高三英语概要写作Summary writing课件（33张PPT）
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Summary Writing
高三英语9+1模拟卷四
概要写作
--------严永宏
一.明确方向--概要写作要点解读
二.问题呈现--学生作文问题所在
三.方法简介--概要写作技能攻略
四.实例演练—概要作文简要过程
Finland has a great diversity of reasons for its school system being better than those of other Western countries.(要点1) Its government spares no effort to make all the preschool and school kids to receive the compulsory education. (要点2) Besides, the trained educators are in charge of schools while the government pays for the education .(要点3) With teachers well educated , carefully chosen and fully dedicated, the children are educated to the best of the country`s ability. (要点4) Equal opportinities for all children`s education contribute to Finland`s school success as well. (要点5)
?
参考表达2:
expository writing
Online schools are becoming very popular today.Whether it is working professionals who cannot afford the time to go to a full-time college because of their huge workload or stay-at-home moms who have many duties and cannot join a college, online schools are much enjoyed by all. And now,even regular students , who have time to go to college, are going in for online education, as it leaves them enough time to pursue other thins, such as a part-time job or a hobby, along with studying. However, as with everything, there are both advantages and disadvantages to online schools.
Let`s start with the positives. The schools cost much less. You don`t have to spend on buying books or travelling. Another advantage is the flexibility it provides.You can study at any time during the day. You can study wherever you want –in your house, at a café or even at a park!
Moving on to the disadvantages of going to school online, those students who always need a push from their teachers to do well, are very likely not to do well in online schools. And the greatest disadvantage of going to school online: there are many employers who prefer students with a traditional degree over those who have an online degree. The employers feel that students who go to full-time colleges are more knowledgeable compared to those who have online degrees. Since the very purpose of an education is to land a person a good job, online degrees , many a time, do not serve this purpose.
No doubt that online schools offer the freedom which no regular college can provide. However, how much the employers will value the degrees and whether a student can actually make his own study schedule and most importantly, stick to it , depends on individual to individual.So in the end , it can be rightly said, online schools are good for some ,while others should give them a skip!
实例演练 ----作文简要过程
1.Style:
2.Tense:
3.Topic(The Passage general idea):
two sides of online schools
4.structure:
argumentative writing
the general present tense
Draw a mind map (an overall picture of this text/ the structure of the text to reflect the relationship between paragraphs)
para1
para4
para3
para2
三. 方法简介--概要写作技能攻略
1.Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
2.Substitute--words/sentence patterns
3.Compose--transitional words
Online schools are becoming very popular today.Whether it is working professionals who cannot afford the time to go to a full-time college because of their huge workload or stay-at-home moms who have many duties and cannot join a college, online schools are much enjoyed by all. And now,even regular students , who have time to go to college, are going in for online education, as it leaves them enough time to pursue other thins, such as a part-time job or a hobby, along with studying. However, as with everything, there are both advantages and disadvantages to online schools.
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 1（para1）:
Online schools are becoming very popular today among different people.However,there are both advantages and disadvantages.
key words in para1:
substitute words/phrases:
popular ...... today......however......
advantages and disadvantages......
welcome/well-received/enjoyed ......
at present/nowadays......
despite/but.......
strengths and weaknesses/merits and demerits/pros and cons
para1: 1)Nowadays, online schools are enjoying great popularity by people from all walks of life.Nevertheless, they have both strengths and weaknesses.
para1: 2)At present online schools are well-received among different people, but merits and demerits are also shared like everything in the world as follows.
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
Tips: 句式变化替换，主动改成被动或句子变短语; despite 替however ；
as follows起承上启下。
para1: 3)Despite online schools welcome by different people nowadays, they,like everything in the world ,also own merits and demerits as follows.
Let`s start with the positives. The schools cost much less. You don`t have to spend on buying books or travelling. Another advantage is the flexibility it provides.You can study at any time during the day. You can study wherever you want –in your house, at a café or even at a park!
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 2（para2）:
The advantages are less cost and flexible in time and places in online schools.
key words in para2:
substitute words/phrases:
advantage...... cost less ...... flexibility...
benefit.....
low cost/less expense/less charge/less spending/less budget......
more freedom/choices in time and places
para2: 1)On one hand, online schools have the low cost and freedom that regular schools can`t offer.
para2: 2)For one thing, less expense is needed and more freedom in time and places can be offered in online schools,which regular schools lack.
Tips: 连接词on one hand/for one thing ;非限定性定语从句补充，让语义更完整。也可使用主语从句，benefit 替advantage。
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
para2: 3)On one hand, what benefits people is low budget and more choices in time and places offered by online schools.
Moving on to the disadvantages of going to school online, those students who always need a push from their teachers to do well, are very likely not to do well in online schools. And the greatest disadvantage of going to school online: there are many employers who prefer students with a traditional degree over those who have an online degree. The employers feel that students who go to full-time colleges are more knowledgeable compared to those who have online degrees. Since the very purpose of an education is to land a person a good job, online degrees , many a time, do not serve this purpose.
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 3（para3）:
The disadvantage of going to school online is that some students are likely not to do well and many employers prefer regular students over online ones .
key words in para3:
substitute words/phrases:
disadvantage ...... students...... employers ........prefer ...over....
problem/trouble/fault......
less-disciplined students......
bosses/entrepreneurs.....
value/teasure more/outweigh......
para3: 1)On the other hand, those who lack self-disipline may do badly in online schools.Worse still, many employers don`t value online degrees.
para3: 2)For another,a few less-disciplined students can`t behave well in online schools and what`s even worse is that online degrees can`t be treasured by many a boss. /.....and even worse, regular degrees outweigh online ones in a great many employers`eyes.
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
Tips: 连接词on the other hand/for another ;主语从句补充，让语义更完整;the problem lies in 跟上宾语从句，句式与前句不一样。
para3: 3)On the other hand, the problem lies in that less-disciplined people may do badly in online schools,and Worse still, many entrepreneurs don`t value online degrees.
No doubt that online schools offer the freedom which no regular college can provide. However, how much the employers will value the degrees and whether a student can actually make his own study schedule and most importantly, stick to it , depends on individual to individual.So in the end , it can be rightly said, online schools are good for some ,while others should give them a skip!
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 4（para4）:
How much online schools can benefit people depends differently.
key words in para4:
substitute words/phrases:
......depend on...... individual to individual.....
be decided/determined/vary/differ from....
individually/from person to person
para4: 1)In brief, how to make use of online schools varies from person to person.
para4: 2)In short,Your situation decides how much online schools will benefit you.
Tips: in short/brief 总结全文 ;用疑问词加短语而不是从句以和前文从句不同; from individual to individual 变individually。
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
para4: 3)To sum up, whether online education benefits people or not differs individually .
sentences for reference:
At present online schools are well-received among different people, but merits and demerits are also shared like everything in the world as follows. （要点1）For one thing, less expense is needed and more freedom in time and places can be offered by them,which regular schools lack. （要点2）For another,a few less-disciplined students can`t behave well in online schools and what`s even worse is that online degrees can`t be treasured by many a boss. （要点3） To sum up, whether online education benefits or not differs individually. （要点4）
Summary 1 for reference：
Despite online schools welcome among different people at present,they,like everything in the world ,also own merits and demerits as follows.（要点1）On one hand, what benefits people is low cost and more choices offered by online schools.（要点2）On the other hand, the problem lies in that less-disiplined people may do badly in online schools and even worse, regular degrees outweigh online ones in a great many employers`eyes. （要点3）In short,Your situation decides how much online schools will benefit you.（要点4）
Summary 2 for reference：
Self-discipline leads to joy!
替换技巧：结合相关技巧，重新组句。
1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法
I didn’t catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.
I didn’t catch any fish_________ I was not patient.
2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法
You will fail. = You will ____________.
3)Change the part of speech词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of _____________________ .
4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法
语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.
→Children should ________ more praise.
简单句变复合句：
Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.
Children should be encouraged more, _______ will help them learn faster..
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
because
great importance
be given
not succeed
which
5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法
注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, yet, for, therefore, thus, including, instead of 等。
We should encourage children. We should not scold them.
We should encourage children__________ scolding them.
下列是常规的实用技巧。
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the repetitions
Skill3: Omit the examples
Skill4: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill5: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech
instead of
1) 名词从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
That John won the marathon surprised us.
revision：John’s winning the Marathon surprised us.
I have not decided whether I should vote for Clinton.
revision：I have not decided whether to vote for Clinton.
Substitute--sentence patterns
2) 定语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.
The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mother’s.
The next train that arrives is from New York.—>
revision：The next train to arrive is from New York.
3) 状语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.
—〉
When they are heated ,metals expand.
—>
Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.
—〉
If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail.
—〉
Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.
(When) Heated, metals expand.
Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.
United, we stand; divided, we fail.
4) 独立主格短语开头
Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
Seagulls flying over the water,
the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.
A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.
…but this being my first experience, I stayed at the top and watched them.(B6U5)
As birds are singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
Hopefully,everything will be normal!
Assignment:
Too often, the best things are the ones right before our eyes...If we would only take a moment to see them.
替换技巧：结合相关技巧，重新组句。
1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法
I didn’t catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.
I didn’t catch any fish_________ I was not patient.
2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法
You will fail. = You will ____________.
3)Change the part of speech词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of _____________________ .
4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法
语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.
→Children should ________ more praise.
简单句变复合句：
Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.
Children should be encouraged more, _______ will help them learn faster..
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
because
great importance
be given
not succeed
which
5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法
注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, yet, for, therefore, thus, including, instead of 等。
We should encourage children. We should not scold them.
We should encourage children__________ scolding them.
6) Change the order of the words.词序改变
D. 下列是常规的实用技巧。
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the repetitions
Skill3: Omit the examples
Skill4: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill5: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech
instead of
Summary Writing
高三英语9+1模拟卷四
概要写作
--------严永宏
一.明确方向--概要写作要点解读
二.问题呈现--学生作文问题所在
三.方法简介--概要写作技能攻略
四.实例演练—概要作文简要过程
Finland has a great diversity of reasons for its school system being better than those of other Western countries.(要点1) Its government spares no effort to make all the preschool and school kids to receive the compulsory education. (要点2) Besides, the trained educators are in charge of schools while the government pays for the education .(要点3) With teachers well educated , carefully chosen and fully dedicated, the children are educated to the best of the country`s ability. (要点4) Equal opportinities for all children`s education contribute to Finland`s school success as well. (要点5)
?
参考表达2:
expository writing
Online schools are becoming very popular today.Whether it is working professionals who cannot afford the time to go to a full-time college because of their huge workload or stay-at-home moms who have many duties and cannot join a college, online schools are much enjoyed by all. And now,even regular students , who have time to go to college, are going in for online education, as it leaves them enough time to pursue other thins, such as a part-time job or a hobby, along with studying. However, as with everything, there are both advantages and disadvantages to online schools.
Let`s start with the positives. The schools cost much less. You don`t have to spend on buying books or travelling. Another advantage is the flexibility it provides.You can study at any time during the day. You can study wherever you want –in your house, at a café or even at a park!
Moving on to the disadvantages of going to school online, those students who always need a push from their teachers to do well, are very likely not to do well in online schools. And the greatest disadvantage of going to school online: there are many employers who prefer students with a traditional degree over those who have an online degree. The employers feel that students who go to full-time colleges are more knowledgeable compared to those who have online degrees. Since the very purpose of an education is to land a person a good job, online degrees , many a time, do not serve this purpose.
No doubt that online schools offer the freedom which no regular college can provide. However, how much the employers will value the degrees and whether a student can actually make his own study schedule and most importantly, stick to it , depends on individual to individual.So in the end , it can be rightly said, online schools are good for some ,while others should give them a skip!
实例演练 ----作文简要过程
1.Style:
2.Tense:
3.Topic(The Passage general idea):
two sides of online schools
4.structure:
argumentative writing
the general present tense
Draw a mind map (an overall picture of this text/ the structure of the text to reflect the relationship between paragraphs)
para1
para4
para3
para2
三. 方法简介--概要写作技能攻略
1.Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
2.Substitute--words/sentence patterns
3.Compose--transitional words
Online schools are becoming very popular today.Whether it is working professionals who cannot afford the time to go to a full-time college because of their huge workload or stay-at-home moms who have many duties and cannot join a college, online schools are much enjoyed by all. And now,even regular students , who have time to go to college, are going in for online education, as it leaves them enough time to pursue other thins, such as a part-time job or a hobby, along with studying. However, as with everything, there are both advantages and disadvantages to online schools.
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 1（para1）:
Online schools are becoming very popular today among different people.However,there are both advantages and disadvantages.
key words in para1:
substitute words/phrases:
popular ...... today......however......
advantages and disadvantages......
welcome/well-received/enjoyed ......
at present/nowadays......
despite/but.......
strengths and weaknesses/merits and demerits/pros and cons
para1: 1)Nowadays, online schools are enjoying great popularity by people from all walks of life.Nevertheless, they have both strengths and weaknesses.
para1: 2)At present online schools are well-received among different people, but merits and demerits are also shared like everything in the world as follows.
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
Tips: 句式变化替换，主动改成被动或句子变短语; despite 替however ；
as follows起承上启下。
para1: 3)Despite online schools welcome by different people nowadays, they,like everything in the world ,also own merits and demerits as follows.
Let`s start with the positives. The schools cost much less. You don`t have to spend on buying books or travelling. Another advantage is the flexibility it provides.You can study at any time during the day. You can study wherever you want –in your house, at a café or even at a park!
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 2（para2）:
The advantages are less cost and flexible in time and places in online schools.
key words in para2:
substitute words/phrases:
advantage...... cost less ...... flexibility...
benefit.....
low cost/less expense/less charge/less spending/less budget......
more freedom/choices in time and places
para2: 1)On one hand, online schools have the low cost and freedom that regular schools can`t offer.
para2: 2)For one thing, less expense is needed and more freedom in time and places can be offered in online schools,which regular schools lack.
Tips: 连接词on one hand/for one thing ;非限定性定语从句补充，让语义更完整。也可使用主语从句，benefit 替advantage。
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
para2: 3)On one hand, what benefits people is low budget and more choices in time and places offered by online schools.
Moving on to the disadvantages of going to school online, those students who always need a push from their teachers to do well, are very likely not to do well in online schools. And the greatest disadvantage of going to school online: there are many employers who prefer students with a traditional degree over those who have an online degree. The employers feel that students who go to full-time colleges are more knowledgeable compared to those who have online degrees. Since the very purpose of an education is to land a person a good job, online degrees , many a time, do not serve this purpose.
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 3（para3）:
The disadvantage of going to school online is that some students are likely not to do well and many employers prefer regular students over online ones .
key words in para3:
substitute words/phrases:
disadvantage ...... students...... employers ........prefer ...over....
problem/trouble/fault......
less-disciplined students......
bosses/entrepreneurs.....
value/teasure more/outweigh......
para3: 1)On the other hand, those who lack self-disipline may do badly in online schools.Worse still, many employers don`t value online degrees.
para3: 2)For another,a few less-disciplined students can`t behave well in online schools and what`s even worse is that online degrees can`t be treasured by many a boss. /.....and even worse, regular degrees outweigh online ones in a great many employers`eyes.
Substitute--sentence patterns
sentences for reference:
Tips: 连接词on the other hand/for another ;主语从句补充，让语义更完整;the problem lies in 跟上宾语从句，句式与前句不一样。
para3: 3)On the other hand, the problem lies in that less-disciplined people may do badly in online schools,and Worse still, many entrepreneurs don`t value online degrees.
No doubt that online schools offer the freedom which no regular college can provide. However, how much the employers will value the degrees and whether a student can actually make his own study schedule and most importantly, stick to it , depends on individual to individual.So in the end , it can be rightly said, online schools are good for some ,while others should give them a skip!
Spot--key words /phrases/sentences
Main point 4（para4）:
How much online schools can benefit people depends differently.
key words in para4:
substitute words/phrases:
......depend on...... individual to individual.....
be decided/determined/vary/differ from....
individually/from person to person
para4: 1)In brief, how to make use of online schools varies from person to person.
para4: 2)In short,Your situation decides how much online schools will benefit you.
Tips: in short/brief 总结全文 ;用疑问词加短语而不是从句以和前文从句不同; from individual to individual 变individually。
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
para4: 3)To sum up, whether online education benefits people or not differs individually .
sentences for reference:
At present online schools are well-received among different people, but merits and demerits are also shared like everything in the world as follows. （要点1）For one thing, less expense is needed and more freedom in time and places can be offered by them,which regular schools lack. （要点2）For another,a few less-disciplined students can`t behave well in online schools and what`s even worse is that online degrees can`t be treasured by many a boss. （要点3） To sum up, whether online education benefits or not differs individually. （要点4）
Summary 1 for reference：
Despite online schools welcome among different people at present,they,like everything in the world ,also own merits and demerits as follows.（要点1）On one hand, what benefits people is low cost and more choices offered by online schools.（要点2）On the other hand, the problem lies in that less-disiplined people may do badly in online schools and even worse, regular degrees outweigh online ones in a great many employers`eyes. （要点3）In short,Your situation decides how much online schools will benefit you.（要点4）
Summary 2 for reference：
Self-discipline leads to joy!
替换技巧：结合相关技巧，重新组句。
1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法
I didn’t catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.
I didn’t catch any fish_________ I was not patient.
2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法
You will fail. = You will ____________.
3)Change the part of speech词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of _____________________ .
4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法
语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.
→Children should ________ more praise.
简单句变复合句：
Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.
Children should be encouraged more, _______ will help them learn faster..
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
because
great importance
be given
not succeed
which
5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法
注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, yet, for, therefore, thus, including, instead of 等。
We should encourage children. We should not scold them.
We should encourage children__________ scolding them.
下列是常规的实用技巧。
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the repetitions
Skill3: Omit the examples
Skill4: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill5: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech
instead of
1) 名词从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
That John won the marathon surprised us.
revision：John’s winning the Marathon surprised us.
I have not decided whether I should vote for Clinton.
revision：I have not decided whether to vote for Clinton.
Substitute--sentence patterns
2) 定语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.
The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mother’s.
The next train that arrives is from New York.—>
revision：The next train to arrive is from New York.
3) 状语从句可转化为非谓语动词短语
After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.
—〉
When they are heated ,metals expand.
—>
Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.
—〉
If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail.
—〉
Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.
(When) Heated, metals expand.
Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.
United, we stand; divided, we fail.
4) 独立主格短语开头
Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
Seagulls flying over the water,
the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.
A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.
…but this being my first experience, I stayed at the top and watched them.(B6U5)
As birds are singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
Hopefully,everything will be normal!
Assignment:
Too often, the best things are the ones right before our eyes...If we would only take a moment to see them.
替换技巧：结合相关技巧，重新组句。
1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法
I didn’t catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.
I didn’t catch any fish_________ I was not patient.
2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法
You will fail. = You will ____________.
3)Change the part of speech词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of _____________________ .
4)Change the structure of a sentence句式变化法
语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.
→Children should ________ more praise.
简单句变复合句：
Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.
Children should be encouraged more, _______ will help them learn faster..
Substitute--words/sentence patterns
because
great importance
be given
not succeed
which
5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法
注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, yet, for, therefore, thus, including, instead of 等。
We should encourage children. We should not scold them.
We should encourage children__________ scolding them.
6) Change the order of the words.词序改变
D. 下列是常规的实用技巧。
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the repetitions
Skill3: Omit the examples
Skill4: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill5: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech
instead of