外研英语必修3Module6 Old and New Writing（共18张PPT）

(共18张PPT)


Module 6 Old and New
Writing

Warming- up








The Great Wall
The Three Gorges Dam
The Qinghai-Tibet railway
Intelligent robot
Hongkong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge
Satellite
High-speed railway

Struggle for our nation;
Struggle for our future.

Lead in
Read the email and answer the questions:
1.Does the writer of the email live in Zigui County?
2.Why did she want to visit the region?
3.What has changed since the last time she was there?


Writing task
假如你是李华，请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，告诉他你第二次去深圳旅游所看到的深圳这座城市的变化。内容包括：
1. 街道
2.交通
3.建筑
要求：1.词数不少于100字；
2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3.书写须清晰工整。
4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5. 邮件中不能出现本人真实信息。

Step1: Pre-writing
Task 1: Read quickly and know about the structure of this email.
Dear Mike,
How is everything going ? I am very glad to tell you something about what I see during my second trip to Shanghai.
Nowhere is changing faster than Shanghai. WhenI was 10 years old, I visited the city for the first time.I could see many unattractive old buildings in Pudong. Meanwhile, the streets were narrow and the shops were dark and uninteresting, which did not leave a very good impression.However,everything has changed during my second trip to Shanghai. Now Pudong is an exciting place with its coloured lights and fantastic shops full of everything. Everywhere there are new tunnels and bridges which carry the ever-increasing traffic under or over the river.

How wonderful it will be to have a trip with you! I hope you can come to Shanghai if possible. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.

Yours,
Li Hua

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Name


Greeting and raising topic

Body
Body

EE
Expressing hoping
SSS
Signature
Task 2: Read the body of the mail again and find the important adjective words.

Nowhere is changing faster than Shanghai. When I was 10 years old, I visited the city for the first time. I could see many unattractive old buildings in Pudong. Meanwhile, the streets were narrow and the shops were dark and uninteresting, which did not leave a very good impression. However, everything has changed during my second trip to Shanghai. Now Pudong is an exciting place with its coloured lights and fantastic shops full of everything. Everywhere there are new tunnels and bridges which carry the ever-increasing traffic under or over the river.



unattractive
and old
narrow
dark and uninteresting
In the past
Shanghai

traffic or streets

buildings
shops
Today
Shanghai

an exciting place
coloured
fantastic
new
ever--incresing
Task 3: Read the body of the mail again and find the important and senior sentences.

Nowhere is changing faster than Shanghai. When I was 10 years old, I visited the city for the first time. I could see many unattractive old buildings in Pudong. Meanwhile, the streets were narrow and the shops were dark and uninteresting, which did not leave a very good impression. However, everything has changed during my second trip to Shanghai. Now Pudong is an exciting place with its coloured lights and fantastic shops full of everything. Everywhere there are new tunnels and bridges which carry the ever-increasing traffic under or over the river.



Task 4: Read the body of the mail again and fill in the linking words and complementizer（引导词）.

Nowhere is changing faster than Shanghai. ______I was 10 years old, I visited the city for the first time. I could see many unattractive old buildings in Pudong. ________, the streets were narrow and the shops were dark and uninteresting, ______did not leave a very good impression.________, everything has changed during my second trip to Shanghai. Now Pudong is an exciting place with its coloured lights ______ fantastic shops full of everything. Everywhere there are new tunnels and bridges ________ carry the ever-increasing traffic under or over the river.



When
Meanwhile
which
However
and
which
Step 2: While-writing
Task1: Before writing, you should write an outline(列提纲)
Outline

Para1:___________________________________





Para2:__________________________________




Para3:__________________________________________






greeting and raising the topic
Body -------in the past-----adjective words and senoir sentences
today ----------adjective words and senoir sentences
linking words and compementizer(引导词)
Expressing hoping
Task2: Please use the outline to help you to finish your letter quickly.
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,
Li Hua
Step3:Post-writing
Task 1:Self-editing （自我纠错）
How many did you get in total?

d
Read your letter by yourself and tick√.
handwriting:

Structure:

Greeting:

Raising the topic:

In the past:

Today:

Tense:

Linking words and complementizer:








√
√
√
√
√
√
√
√
Step3:Post-writing
Task 2:Peer-editing （同伴纠错）
How many did you get in total?

d
Read your letter by yourself and tick√.
handwriting:

Structure:

Greeting:

Raising the topic:

In the past:

Today:

Tense:

Linking words and complementizer:








Presentation

Tips:
Speak aloud
Be confident
1.Hand in this writing.
2.Try to find more words and sentences that can be used to describe buildings and streets.
3.Recite these relative words and sentences.
Homework:

Thanks！