演练】
(1) Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one.
(2) My cousin went abroad at an age of eighteen.
(3) A apple a day keeps doctors away.
∧
a
An
the
2、介词
【错误类型】
（1）介词缺失；（2）介词多余；（3）介词误用
[例1] Luckily I had all my money on my pocket…
in
[例2] Thanks their help, we were all sent to a
nearby hospital.
[例3] Before we left for the restaurant,we discovered that it also sold ice cream.
to
【即时演练】
(1) From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails.
(2) As the development of the Internet, there is a
kind of language called the Web Language.
(3) She wrote on my hand, ”Please come to here as often as possible. ”
∧
in
With
3、代词
【错误类型】
（1）单复数代词误用；（2）前后指代不一致；
（3）反身代词的误用。
(1) I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.
(2)You?may?keep?the?books?for?several?weeks?so?
that?you?can?have?enough?time?to?finish?it.?
(3)When?you?are?away?from?home,?you?should?
look?after?you.
(4) It is a very important thing. You must think over carefully.
∧
yourself
them
his
it
4、名词
【错误类型】
（1）可数名词单复数错误；（2）不可数名词后加s ；
（3）名词所有格错误。
(1) Please give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.
(2) I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.
(3) My cousin George and I went on a trip to my uncle last Sunday.
advice
uncle’s
weeks
5、形容词和副词
【错误类型】
（1）形容词、副词误用；（2）形容词、副词的比较级、最高级误用；；（3）地点副词here、there误用。
【即时演练】
(1) I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!
(2) I am so exciting that you will come to China.
(3) Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public.
(4) Some think online shopping is more convenient and the goods are cheap.
(5)I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
I was …buying a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here.
there
wide
much
cheaper
hard
excited
6、动词
[例1] She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
hold
[例2] After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is
nice and warm.
[例3] And much of the research carrying out is unnecessary.
carried
[例4] We all likes English.
【错误类型】
（1）谓语动词的时态误用；（2）谓语动词的语态误用； (3) 主谓一致（4）to后跟动词原形或动名词的误用；（5）介词后动词形态的误用；（6）非谓语动词现在分词与过去分词的误用。
like
hearing
【即时演练】
(1) My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.
(2) A group of scientists found out that the environment of the country had polluted.
(3) Do we have right to treating animals in this way?
(4) I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing.
been
repaired
treat
were
∧
7、连词
[例1] Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.
[例2] But before long they began to see which was happening.
【错误类型】
（1）连词的多用(although/though与but连用等)
（2）缺连词；（3）and，or，but，so等连词的误用；（4）从句连词尤其是which，what，that等的误用。
what
【即时演练】
(1)All I had to do was to write a story or present it.
(2) It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake.
(3) Though you find something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you.
(4) It’s a pity what some of us were not present.
that
and
which
Exercise
One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out. It’s so many fun! We always invite one of our neighbour, Paul, to go with us. Paul is also my best friend, whom is the same age as me. He is good for swimming and fishing. I still remember last year he catches a very big fish. Every time we go boating, my father drives the boat. Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in front of the boat. We are very excited and happily. My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks. When we are hungry or thirsty, and we can eat them.
One activity that my family and I enjoy do every summer is taking our boat out. It’s so many fun! We always invite one of our neighbour, Paul, to go with us. Paul is also my best friend, whom is the same age as me. He is good for swimming and fishing. I still remember last year he catches a very big fish. Every time we go boating, my father drives the boat. Sometimes he drives them really fast when we are sitting in front of the boat. We are very excited and happily. My mother always brings a lot of fruits and snacks. When we are hungry or thirsty, and we can eat them.
∧
doing
much
neighbours
who
at
caught
it
the
happy
Homework
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only?four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
??I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black?toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town , he was?strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do?homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Thank you!