人教英语选修7Unit4 Sharing Writing课件 （共21张PPT）
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(共21张PPT)
Writing
How to examine the topic
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
?
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Key points
我是谁；
向你求助；
为什么求助；
求助内容；
表达感谢
Compare the following sentences
I go to school with my friend every day.
I ride to school with my friend every day.
She is a good teacher.
She is a kind, enthusiastic and beautiful teacher.
如何让你作文瞬间变得“高大上”?
How to polish our sentences?
1.要点可适当整合，用一个句子表达。
1)姓名：钱学森 出生年月：1911年 出生地：上海 被誉为“中国航天之父”
2)纽约中央公园位于曼哈顿的中央。面积为340万平方米。
QianXuesen,____________ “father of China’s space program”, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.
Central park, ________ the centre of Manhattan,
covers an area of 3.4 million square metres.
regarded as
located in
3)Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games. It’s a waste
of time and energy.
Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games ,_______________________________.
which is a waste of time and energy
_____________, they participate in programs that help society.
setting out to Yunnan
To stand out
2)They want to stand out ,so they participate in programs that help society.
Before ___________________, we were very excited .
2.运用非谓语动词，使句子更简洁，更有文采。
1）Before we set out to Yunnan, we were very excited.
3) The film is set in the ancient China. It is worth seeing. 4) When you face difficulty , you should never give up.
The film ____________________ is
worth seeing.
set in the ancient China
When facing difficulty
__________________ , you should never give up.
____________________, they were frightened.
When trapped in the lift
They don’t know what ___________.
to do next.
5)They were frightened, when they were trapped in the lift.
6)They don’t know what they shall do next.
7)After they settled in the city , they began to hunt for jobs.
_____________________, they began to
hunt for jobs.
Having settled in the city
3.借助介词或介词短语巧妙衔接句子。
1)Because the Internet is developing quickly, I can talk to my friends far away.
2)You’d better take your own cups and chopsticks. You mustn’t use paper cups.
___________________, I can talk to my friends far away.
You’d better take your own cups and
chopsticks _________________________.
Thanks to the internet
instead of using paper cups
4.运用恰当的连接词（并列连词、从属连词、和连接副词），增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。
1)Newyork city is a fantasy world . You can do almost anything there.
2)Paul’s nickname is cp3. He established the cp3 foundation in 2005.
Newyork city is a fantasy world______you
can do almost anything
Paul______ nickname is cp3 established the cp3 foundation in 2005.
whose
where
5.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句等，增强语意。
1)He knew little that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhood hero.
2)People will begin to understand something about copyright protection only when people have to pay.
Little____________ that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhood hero.
Only when people have to pay_______________to
understand something about copyright protection
will people begin
did he know
3)The way they play together makes Manchester United popular.(强调主语)
4)On May 12, 2008 a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.（强调时间）
It is __________________a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.
5)This creature taught me a beautiful lesson.(感叹句型)
It is____________________________ makes Manchester United popular.
the way they play together that
on May 12, 2008 that
____________________this creature taught me !
What a beautiful lesson
6.运用对称、排比句式，使句子节奏感强，富有音韵美。
My father grew up in a very small village in China. In those days, not many villagers could read. So my father opened a night school to teach them how to read. With his help, many people learned to write their own names; with his help, many people learned to read newspapers for the first time; with his help, many women were able to teach their children how to read.
Today’s Homework
最近你在微信朋友圈中看到一条“轻松筹”的求助信息：揭阳市吴铃2014年2月18日被确诊为白血病，治疗共花费了20多万元。但2015年3月她再次被诊断出白血病复发。医生建议要进行干细胞移植，医疗费用预计要60-80万元！对于她家庭而言，几十万元的医疗费用是天文数字……看完信息后，你除了进行爱心捐助外，还想写一封信鼓励她，希望她能战胜病魔，重新返回学校读书。
微信 ：WeChat
朋友圈: circle of friends
轻松筹：easy to raise
Introduce yourself
Aspects:
1. name
2. identity
3. where are you from
4. writing purpose
Useful expressions:
1.My name is…/ I am…
2. I’m a…
3.I am from…/I come from…
4. I am writing to you because…
5. I have learned that… so…
Say something to encourage her and your ideas of the illness
Useful expressions:
1. I hope you can defeat/overcome…
2. As far as I’m concerned, …
3. While there is life there is hope.
4. We all have moments of desperation. But if we can face them head on, that’s when we find out just how strong we really are.
Let her know you would like to hear from her if possible
Aspects:
1.You are looking for her reply
2. Let her know you can help her
3. You wants know something about her
Useful expressions:
looking forward to hearing from you
let me hear from you soon
look forward to your reply
I’d love to get a letter from you
Writing
How to examine the topic
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
?
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Key points
我是谁；
向你求助；
为什么求助；
求助内容；
表达感谢
Compare the following sentences
I go to school with my friend every day.
I ride to school with my friend every day.
She is a good teacher.
She is a kind, enthusiastic and beautiful teacher.
如何让你作文瞬间变得“高大上”?
How to polish our sentences?
1.要点可适当整合，用一个句子表达。
1)姓名：钱学森 出生年月：1911年 出生地：上海 被誉为“中国航天之父”
2)纽约中央公园位于曼哈顿的中央。面积为340万平方米。
QianXuesen,____________ “father of China’s space program”, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.
Central park, ________ the centre of Manhattan,
covers an area of 3.4 million square metres.
regarded as
located in
3)Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games. It’s a waste
of time and energy.
Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games ,_______________________________.
which is a waste of time and energy
_____________, they participate in programs that help society.
setting out to Yunnan
To stand out
2)They want to stand out ,so they participate in programs that help society.
Before ___________________, we were very excited .
2.运用非谓语动词，使句子更简洁，更有文采。
1）Before we set out to Yunnan, we were very excited.
3) The film is set in the ancient China. It is worth seeing. 4) When you face difficulty , you should never give up.
The film ____________________ is
worth seeing.
set in the ancient China
When facing difficulty
__________________ , you should never give up.
____________________, they were frightened.
When trapped in the lift
They don’t know what ___________.
to do next.
5)They were frightened, when they were trapped in the lift.
6)They don’t know what they shall do next.
7)After they settled in the city , they began to hunt for jobs.
_____________________, they began to
hunt for jobs.
Having settled in the city
3.借助介词或介词短语巧妙衔接句子。
1)Because the Internet is developing quickly, I can talk to my friends far away.
2)You’d better take your own cups and chopsticks. You mustn’t use paper cups.
___________________, I can talk to my friends far away.
You’d better take your own cups and
chopsticks _________________________.
Thanks to the internet
instead of using paper cups
4.运用恰当的连接词（并列连词、从属连词、和连接副词），增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。
1)Newyork city is a fantasy world . You can do almost anything there.
2)Paul’s nickname is cp3. He established the cp3 foundation in 2005.
Newyork city is a fantasy world______you
can do almost anything
Paul______ nickname is cp3 established the cp3 foundation in 2005.
whose
where
5.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句等，增强语意。
1)He knew little that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhood hero.
2)People will begin to understand something about copyright protection only when people have to pay.
Little____________ that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhood hero.
Only when people have to pay_______________to
understand something about copyright protection
will people begin
did he know
3)The way they play together makes Manchester United popular.(强调主语)
4)On May 12, 2008 a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.（强调时间）
It is __________________a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.
5)This creature taught me a beautiful lesson.(感叹句型)
It is____________________________ makes Manchester United popular.
the way they play together that
on May 12, 2008 that
____________________this creature taught me !
What a beautiful lesson
6.运用对称、排比句式，使句子节奏感强，富有音韵美。
My father grew up in a very small village in China. In those days, not many villagers could read. So my father opened a night school to teach them how to read. With his help, many people learned to write their own names; with his help, many people learned to read newspapers for the first time; with his help, many women were able to teach their children how to read.
Today’s Homework
最近你在微信朋友圈中看到一条“轻松筹”的求助信息：揭阳市吴铃2014年2月18日被确诊为白血病，治疗共花费了20多万元。但2015年3月她再次被诊断出白血病复发。医生建议要进行干细胞移植，医疗费用预计要60-80万元！对于她家庭而言，几十万元的医疗费用是天文数字……看完信息后，你除了进行爱心捐助外，还想写一封信鼓励她，希望她能战胜病魔，重新返回学校读书。
微信 ：WeChat
朋友圈: circle of friends
轻松筹：easy to raise
Introduce yourself
Aspects:
1. name
2. identity
3. where are you from
4. writing purpose
Useful expressions:
1.My name is…/ I am…
2. I’m a…
3.I am from…/I come from…
4. I am writing to you because…
5. I have learned that… so…
Say something to encourage her and your ideas of the illness
Useful expressions:
1. I hope you can defeat/overcome…
2. As far as I’m concerned, …
3. While there is life there is hope.
4. We all have moments of desperation. But if we can face them head on, that’s when we find out just how strong we really are.
Let her know you would like to hear from her if possible
Aspects:
1.You are looking for her reply
2. Let her know you can help her
3. You wants know something about her
Useful expressions:
looking forward to hearing from you
let me hear from you soon
look forward to your reply
I’d love to get a letter from you