高中英语外研版必修3 Module 6 Old and New Writing (共32张PPT)

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(共32张PPT)
Module 6 Old and New
— Writing


Walls of stone to hold back clouds and rain till a smooth lake rises in the narrow gorges.
Find and underline the words, phrases and sentences which can describe changes on page55.
Pair work



Paragraph 1 :
the reason why the writer introduced the place
Paragraph 2 :
the changes of that place
Paragraph 3:
express the writer’s feelings
Writing———今昔对比的电子邮件
假如你是李华,你美国的朋友John希望了解你的家乡北镇近些年来的发展变化,请给John写一封回信,要求包括以下内容:
历史悠久,约三千年历史,现已被省政府命名为历史文化名城。
2.气候宜人,旅游资源丰富,如医巫闾山,青岩寺,北镇庙等已成为旅游文化古镇。
3.农产品和特产已面向国内市场。
写作要求:字数100字左右
Tourist attractions
Yi Wu Lv Mountain
Qing Yan Temple
Twin Towers
Bei Zhen Temple
Pear Blossom Festival
Local food
Goubangzi smoked chicken
Grape

Seven-step Writing Method















步骤
Writing steps










1、审
——仔细阅读写作要求及注意事项
假如你是李华,你英国的朋友John 希望了解你的家乡北镇近些年来的发展变化,请给John写一封回信,要求包括以下内容:
1.历史悠久,约三千年历史,现已被省政府命名为历史文化名城。
2.气候宜人,旅游资源丰富,如医巫闾山,青岩寺,北镇庙等已成为旅游文化古镇。
3.农产品和特产已面向国内市场。
写作要求:字数100字左右




2、定
——确定篇章结构及时态


Outline and tense (提纲&时态):

Para1:

Para2:

Para3:


Did ,does
Does
Does, will do
John’s wishes in the previous letter
the introduction of Bei Zhen
the invitation to John
3、列
——列出要点
Para1: John’s wishes in the previous letter






introduce sth to sb
In your last letter, you said that you wanted to know sth about my hometown----Beizhen, now please allow me to introduce the city to you!
* ___________________
Para2: the introduction of Beizhen
1. 历史悠久,约三千年历史,现已被省政府命名为历史文化名城
Provincial government;be named as a noted historic and cultural city.
2.气候宜人,旅游资源丰富,如医巫闾山,青岩寺,北镇庙等已成为旅游文化古镇。
3.农产品和特产已面向国内市场。





Para3: the invitation to John

* look forward to your coming
* have a good time in Beizhen

4、美
——润色丰富要点;?

1.____________________________,Beizhen is named as a noted historic and cultrual city by the provincial government.
2.______, the climate here is pleasant, ______ is ______too hot _______ too cold in winter.
语法﹑句法高分tips
巧用介词短语、非谓语结构、同位语、with结构、连词等,使文章简洁,通顺

which
Besides
neither
nor
With a long history of more than three thousand of years
3.________________(难怪) every year an increasing number of people come to visit it.
4.________________(科学化种植),agricultural products as well as many local products have established a firm position in domestic market.
It is no wonder that
Planted scientifically
5、改——查错改错;
1. 简单句排序错误。I by bus go home.?
2. 时态错误.
Some friends visit our school next week.?
3. 第三人称单数与动词不一致错误.
Tom prefer chemistry to physics.?
4. 名词复数错误
Some visitor visited our library and lab.?
6、连
——整理成篇,行文连贯;
对比常用句型:

(1)...used to...,but now...过去常常......但是现在......
(2)in the past...,but now...在过去......,但现在......
(3)once...but now曾经......但是现在......
(4)Things are different now.情况已经大有不同了.
(5)But now,everything has changed.但是现在全变了。





表示对称顺序关系:
for one thing…..for another thing;
on one hand,…..on the other hand;
first of all,firstly,secondly,next,finally,
The former….the latter,
表示递进关系:
what is more;moreover;besides ;
furthermore;in addition;what’s worse
表示换一种方式表达:in other words ,that is
to say
表示转折:but,however,while,instead

英语写作常用关联词
7、抄——修改无误后,认真规范
地誊写在规定的地方。
书面表达学生高分答卷
书面表达学生高分答卷
评卷时要留意学生文章中是否有以下三点:
一、要点齐全
二、有效的连接词
当然运用某些高级句式,非谓语动词,谚语和名人名言会给文章增色不少。
三、书写工整

Let’s have a try.

Homework
Polish your writing and send this email to me .
e-mail: maple_mei@126.com