人教高中英语必修4Unit1Women of achievement An introduction to a person writing(共15张PPT)

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(共15张PPT)
人物传记的写作

(An introduction to a person)
基本信息:
此类写作是记叙文的一种,主要以人物为中心组织材料,围绕具体事件来写;
介绍人物一般以时间顺序进行叙述;
以第三人称为主;
时态一般选用一般过去时。
写作原则:
文章结构:总——分——总
(引入部分,正文部分,结尾部分)


总: 总体介绍人物(姓名,身份,地位,主要成就)

成长经历,教育情况,
兴趣爱好,性格品质,
工作经历,感人事迹,
突出成绩, 功过是非

总: 总结评价人物:影响,启示

具体介绍人物:
分:
人物传记的写作模式:
(一)人物简介的写作步骤;(概,貌,育,平,评)
概况)age, sex, birth-place, background
外貌)appearance ,character
教育)education
生平)big events in one’s life ( in order of time )
评价)evaluation
A. 概况 (尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺)
Lin Qiaozhi was born in/into a poor family in 1901.She is a specialist in women’s diseases.
1)______________________________________
_____________________________(定语从句).
2)Born in/into a ______ family in _____(地点) on _____(时间), XXX is a ________________.
3) XXX , the son of a _____ family, was born in ______ (地点)on _____(时间).
Lin Qiaozhi who is a specialist in women’s diseases was born in a poor family in 1901.
B.外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语)
梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜。
Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted boy _____________________________.
杨扬很漂亮,有着长长的头发。
Yang Yang is good-looking /ordinary-looking /funny-looking____________________.
with a pair of glasses on his nose
with long hair
C.生平 (尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定语从句等,润色文章)
1)侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。
Hou Yaowen not only is interested in science but also
has a gift for music.(用not only …but also倒装句改写)
Not only_____________________________, but also
________________________.
2)祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录,为国家作出了贡献。(用非限制性定语从句表达)
Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming
,______________________________________.
is Hou Yaowen interested in science
he has a gift for music
which makes a great contribution to China.
D.教育背景
be admitted to….university
graduate from…department of…university
get a good education
get/receive a bachelor/ master/ doctor’s degree
major in…
gain scholarship
E.评价 (注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组)
think/speak highly of…
set a good example to sb. = set sb. a good example
famous/well known at home and abroad
make great contributions to=make a great contribution to …
be remembered as/by…forever
裴继升给我们作出了榜样, 大家都赞扬他。
Pei Jishen _________________________,so all the people ________________________him.
sets us a good example
speak highly of
请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文,简要介绍一下宋庆龄,可适当增加细节。
1.宋庆龄(Song Qingling)1893年出生于上海一个富裕的家庭,受到良好的教育,并留学美国。
2.1915年嫁给孙中山(Dr. Sun Yat-sen);后来成为中华人民共和国国家名誉主席(an honorary president of the People’s Republic of China)。
3.她一生平易近人,晚年不仅热衷于中国妇女儿童的福利事业,而且创办了专为妇女和儿童服务的中国福利会(the China Welfare Institute),并领导中国妇女联合会(the Women’s Federation).
4.此外,她也为人权(civil right) 、民主(democracy)与和平而努力工作。
注意:字数 100-120字左右。
【思路点拨】
本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手:
一.注意文章的时态和人称;
二.把握文章的结构
1.第一段:简单介绍宋庆龄。
2.第二段:详细介绍宋庆龄。
3.第三段:从客观和主观两方面对宋庆龄进行评价。

Song Qingling
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________.
In 1915, she married Dr. Sun Yat-sen , who had a great influence on China.__________(后来),Song Qingling ____________________________ an honorary president of the People’s Republic of China. She was ___________________________________
(平易近人)during her whole life.

Song Qingling was born into a rich family in Shanghai in 1893, so she got a good education. And she went to study in the USA.
Later
was chosen to be
warm-hearted/kind-hearted and easy-going
She not only _____________________ the welfare of women and children in her later years but also _________________________________the China Welfare Institute, ___________________________ serve women and children now.
B.(用not only …but also 倒装句改写)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
She also led the Women’s Federation._____________
(此外),she worked hard for civil rights, democracy and peace.



concerned herself with
started/founded/established/organized
which is designed/intended to
Not only did she concern herself with the welfare of women and children in her later years, but also she started the China Welfare Institute , which is intended to serve women and children now.
In addition
Homework
1.Rewrite your composition and recite it.
2.Review Unit 2 .
(Thank you for your coming.)