人教英语选修7 Unit4 Sharing How to write a good composition课件（共50张PPT）
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(共50张PPT)
Learning About Composition Writing
What difficulties do you often have in writing?
What should a good composition be like ?
Requirements:
整洁清楚的书写和卷面
准确规范的标点
词数适当100→ 120 ←150
Let’s scan some kinds of handwriting that are not appreciated by teachers.
黑蚂蚁的飞行式：
随意的草稿式
无力隐遁式
卑微的颤抖式
蓝色长腿欧巴式
远距离的恋爱式：
漫天飞舞式
Some neat and clear handwriting.
Really neat and pretty
Requirements:
完成试题要求的任务
(1) 覆盖内容所有要点；
(2) 要求紧扣,结构紧凑；
有较强的语用能力（数量+准确+连贯）
(3) 运用较多语法结构
(4) 使用较复杂或较高级词汇；
(5) 篇章段落及前后文连贯好；
(6) 较少错误
假定你是王强，有一批英国的交流生要来邵武参观学习。市政府外事办打算招募一些高中生志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按照下面内容要点用英语给市政府外事办写一封申请信。
内容要点：
1.个人情况:年龄,性别……
2.你的优势
3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:1.词数120左右.? 2.交流生：exchange students
Dear Sir / Madam,????My name is Wang Qiang.__________________________________________
?
Yours,
Wang Qiang
structure
Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
the purpose of the e-mail (the beginning)
self-introduction and the aims of taking part in the summer camp (the body)
hoping to be accepted (the ending)
Here is an article.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Please find out the errors in the passage and correct them.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
a volunteer
communicating
helping
with
give
working
for
disappoint
hearing
from you.
We can polish the composition to make it better. Let’s work hard .
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, I’m familiar with Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service for them. I won’t disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, I’m familiar with Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service for them. I won’t disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
the same subject “I”
simple words
simple transitions（过渡词）
simple sentences
four aspects & ways of improving them:
use different sentences (使用多样句型)
change the subject (改变主语/物化主语)
use good transitions (使用好的过渡连接)
use advanced phrases (使用高级词汇)
Ⅰ. change the subject (改变主语)：
1. I’ll provide the best service for them.
→________________________________ is my goal.
(-ing形式作主语)
→ It is my goal ______________________________. ( (用it形式主语)
2. I like helping others.
→__________________________________________.
(-ing形式作主语)
→__________________________________________.
(用it形式主语)
Providing the best service for them
to provide the best service for them.
Helping others is my favorite/ what I like .
It is my favorite to help others.
Ⅱ.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇)
of (great) importance
be ready to / be willing to …
Word
Phrase
I like helping others.
2. I like science and culture.
3. This is important to the work.
be fond of/ be interested in /
have great interest in…
Ⅱ.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇)
Simple phrase
Advanced phrase
I’m good at English.
2. I’ll try my best to provide the best service.
have a good knowledge of/ have a good command of
spare no effort /make every effort/ make efforts …
III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
1. Phrases: (选取高级连接词)
表层次顺序，罗列增加： first,…second, …third,…fourth,…last…
to begin/start with, furthermore, moreover,
in addition, last but not least
above all, besides,
what’s more, in addition to that,
last but not least
III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
2. Sentences:（加上常见句型开头）
I’m familiar with Shaowu.
→ There is no ________ that I’m familiar with Shaowu.
doubt
Ⅳ. use different sentences (使用多样句型）
1. I’m familiar with Shaowu. It’s important to the work.
I’m familiar with Shaowu,____________________ _______________________ (定语从句)
2. I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu.
I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School.
_________________________________________
____________________________________.
(过去分词作状语和定语从句)
which is of great
importance to the work.
Born in Shaowu
, I’m a 19-year-old boy,
who is studying in Shaowu No.4 Middle School.
Ⅳ. use different sentences (使用多样句型）
3. I won’t disappoint you.
（inversion倒装）
By no means_____________________.
will I disappoint you
5. I’ll provide the best service for them.
→ It is _____________ that _________________.
(emphasis使用强调句）
Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型）
the best service
I’ll provide for them
6. I like science and culture.
→ I ____ like science and culture. (emphasis）
do
Please rewrite this article according what we’ve just learnt .
Share and present your works please.
One Possible Version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students.
Born in Shaowu, I’m a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, I do like science and culture. Furthermore, I’m good at communicating with others. In addition, it’s my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that I’m familiar with Shaowu, which is of great importance to the work.
If given the chance, I’ll spare no effort to provide the best service for them. In no case will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Advice about how to improve your writing
1.Reading is the source of writing. Do remember to read some beautiful sentences and articles every day.
2. Some basic knowledge and skills:
Vocabulary and grammar
3.Practice makes perfect.
It is practice that really matters.
Practice
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）
3.希望获准
注意：
1.词数120左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Try to use: -ing form 作主语或状语/ attributive clause (定语从句）/ emphasis (强调）/ inversion (倒装）/ ellipsis (省略)
Homework:
Homework:
Write a complete application
e-mail on the last page.
Learning About Composition Writing
What difficulties do you often have in writing?
What should a good composition be like ?
Requirements:
整洁清楚的书写和卷面
准确规范的标点
词数适当100→ 120 ←150
Let’s scan some kinds of handwriting that are not appreciated by teachers.
黑蚂蚁的飞行式：
随意的草稿式
无力隐遁式
卑微的颤抖式
蓝色长腿欧巴式
远距离的恋爱式：
漫天飞舞式
Some neat and clear handwriting.
Really neat and pretty
Requirements:
完成试题要求的任务
(1) 覆盖内容所有要点；
(2) 要求紧扣,结构紧凑；
有较强的语用能力（数量+准确+连贯）
(3) 运用较多语法结构
(4) 使用较复杂或较高级词汇；
(5) 篇章段落及前后文连贯好；
(6) 较少错误
假定你是王强，有一批英国的交流生要来邵武参观学习。市政府外事办打算招募一些高中生志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按照下面内容要点用英语给市政府外事办写一封申请信。
内容要点：
1.个人情况:年龄,性别……
2.你的优势
3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:1.词数120左右.? 2.交流生：exchange students
Dear Sir / Madam,????My name is Wang Qiang.__________________________________________
?
Yours,
Wang Qiang
structure
Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
the purpose of the e-mail (the beginning)
self-introduction and the aims of taking part in the summer camp (the body)
hoping to be accepted (the ending)
Here is an article.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Please find out the errors in the passage and correct them.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
a volunteer
communicating
helping
with
give
working
for
disappoint
hearing
from you.
We can polish the composition to make it better. Let’s work hard .
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, I’m familiar with Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service for them. I won’t disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, I’m familiar with Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service for them. I won’t disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England.
I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu. I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, I’m good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, I’m good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, I’m familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work.
If you gave me the chance, I’ll try my best to provide the best service to them. I won’t disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
the same subject “I”
simple words
simple transitions（过渡词）
simple sentences
four aspects & ways of improving them:
use different sentences (使用多样句型)
change the subject (改变主语/物化主语)
use good transitions (使用好的过渡连接)
use advanced phrases (使用高级词汇)
Ⅰ. change the subject (改变主语)：
1. I’ll provide the best service for them.
→________________________________ is my goal.
(-ing形式作主语)
→ It is my goal ______________________________. ( (用it形式主语)
2. I like helping others.
→__________________________________________.
(-ing形式作主语)
→__________________________________________.
(用it形式主语)
Providing the best service for them
to provide the best service for them.
Helping others is my favorite/ what I like .
It is my favorite to help others.
Ⅱ.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇)
of (great) importance
be ready to / be willing to …
Word
Phrase
I like helping others.
2. I like science and culture.
3. This is important to the work.
be fond of/ be interested in /
have great interest in…
Ⅱ.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇)
Simple phrase
Advanced phrase
I’m good at English.
2. I’ll try my best to provide the best service.
have a good knowledge of/ have a good command of
spare no effort /make every effort/ make efforts …
III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
1. Phrases: (选取高级连接词)
表层次顺序，罗列增加： first,…second, …third,…fourth,…last…
to begin/start with, furthermore, moreover,
in addition, last but not least
above all, besides,
what’s more, in addition to that,
last but not least
III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接)
2. Sentences:（加上常见句型开头）
I’m familiar with Shaowu.
→ There is no ________ that I’m familiar with Shaowu.
doubt
Ⅳ. use different sentences (使用多样句型）
1. I’m familiar with Shaowu. It’s important to the work.
I’m familiar with Shaowu,____________________ _______________________ (定语从句)
2. I’m a boy and I’m 19. I was born in Shaowu.
I’m a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School.
_________________________________________
____________________________________.
(过去分词作状语和定语从句)
which is of great
importance to the work.
Born in Shaowu
, I’m a 19-year-old boy,
who is studying in Shaowu No.4 Middle School.
Ⅳ. use different sentences (使用多样句型）
3. I won’t disappoint you.
（inversion倒装）
By no means_____________________.
will I disappoint you
5. I’ll provide the best service for them.
→ It is _____________ that _________________.
(emphasis使用强调句）
Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型）
the best service
I’ll provide for them
6. I like science and culture.
→ I ____ like science and culture. (emphasis）
do
Please rewrite this article according what we’ve just learnt .
Share and present your works please.
One Possible Version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students.
Born in Shaowu, I’m a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, I do like science and culture. Furthermore, I’m good at communicating with others. In addition, it’s my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that I’m familiar with Shaowu, which is of great importance to the work.
If given the chance, I’ll spare no effort to provide the best service for them. In no case will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Advice about how to improve your writing
1.Reading is the source of writing. Do remember to read some beautiful sentences and articles every day.
2. Some basic knowledge and skills:
Vocabulary and grammar
3.Practice makes perfect.
It is practice that really matters.
Practice
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）
3.希望获准
注意：
1.词数120左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Try to use: -ing form 作主语或状语/ attributive clause (定语从句）/ emphasis (强调）/ inversion (倒装）/ ellipsis (省略)
Homework:
Homework:
Write a complete application
e-mail on the last page.