外研英语必修 3Module 3 The Violence of Nature writing课件（共20张PPT）

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Module 3　The Violence of Nature

A Severe Earthquake
本模块的写作文体是介绍自然灾害的说明文,我们以地震为例，指导学生如何写好关于自然灾害方面题材的英语写作。


写作指导

Writing a report about a natural event
一、地震发生时间地点
1、A severe earthquake hit
2、A severe earthquake struck
3、A severe earthquake happened in
4、A severe earthquake occurred in


常用句式
二、地震造成的重大人员伤亡
1、 地震给当地人民造成了具大的破坏
2、多少人死亡，多少人受伤,多少人失踪
3、 多少房屋倒塌，变成无家可归
4、更糟糕的是，余震不断，造成极大的恐慌


常用句式
二、地震造成的重大人员伤亡
1、 brought about great damage to people there
2、_______people were dead and _______people were injured
3、 The earthquake caused a lot of houses to collapse and many people became homeless.
4、What was worse, there was a nuclear leakage, which added to people’s panic.


常用句式
三、地震灾后人民生活遇到的具体问题
1、 意想不到的灾害导致许多问题
2、人们处在麻烦当中
3、震后，断水断电
4、而且食品短缺



常用句式
三、地震灾后人民生活遇到的具体问题
1、 The unexpected disaster resulted in plenty of problems.
2、The people were still in trouble.
3、After the earthquake , water,gas and electricity were cut off.
4、Moreover, the local people were suffering the shortage of food and clear water.
the nuclear leakage polluted the fresh water in some area, which was unfit for people to drink.


常用句式
四、经济损失及灾后重建情况
1、据估计经济损失达多少亿美元
2、政府立即采取行动
3、外界捐款捐物、派来救援队和志愿者



常用句式
四、经济损失及灾后重建情况
1、As is estimated, this disaster has caused a loss of more than 200 billion dollars.
2、The government took action immediately to search for the survivors,save the injured and accommodate the homeless people.
3、Many countries sent rescue teams to help the government.
4、A lot of supplies were donated to ?the Earthquake-striken Area .


常用句式
五、情况正变得越来越好
As days passed by , it was hoped that the situation would get better and better.


常用句式
根据以下提示用英语写一篇100词左右关于日本地震情况的文章。题目为“A Severe Earthquake”。受灾情况如下：
1. 根据日本警方最新公布的数据，2011年日本“3·11”大地震至今的7年零3个月中，警方已确认有1.84万人在地震中死亡或失踪。而在震后避难、恢复期间死亡或失踪的人则有3600余人。14万4000人在外避难，无家可归。
2.地震引发海啸(tsunami)与核泄露(a nuclear leakage)；
3.引发很多问题：电力供应短缺，还出现饮用水安全危机……
经济损失：估计超过2 000亿美元。
参考词汇：救援队rescue team；估计estimate


典题示例
Step One　审题谋篇
写作要求是写一篇关于地震的文章。写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文，写作时，要说明地震发生的时间、地点、危害以及采取的措施。注意采用客观态度。
2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称：人称应以第三人称为主。
写作步骤
Step Two　联想词汇
1.根据 ___________
2.更糟糕的是 _________________________________
________________
3.增加某人的恐慌 ________________
4.导致 ______________
5.某人不适合做某事 ____________________
according to
what’s worse或to make things/matters worse或worse still
add to one’s panic
lead to/result in
be unfit for sb.to do sth.
Step Three　句式升级
1.一场强地震突袭，引发了很高的海啸。
A huge earthquake occurred suddenly a high tsunami.
(简单句)
A huge earthquake occurred suddenly， a high tsunami.(现在分词作状语)
A huge earthquake occurred suddenly， a high tsunami.
(非限制性定语从句)
and caused
causing
which caused
2.更糟糕的是，出现了核泄露，增加了人们的恐慌。
，there was a nuclear leakage， added to people’s panic.(what’s worse；并列句)
，there was a nuclear leakage， people’s panic.(worse still；非限制性定语从句)
，there was a nuclear leakage，_________ people’s panic.(to make matters worse；现在分词短语作状语)
What was worse
and it
Worse still
which added to
To make matters worse
adding to
3.随着时间的推移，我们希望状况会好转。
，we hoped that the situation would get better.(with复合结构)
， the situation would get better.(as引导时间状语从句；it作形式主语)
4.据估计，这场灾难造成的经济损失超过2 000亿美元。
this disaster has caused a loss of more than 200 billion dollars.(it作形式主语)
，this disaster has caused a loss of more than 200 billion dollars.(as引导定语从句)
With time going by
As time went by
it was hoped that
It is estimated that
As is estimated
Step Four　连句成篇
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A Severe Earthquake
A huge earthquake occurred suddenly，causing a high tsunami，bringing about great damage to people there.According to the recent report，more than 10,000 people were killed and over 20,000 were missing.What was worse，there was a nuclear leakage，which added to people’s panic.
Though lots of countries sent many rescue teams to help them，they were still in trouble.The unexpected disaster resulted in plenty of problems，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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such as the shortage of electricity supply.Moreover，the nuclear leakage polluted the fresh water in some areas，which was unfit for babies to drink.But as days passed by，it was hoped that the situation would get better.
As is estimated，this disaster has caused a loss of more than 200 billion dollars.



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