Lesson Progress Check 2（Writing-Changes in Life）课件+嵌入音频（22张PPT）

课件22张PPT。New Century English 9B Progress Check 2
Writing-Changes in LifeWriting ProcessPre-WritingOrganizingDraftingRevisingFinal Draft!STEP ONEPre-writingBrainstormingChanges in lifeSTEP TWOOrganizingStructure of WritingBeginningBodyEndingMain idea IMain idea IIMain idea IIIPastPresentFutureSTEP THREE DraftingOutlinenot enough;
many diseases not cured;
blind and deaf people had to suffermore kinds of medicine developed;
medical technology developing;
most diseases cured;
electronic devices helping the deaf heargenes to be controlled;
all diseases to be cured;
the blind able to see and the deaf to hearThere was not enough medicine.Many diseases couldn’t be cured.The deaf and blind people had to suffer.More kinds of medicine have been developed.Medical technology is developing.Most diseases can be cured.With the help of electronic devices, some deaf people can hear.Genes will be controlled.Maybe all diseases will be cured.Doctors may enable the blind to see and the deaf to hear.Changes in TransportPastPresentFuturePracticeChanges in TechnologyPastPresentFuturePracticeChanges in FoodPastPresentFuturePracticeSTEP FOURRevisingHow to improve your writing?123Using attribute（定语） and adverbial（状语）Using conjunctions（连词）Using link words（连接词）Skills1Using attribute and adverbialSpread writingThe film is popular.The amazing film is popular.The amazing film is one of the most popular films in China.Practice1Using attribute and adverbialat Jiading Cinemawith my friendlast weekendSpread writingI saw the film Amazing China.I saw the film Amazing China at Jiading Cinema.I saw the film Amazing China at Jiading Cinema with my friend.I saw the film Amazing China at Jiading Cinema with my friend last weekend.Practice1. China changed a lot. New China was founded.(since)when, before, after, until, as soon as, while, since, if, unless, although, but, because, now that, as, or, and, both..and, not only…but also, as well as, instead of, some…others…still others, such as, like, too…to, so…that…2Using conjunctions
Combine the setences2. Travelling has become convenient. We can shorten our commuting time.(so…that)3. We can do most work by robots. We needn’t do it by hand. (instead of)4. We don’t protect the environment. More animals will die out. (if) 1. China has changed a lot since New China was founded.2. Travelling has become so convenient that we can shorten our commuting time.3. We can do most work by robots instead of by hand.
4. If we don’t protect the environment, more animals will die out. Practice3Using link wordsFirst, Firstly, First of all, To begin with;
Second, Besides, In addition, What’s more;
Finally, At last, Last but not least, In brief, in short… At first, Then , After that, Finally；
In the past, Now, In the futureOn one hand…On the other hand…Model Our lives have changed a lot and will continue to change. Take the changes in medicine as an example.
________there was not enough medicine. Many diseases could not be cured. The deaf and blind people had to suffer.
________more kinds of medicine have been developed, and medical technology is developing. Most diseases can be cured. With the help of electronic devices, some deaf people can hear.
_________genes will be controlled. Maybe all diseases will be cured. Doctors may enable the blind to see and the deaf to hear.
I believe our life will be better and better!PracticeIn the pastNowIn the futureChoose one of the topics and finish your writing.ChecklistHomework适用于教育公开课/教学报告/演讲比赛/总结计划等用途1.Revise the writing by yourselves
2.Write a passage about”Changes in Jiading"by using the skills you have learned in class. THANK
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