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I have no money!
I’m broke.
I’m penniless.
I’m hungry.
I’m starving.
Good job!
You killed it!
Lead-in
Writing
上周你收到了你的英国朋友Chris寄给你的一本英文词典作为给你的生日礼物。请你根据以下指示回信。
1、对他寄来的生日礼物表示感谢。
2、你很喜欢英语,词典对你用处很多。
3、邀请他暑假来山西旅游,住在你家。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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邀请他暑假来山西旅游,住在你家。
对他寄来的生日礼物表示感谢。
你很喜欢英语,词典对你用处很多。
I invite you to Shanxi this summer vacation and stay in my house.
Thank you for your birthday present.
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful to me.
Review
Dear Chris,
Thank you for your birthday present. I like English very much. The dictionary is useful to me. I invite you to Shanxi this summer vacation and stay in my house.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
Is it a good letter?
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Analyze
Purpose of writing---
Middle---
Ending---
How many parts?
Part 1
Part2
Part 3
to express thanks/appreciation
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful. Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
(Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house ) .
Express again gratitude and sincerity to invite him to Shanxi.
Purpose of writing---
to express thanks/appreciation
How are you?
How are you doing these days?
How is everything getting along with you recently?
Part 1
Greeting
How is everything going?
Purpose of writing---
to express thanks/appreciation
I received the English dictionary last week and felt quite pleased and moved that you remember my birthday.
Part 1
Purpose
I received the English dictionary last week.
I'm writing the letter to thank you.
Receiving the English dictionary last week, I felt obliged to you for remembering my birthday.
It’s your turn to finish part1. (Individual work)
Purpose of writing---
to express thanks/appreciation
Part 1
Sample 1: How are you doing these days? Last week, I received the English dictionary you sent to me and felt obliged to you for remembering my birthday. Now I'm writing the letter to express my appreciation/ gratitude to you.
Sample 2: How is everything going? Receiving the English dictionary you sent to me last week, I felt so pleased and moved that now I'm writing the letter to express my appreciation/ gratitude to you.
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
I like English.
I'm fond of English.
Part 2
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
English is my favorite subject.
I'm keen on English.
I am crazy about English.
I am fascinated with English.
I have a passion for English learning.
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
I like English.
Part 2
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
Why is the dictionary useful to you?
I need a dictionary badly.
I can look up new words in the dictionary.
It can enlarge my vocabulary.
It is a learning tool.
It can improve my English.
Part 2
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
I like English very much.
The dictionary is useful.
Is there any connection between the two sentences?
(Group work)
As you know, I am fascinated with English, so the English dictionary is what I want most and will definitely be of great use to me.
The dictionary is of great use to me because English is my favorite subject.
Since English is my favorite subject, the dictionary is of great use.
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful to me. I need a dictionary badly.
Part 2
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
It can enlarge my vocabulary. It is a learning tool. It can improve my English.
The dictionary can enlarge my vocabulary and improve my English.
With the help of the dictionary, my vocabulary can be enlarged and my English can be improved.
Part 2
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful to me. It can enlarge my vocabulary. It is a learning tool. It can improve my English.
Since English is my favorite subject, the dictionary is of great use to me, which can enlarge my vocabulary, improve my English and will become my best learning tool.
Can you combine these parts into one sentence?
(individual work)
Part 2
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
I Invite you to Shanxi this summer vacation and stay in my house.
Would you like to come to Shanxi this summer vacation and stay in my house?
I hope you can come to Shanxi this summer vacation and stay in my house.
What will you do if Chris comes to Shanxi?
I can show you around places of interest in Shanxi.
I can also introduce traditional Chinese culture to you.
Can you combine these two parts into one sentence?
(group work)
Part 2
Part2 Middle---
I like English very much. The dictionary is useful.
Invite him to come to Shanxi and stay in my house.
Would you like to come to Shanxi and stay with me this summer vacation, when I can show you around places of interest here and introduce traditional Chinese culture to you?
Part 3
Ending---
Express again gratitude and sincerity to invite him to Shanxi.
Thank you again. I’m looking forward to seeing you!
How to write a good composition?
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Receiving the English dictionary last week, I felt obliged to you for remembering my birthday.
Homework
Finish your whole passage on the sheet.
Thank you