Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? Section B 3a-3c 写作课件(共13张PPT)

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Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

Writing
人教版本 八年级下册
When I …
He was …
When I called him up, he was sleeping.
Make up the sentences.
While I …
He was …
While I was walking to school, he was eating.
When I …
He was …
When I read the newspaper, he was watching TV.
While I……
My mother was……
My mother was cooking while I was reading.
When Tom……
Kate was ……
When Tom played computer games, Kate was drawing.
Pre-writing
Rubble sits in front of a hotel after an earthquake struck Jiuzhaigou County in China’s Sichuan Province.
(CNN)At least nine people were killed and 164 more injured late Tuesday when a earthquake struck a popular tourist area of Jiuzhaigou County in southwest China’s Sichuan Province.
What was the event?
When did it happen?
Where did it happen?
What were you doing?
What were your parents and your friends doing?
What was your feeling and why?
A powerful earthquake in Jiuzhaigou
A powerful earthquake happened in Jiuzhaigou.
It happened on the evening of August 8th,2017
The earthquake happened in Jiuzhaigou.
When this event happened, I was listening to the music.
My friends were playing computer games.
I was completely shocked because it was the first time for me to meet such a big earthquake.
Example:
An important event that I remember well was the news of Mandera’s death. It happened on the morning of December 5th,2013. When this event happened, I was doing my homework. My friends were playing football. This event is very important to me because he’s a great person. I remember this event well because I admire him.
Narrative writing
The lead
The body
The tail
time
place
event
activities
feelings, reasons
While-writing
2017年8月8日晚上9：19，一场地震袭击了Susan所在的城市九寨沟（Jiuzhaigou）。很幸运他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Susan，请根据图片描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情况，要求70词左右。
A powerful earthquake happened in Jiuzhaigou.
On the evening of August 8th,2017
In Jiuzhaigou
taking shower
making dinner in the kitchen
playing computer games
watching TV
I was completely shocked because it was the first time for me to meet such a big earthquake. Luckily, we are safe.
The Lead Event
Time
place
The body Details: activities

was/were


The tail Feelings: reasons
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