阅读写作--2 应用文(2)
(应聘申请、邀请函、感谢信、投诉信等)
写作基本格式、写作要点与范例
(原卷版)
黑龙江哈尔滨 邱尚瑛
在高考英语试卷中,写作不仅是必不可少的考试项目,也是整个英语试卷中最重要的项目之一。阅卷教师通过对考生写作部分的阅卷,可以看出考生对英语语言实际应用的水平。考生对写作内容的把握直接影响着写作部分的质量,而且写作部分也是最能反应考生英语水平的重要环节,对最终英语试卷得分的高低起着举足轻重的作用。高考英语作文一般满分为25分(150字左右),占总分数的16%,如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就可以轻松将许多考生甩在后面。批卷时,阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文大概以平均一分钟左右的速度审核,老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。通常,一等分数为21--25分;二等分数为16分--20分;三等分数为11--15分;四等分数在6—10分;最低档分数在6分以下。首先试卷的卷面干净整洁是获取较高的分数的基础,写作部分没有涂抹或修改,没有明显的错误拼写,字迹秀丽工整,用词用句注意短语、谚语等的使用;这些都可以给评卷教师一个良好的印象。因此,教师在辅导学生进行写作练习的时候,要提醒学生注意这些问题。并且辅导学生进行写作技巧的训练,对学生进行写作要点的点拨,指导学生注意运用写作技巧,注意审题立意,确定写作主题;注意拟提纲,定骨架;安排好层次段落;做好段落铺垫的过渡;处理好开头与结尾。同时,还要注意引导学生通过熟练掌握一些常用的短语、习语、谚语等进行书面表达。在这一讲里,我们主要复习总结应用文中的应聘、求职信、感谢信、投诉信等写作基本格式与写作要点。
I. 应用文写作概述(The Summary of Practical Writing)
英语书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,能给予考生畅所欲言的空间,可以使考生在感受英语学习的趣味与魅力的同时展示多彩思维活动的同时,考查考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,可以使考生突出英语学科的独有特征;要想书面表达拿高分,必须熟知应用文的写作要点与基本格式。
1. 基本注意事项
语篇信息齐全;丰富的句式表达;注意句与句之间的连贯性;语句流畅自然,层次清楚;应用较高级词汇;书面整洁。
2. 邀请信写作范例:
假如你是王宏,想邀请外教Henry David一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:展览时间;地点;展览内容。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
May 20, 2018
Dear Henry /Mr.David,
How are things with you?
I’ve got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.?Knowing that you show great interest in?Chinese culture,?I’d like to invite you to?attend?the exhibition with me.?The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad.
Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons?and that you will enjoy it.?I wonder?if?it is convenient for you?to join me in visiting the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【温馨提示】
1. 注意称呼部分,外教的名字是Henry David,要称呼Mr. David, 不可以称呼为Mr. Henry。Henry是名,David是姓,Mr. 后要跟姓,不可以跟名。但是Dear后面可以直接跟的是名。所以可以用Dear Henry;也可以用Dear Mr. David。
2. 注意动词的形式(I’ve got great…;I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons…);适时地使用非谓语动词(Knowing that you show…)。
3. Looking forward to 后接名词或者相当于名词的词,动词要用V-ing形式(Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.)
4. 结尾有礼貌用语和署名两部分,相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。最常用的是Sincerely yours或Yours sincerely,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,二者均可使用。
II. 邀请函、感谢信、应聘申请、投诉信的写作方法
1. 邀请函常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...
我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I wonder if you could come...
你是否能来……
My family and I would feel honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我和家人会倍感荣幸。
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...
我代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座。
We look forward to seeing you.
我们期待见到你。
We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.
我们期待你参加聚会。
We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on...
我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
There will be a ________ (内容) at / in ________(地点) on ________ (时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________ (具体时间).This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排).At around ________________ (时间),we will have ________________________ (另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. Reply (RSVP ), if you please before _________________________ (通知你的最后期限).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
2. 应聘申请常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper.
我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that...
我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...
我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...
我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in...
我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well.
我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as...
我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
(2) 写作模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a______________(工作名称).On one hand,____________________ (第一个原因).On the other hand,________________________ (另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at_____________ (电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
3. 感谢信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
Thank you so much for...
非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...
我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for...
写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...
因你……,我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...
我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.
我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for...
我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我,我不胜感激。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for__________________________ (感谢的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _____________________ (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who _____________________________ (给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
应用文写作注意要点
写作时,要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯,首先注意应用文的体裁;进入写作时注意人称选择恰当;注意正确应用谓语动词形式(如果多处出现谓语动词形式的错误,会降等级)。
1. 注意审题、时态、人称、层次等:在审题时要给所写的文章确定主要时态(现在时、过去时、将来时),在此基础上根据实际情况使用相应时态。此外,要注意层次分明,脉络清晰,让读者(特别是评卷教师)一目了然。
2. 注意韵色:考生要在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上,恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词等,尽量注意遣词造句,从而使相应形式的应用文提高等级档次。
3. 注意提炼:要注意提炼要点、理顺关系、总结归纳、突出重点;要学会用关联词、引导词把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合、运用自如。
4. 不同类型书信有所侧重:在撰写不同类型书信内容时要有所差异和侧重;但这些书信都有一些共同之处,掌握了这些共同点,再加之各自的特点,则可完成所相应书信写作。
5. 结尾礼貌用语:结尾的礼貌用语相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。英语书信中礼貌用语较多,如“Faithfully yours”,“Respectfully yours”,“Yours”等;“Faithfully yours”和“Respectfully yours”使用于正式书信中,而“Yours”使用于非正式书信中。最好用“Sincerely yours”或“Yours sincerely”,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,这两种均可采用。
6. 署名:标注写信人名字,但在考试中通常会指定写信人的名字,考生将写信人的名字摘抄下来既可。
I. 本章涉及的应用文写作要点
求职 / 应聘信,show your interest(展示你的兴趣);describe your previous experience:(描述自己以前的工作经验);explain why you would be suitable for the job(解释为什么你适合这项工作);Signature(署名)。
邀请信,Invite sb. to the party(邀请某人参加聚会);Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held(阐述举行这个聚会的原因);What activities will be arranged for sb.(将会为某人安排什么活动);Signature(署名)。
感谢信,需要先表示感谢之意,表达感激之情,根据具体情况介绍得到对方帮助后所取得的成效等等。注意问候语和署名。
投诉信,要先介绍购物情况;然后反映存在问题;再提出解决方案。
II. 本章涉及的应用文范文
1. 求职信 / 应聘申请:假如你是王宏,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for?Talent Show, Speech Contest, and?English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Li at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点与要求:表明写信意图;陈述应聘目的;说明应聘条件(性格、能力、等)。邮件词数不少于100;开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;不可以使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 ...
__________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文1】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3.?I’m writing to apply for the position as?a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity?because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,?I get along well with my classmates. Besides,?I have such a good command of English that?I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
2. 邀请信:假如你是王宏,得知你校外教John Smith寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信(80词左右),内容包括:时间;一同过节的家人;具体?活动。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文2】
January 29, 2019
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on February 5.?It’s traditionally?a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings?together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games?and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents.?
If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes,
Yours
Wang Hong
3. 感谢信:假如你是王宏,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据要求给Sue写封电子邮件表达感谢之情。内容包括:对她表达感谢之意;介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;了解她的近况。要求:词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;书写须清晰、工整;不可以出现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, …
__________________________________________________________________
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文3】
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
4. 投诉信:假如你是王宏,两周前你从网上购入一套书虫系列读物,昨天到的货,但是包装破损了,数量也不足。请给网店客服发一份邮件投诉(100词左右,其内容需要包括:介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词。
To customer service center,
I’m ...
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文4】
To customer service center,
I am one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
1.【2019 全国III卷 写作】
【题目要求】 假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加。
内容包括:1. 时间;
2. 活动安排;
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意事项:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.【2019 全国I卷 写作】
【题目要求】 假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
内容包括:1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意事项:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作练习一
邀请信:你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授John Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:
讲座时间:11月8日早上13点到15点;
讲座地点:2号教学楼102教室;
联系方式:englishsetting@163.com;
写作要求:词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作练习二
求职信:假如,你是王宏,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。词数100字左右;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English. Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:
1. Good at English.
2. Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail: midesch@163.com.
写作练习三
就餐投诉信:假如,你是王宏,你在酒店的窗口附近订了餐位,准备请两个美国朋友吃中国菜;但是酒店的服务令你失望。因为你们到酒店后,服务员告诉你们没有空位,结果你们被要求和一对老夫妇共用一张桌子;菜品不好吃,有的菜还很咸。请根据以上情况写一封投诉信。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
写作练习四
Translate the following into Chinese(英译汉)
1. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
2. Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the?Chinese customs.
3. If I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own?country.
4. I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional?culture.
5. If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
写作练习五
Translate the following into English(汉译英)
1. 我希望能得到您的认可,以下是一些相关的细节。
2. 我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。
3. 我还通过这封电子邮件向您发送了我们的培训计划。
4. 我们真诚地希望能作为团队合作伙伴参加比赛。
5. 我相信你们在北京大学期间会有最难忘的经历。
阅读写作--2 应用文(2)
(应聘申请、邀请函、感谢信、投诉信等)
写作基本格式、写作要点与范例
(解析卷)
黑龙江哈尔滨 邱尚瑛
在高考英语试卷中,写作不仅是必不可少的考试项目,也是整个英语试卷中最重要的项目之一。阅卷教师通过对考生写作部分的阅卷,可以看出考生对英语语言实际应用的水平。考生对写作内容的把握直接影响着写作部分的质量,而且写作部分也是最能反应考生英语水平的重要环节,对最终英语试卷得分的高低起着举足轻重的作用。高考英语作文一般满分为25分(150字左右),占总分数的16%,如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就可以轻松将许多考生甩在后面。批卷时,阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文大概以平均一分钟左右的速度审核,老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。通常,一等分数为21--25分;二等分数为16分--20分;三等分数为11--15分;四等分数在6—10分;最低档分数在6分以下。首先试卷的卷面干净整洁是获取较高的分数的基础,写作部分没有涂抹或修改,没有明显的错误拼写,字迹秀丽工整,用词用句注意短语、谚语等的使用;这些都可以给评卷教师一个良好的印象。因此,教师在辅导学生进行写作练习的时候,要提醒学生注意这些问题。并且辅导学生进行写作技巧的训练,对学生进行写作要点的点拨,指导学生注意运用写作技巧,注意审题立意,确定写作主题;注意拟提纲,定骨架;安排好层次段落;做好段落铺垫的过渡;处理好开头与结尾。同时,还要注意引导学生通过熟练掌握一些常用的短语、习语、谚语等进行书面表达。在这一讲里,我们主要复习总结应用文中的应聘、求职信、感谢信、投诉信等写作基本格式与写作要点。
I. 应用文写作概述(The Summary of Practical Writing)
英语书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,能给予考生畅所欲言的空间,可以使考生在感受英语学习的趣味与魅力的同时展示多彩思维活动的同时,考查考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,可以使考生突出英语学科的独有特征;要想书面表达拿高分,必须熟知应用文的写作要点与基本格式。
1. 基本注意事项
语篇信息齐全;丰富的句式表达;注意句与句之间的连贯性;语句流畅自然,层次清楚;应用较高级词汇;书面整洁。
2. 邀请信写作范例:
假如你是王宏,想邀请外教Henry David一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:展览时间;地点;展览内容。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
May 20, 2018
Dear Henry /Mr.David,
How are things with you?
I’ve got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.?Knowing that you show great interest in?Chinese culture,?I’d like to invite you to?attend?the exhibition with me.?The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad.
Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons?and that you will enjoy it.?I wonder?if?it is convenient for you?to join me in visiting the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【温馨提示】
1. 注意称呼部分,外教的名字是Henry David,要称呼Mr. David, 不可以称呼为Mr. Henry。Henry是名,David是姓,Mr. 后要跟姓,不可以跟名。但是Dear后面可以直接跟的是名。所以可以用Dear Henry;也可以用Dear Mr. David。
2. 注意动词的形式(I’ve got great…;I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons…);适时地使用非谓语动词(Knowing that you show…)。
3. Looking forward to 后接名词或者相当于名词的词,动词要用V-ing形式(Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.)
4. 结尾有礼貌用语和署名两部分,相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。最常用的是Sincerely yours或Yours sincerely,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,二者均可使用。
II. 邀请函、感谢信、应聘申请、投诉信的写作方法
1. 邀请函常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...
我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I wonder if you could come...
你是否能来……
My family and I would feel honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我和家人会倍感荣幸。
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...
我代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座。
We look forward to seeing you.
我们期待见到你。
We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.
我们期待你参加聚会。
We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on...
我们会万分感激如果你能就……进行讲座。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
There will be a ________ (内容) at / in ________(地点) on ________ (时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________ (具体时间).This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排).At around ________________ (时间),we will have ________________________ (另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. Reply (RSVP ), if you please before _________________________ (通知你的最后期限).
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
2. 应聘申请常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper.
我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that...
我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...
我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...
我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in...
我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well.
我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as...
我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
(2) 写作模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a______________(工作名称).On one hand,____________________ (第一个原因).On the other hand,________________________ (另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at_____________ (电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
3. 感谢信常用词语及模板:
(1) 常用词语
Thank you so much for...
非常感谢……
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...
我由衷地感谢你……
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for...
写此信来表达我的诚挚谢意……
I'm grateful to you for...
因你……,我深表谢意。
I truly appreciate your...
我真诚感谢你……
Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.
我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。
I take the opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for...
我借此机会向你表达我深深的谢意……
It's kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我,我不胜感激。
(2) 写作模板
Dear________,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for__________________________ (感谢的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in ___________________(对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _____________________ (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who _____________________________ (给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
应用文写作注意要点
写作时,要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯,首先注意应用文的体裁;进入写作时注意人称选择恰当;注意正确应用谓语动词形式(如果多处出现谓语动词形式的错误,会降等级)。
1. 注意审题、时态、人称、层次等:在审题时要给所写的文章确定主要时态(现在时、过去时、将来时),在此基础上根据实际情况使用相应时态。此外,要注意层次分明,脉络清晰,让读者(特别是评卷教师)一目了然。
2. 注意韵色:考生要在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上,恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词等,尽量注意遣词造句,从而使相应形式的应用文提高等级档次。
3. 注意提炼:要注意提炼要点、理顺关系、总结归纳、突出重点;要学会用关联词、引导词把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合、运用自如。
4. 不同类型书信有所侧重:在撰写不同类型书信内容时要有所差异和侧重;但这些书信都有一些共同之处,掌握了这些共同点,再加之各自的特点,则可完成所相应书信写作。
5. 结尾礼貌用语:结尾的礼貌用语相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。英语书信中礼貌用语较多,如“Faithfully yours”,“Respectfully yours”,“Yours”等;“Faithfully yours”和“Respectfully yours”使用于正式书信中,而“Yours”使用于非正式书信中。最好用“Sincerely yours”或“Yours sincerely”,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,这两种均可采用。
6. 署名:标注写信人名字,但在考试中通常会指定写信人的名字,考生将写信人的名字摘抄下来既可。
I. 本章涉及的应用文写作要点
求职 / 应聘信,show your interest(展示你的兴趣);describe your previous experience:(描述自己以前的工作经验);explain why you would be suitable for the job(解释为什么你适合这项工作);Signature(署名)。
邀请信,Invite sb. to the party(邀请某人参加聚会);Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held(阐述举行这个聚会的原因);What activities will be arranged for sb.(将会为某人安排什么活动);Signature(署名)。
感谢信,需要先表示感谢之意,表达感激之情,根据具体情况介绍得到对方帮助后所取得的成效等等。注意问候语和署名。
投诉信,要先介绍购物情况;然后反映存在问题;再提出解决方案。
II. 本章涉及的应用文范文
1. 求职信 / 应聘申请:假如你是王宏,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for?Talent Show, Speech Contest, and?English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Li at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点与要求:表明写信意图;陈述应聘目的;说明应聘条件(性格、能力、等)。邮件词数不少于100;开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;不可以使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 ...
__________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文1】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3.?I’m writing to apply for the position as?a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity?because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,?I get along well with my classmates. Besides,?I have such a good command of English that?I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
2. 邀请信:假如你是王宏,得知你校外教John Smith寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信(80词左右),内容包括:时间;一同过节的家人;具体?活动。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文2】
January 29, 2019
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on February 5.?It’s traditionally?a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings?together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games?and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents.?
If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes,
Yours
Wang Hong
3. 感谢信:假如你是王宏,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据要求给Sue写封电子邮件表达感谢之情。内容包括:对她表达感谢之意;介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;了解她的近况。要求:词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;书写须清晰、工整;不可以出现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, …
__________________________________________________________________
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文3】
Dear Sue,
I’m Wang Hong, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang Hong
4. 投诉信:假如你是王宏,两周前你从网上购入一套书虫系列读物,昨天到的货,但是包装破损了,数量也不足。请给网店客服发一份邮件投诉(100词左右,其内容需要包括:介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词。
To customer service center,
I’m ...
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文4】
To customer service center,
I am one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
1.【2019 全国III卷 写作】
【题目要求】 假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加。
内容包括:1. 时间;
2. 活动安排;
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意事项:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
【写作解析】
首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。然后,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。最后注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【温馨提示】 本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。因而提升了文章的档次。
2.【2019 全国I卷 写作】
【题目要求】 假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
内容包括:1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意事项:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.
The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】
这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型,可以按照申请信的思路来写,同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。首先要进行自我介绍,简要交代写作背景,阐明写信目的。第二段是文章的主题,要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来,文章用First of all,What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。
写作练习一
邀请信:你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授John Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:
讲座时间:11月8日早上13点到15点;
讲座地点:2号教学楼102教室;
联系方式:englishsetting@163.com;
写作要求:词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Professor Smith,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 13 o’clock and end at 15 o’clock on Nov. 8th in Classroom 102 of the second teaching building.
As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.
Could you please contact us in advance at englishsetting@163.com if you could come to our culture festival?
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习二
求职信:假如,你是王宏,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。词数100字左右;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English. Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:
1. Good at English.
2. Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail: midesch@163.com.
【参考范文】
June, 20, 2018
Dear Sir,
I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.
I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.
In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time.
It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习三
就餐投诉信:假如,你是王宏,你在酒店的窗口附近订了餐位,准备请两个美国朋友吃中国菜;但是酒店的服务令你失望。因为你们到酒店后,服务员告诉你们没有空位,结果你们被要求和一对老夫妇共用一张桌子;菜品不好吃,有的菜还很咸。请根据以上情况写一封投诉信。要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
Last Friday, I booked a table near the window for dinner in your hotel as I was going to treat my two American friends to a typical Chinese meal, but I’m quite disappointed with your service.
We went there at the time as arranged, the waiter told us there were no seats available. After about one and a half hours, we were asked to share a table with an old couple. The food was not delicious and some dishes were too salty.
I’ll appreciate it if you can look into this case.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong
写作练习四
Translate the following into Chinese(英译汉)
1. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
我写信申请成为我们学校英语协会的志愿者。
2. Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the?Chinese customs.
得知你要去拜访一位中国朋友,但对中国的风俗习惯不了解。
3. If I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own?country.
如果我是你,我会带一些适合的礼物,比如:带一些我们国家的纪念品。
4. I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional?culture.
我建议您提前5到10分钟到达,这在中国传统文化中很常见。
5. If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
如果您还有其他问题,请随时与我联系。
写作练习五
Translate the following into English(汉译英)
1. 我希望能得到您的认可,以下是一些相关的细节。
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.
2. 我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities.
3. 我还通过这封电子邮件向您发送了我们的培训计划。
With this Email I also send you our training plan.
4. 我们真诚地希望能作为团队合作伙伴参加比赛。
We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
5. 我相信你们在北京大学期间会有最难忘的经历。
I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
课件37张PPT。阅读写作--2 应用文(2)
(应聘申请、邀请函、感谢信、投诉信等)
写作基本格式、写作要点与范例考纲解读1. 作文得分的等级:一等 21--25分;二等 16分--20分;三等 11--15分;四等 6—10分;最低档分数 6分以下。
2. 卷面:干净整洁是获取较高的分数的基础,写作部分没有涂抹或修改,没有明显的错误拼写,字迹秀丽工整,用词用句注意短语、谚语等的使用。
3. 写作技巧:注意运用写作技巧、审题立意;确定写作主题;拟提纲、定骨架;安排好层次段落;做好段落铺垫的过渡;处理好开头与结尾。熟练掌握一些常用的短语、习语、谚语等进行书面表达。邀请信写作范例 假如你是王宏,想邀请外教 Henry David一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写封邮件(100词左右),内容包括:展览时间;地点;展览内容。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry /Mr.David,
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文】Dear Henry /Mr.David,
How are things with you?
I've got great news for you. There will be an art exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting this month.?Knowing that you show great interest in?Chinese culture,?I'd like to invite you to?attend?the exhibition with me.?The exhibition, to be held in the City Hall of Xi’an, lasts for seven days from June 6th to 12th, which attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad.【参考范文】Dear Henry /Mr.David,
Featuring Chinese paper-cutting, the exhibition not only shows a variety of paper-cuts in different regions, but also presents to us the history and development of paper-cutting in China. I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons?and that you will enjoy it.?I wonder?if?it is convenient for you?to join me in visiting the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong1. 注意称呼部分,外教的名字是 Henry David,要称呼Mr. David, 不可以称呼为Mr. Henry。Henry是名,David是姓,Mr. 后要跟姓,不可以跟名。但是Dear后面可以直接跟的是名。所以可以用Dear Henry;也可以用Dear Mr. David。
2. 注意动词的形式(I've got great…;I am sure that it will?broaden your horizons…);适时地使用非谓语动词(Knowing that you show…)。
3. Looking forward to 后接名词或者相当于名词的词,动词要用V-ing形式(Looking forward to your reply and seeing you.)
4. 结尾有礼貌用语和署名两部分,相当于汉语信件中的“此致,敬礼”。最常用的是 Sincerely yours 或 Yours sincerely,因为无论正式书信还是非正式书信,二者均可使用。【写作要点与提示】 I. 本章涉及的应用文写作要点求职 / 应聘信:show your interest(展示你的兴趣);describe your previous experience:(描述自己以前的工作经验);explain why you would be suitable for the job(解释为什么你适合这项工作);Signature(署名)。
邀请信:Invite sb. to the party(邀请某人参加聚会);Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held(阐述举行这个聚会的原因);What activities will be arranged for sb.(将会为某人安排什么活动);Signature(署名)。
感谢信: 需要先表示感谢之意,表达感激之情,根据具体情况介绍得到对方帮助后所取得的成效等等。注意问候语和署名。
投诉信: 要先介绍购物情况;然后反映存在问题;再提出解决方案。II. 本章涉及的应用文范文1. 求职信 / 应聘申请:假如你是王宏,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Li at chenlaoshi@aef.com.【写作要点与要求】表明写信意图;陈述应聘目的;说明应聘条件(性格、能力、等)。邮件词数不少于100;开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;不可以使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Ms Li,
I'm Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3... ___________
__________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Wang HongDear Ms Li,
I'm Wang Hong, a student from Class 1, Grade 3. ?I’m writing to apply for the position as?a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity?because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,?I get along well with my classmates. Besides,?I have such a good command of English that?I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. 【参考范文-1】 Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文-1】II. 本章涉及的应用文范文2. 邀请信:假如你是王宏,得知你校外教 John Smith寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信(80词左右),内容包括:时间;一同过节的家人;具体?活动。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
January 29, 2019
Dear Mr. Smith,
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文-2】Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on February 5.?It's traditionally?a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We'll make dumplings?together and have a big dinner. We'll also play card games?and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents.?
If you're able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang HongII. 本章涉及的应用文范文3. 感谢信:假如你是王宏,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据要求给Sue写封电子邮件表达感谢之情。内容包括:对她表达感谢之意;介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;了解她的近况。要求:词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;书写须清晰、工整;不可以出现本人真实信息。
Dear Sue,
I'm Wang Hong ...___________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
All the best wishes.
Yours,
Wang HongDear Sue,
I'm Wang Hong, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help.
Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? 【参考范文-3】 Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch..
All the best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文-3】II. 本章涉及的应用文范文4. 投诉信:假如你是王宏,两周前你从网上购入一套书虫系列读物,昨天到货,但是包装破损了,数量也不足。请给网店客服发一份邮件投诉(100词左右,其内容需要包括:介绍购物情况;反映存在问题;提出解决方案。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词。
To customer service center,
I'm ... _______________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang HongTo customer service center,
I'm one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文-4】1.【2019 全国III卷 写作】
【题目要求】假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加。
内容包括:1. 时间;
2. 活动安排;
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意事项:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。挑战真题阅读写作-2 应用文(2)Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Li Hua【参考范文】写作技巧:
先确定提纲,介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。然后根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。最后注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【温馨提示】
本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。因而提升了文章的档次。【写作解析】挑战真题2.【2019 全国 I卷 写作】
【题目要求】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
内容包括:1. 写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意事项:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。挑战真题阅读写作-2 应用文(2)Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. 【参考范文】 The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua【参考范文】 这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型,可以按照申请信的思路来写,同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
首先要进行自我介绍,简要交代写作背景,阐明写信目的。第二段是文章的主题,要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来,文章用First of all,What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。
最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。【写作解析】挑战真题巩固训练邀请信:
你校新华中学将于下周末举行第二届校文化节,学生会主席李华代表学校全体师生邀请北京大学大学外籍教授John Smith先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。信的内容包括:
讲座时间:11月8日早上13点到15点;
讲座地点:2号教学楼102教室;
联系方式:englishsetting@163.com;
写作要求:词数100左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作练习一】Dear Professor Smith,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 13 o’clock and end at 15 o'clock on Nov. 8th in Classroom 102 of the second teaching building.
As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China,【参考范文】so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.
Could you please contact us in advance at englishsetting@163.com if you could come to our culture festival?
We are looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文】巩固训练求职信:
假如,你是王宏,从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员,负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。词数100字左右;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【写作练习二】ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English. Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached: 1. Good at English.
2. Experienced priority.
Contact us by e-mail: midesch@163.com.Dear Sir,
I'd like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.
I've just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.
In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I'm available for interview at any time.
It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文】巩固训练就餐投诉信:
假如,你是王宏,你在酒店的窗口附近订了餐位,准备请两个美国朋友吃中国菜;但是酒店的服务令你失望。因为你们到酒店后,服务员告诉你们没有空位,结果你们被要求和一对老夫妇共用一张桌子;菜品不好吃,有的菜还很咸。
请根据以上情况写一封投诉信。
要求:词数100左右;可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。 【写作练习三】Dear Sir,
Last Friday, I booked a table near the window for dinner in your hotel as I was going to treat my two American friends to a typical Chinese meal, but I’m quite disappointed with your service.
We went there at the time as arranged, the waiter told us there were no seats available. After about one and a half hours, we were asked to share a table with an old couple. The food was not delicious and some dishes were too salty.
I’ll appreciate it if you can look into this case.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hong【参考范文】巩固训练Translate the following into Chinese: 【写作练习四】我写信申请成为我们学校英语协会的志愿者。 1. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association. 得知你要去拜访一位中国朋友,但对中国的风俗习惯不了解。 2. Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the?Chinese customs. 巩固训练【写作练习四】如果我是你,我会带一些适合的礼物,比如:带一些我们国家的纪念品。 3. If I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own?country. 我建议您提前5到10分钟到达,这在中国传统文化中很常见。 4. I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional?culture. 如果您还有其他问题,请随时与我联系。 5. If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me. 巩固训练Translate the following into English: 【写作练习五】1. 我希望能得到您的认可,以下是一些相关的细节。 I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. 2. 我对这份工作特别感兴趣,因为我想进一步提高我的英语口语能力。 I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities. 3. 我还通过这封电子邮件向您发送了我们的培训计划。 With this Email I also send you our training plan. 巩固训练Translate the following into English: 【写作练习五】4. 我们真诚地希望能作为团队合作伙伴参加比赛。 We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners. 5. 我相信你们在北京大学期间会有最难忘的经历。 I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. 感谢欣赏