牛津译林版英语七年级下册 Unit3 Welcome to Sunshine Town Task1 课件 (共32张PPT)

课件32张PPT。7下 Unit 3 Welcome to Sunshine Town Task 1By the end of the lesson, you should be able to:
1. use new words and expressions correctly;
2. make notes about the hometown before writing;
3. write a video script about your hometown.Learning aimsMy house
____________________________People
______________________Things to do ____________________________
... Environment________________________My
hometownLocation
(位置)Environment
(环境)Things to doSunshine TownIt's not far from the centre of Beijing.quiet, air is fresh, a beautiful park buy wonderful presents in shops enjoy Beijing opera in local theatreseat Chinese food in restaurantsjog in the parkIt takes only 40 minutes by underground.many trees, lakes and green hillsA video about Sunshine TownJohn, one of the exchange students, wants to make a video about his home town. He is making some notes before writing the script.What information does it include in the notes?grow wheatplant seeds(播种)the plants growharvest(收获) the cropsraise cowsDo you know what to feed these farm animals?hear the birds singsmell the flowersrow a boat on the lakeswim in the lakego fishing on the lakeA video script about John's hometownIntroduction Main
bodyConclusionJohn's hometown.It's on a farm and has two floors.There are many flowers and trees around it.He can smell the flowers, hear the birds sing and row a boat on the lake.Some raise cows and others grow wheat.They know each other and are all friendly.They can take buses or drive cars.He thinks it is a wonderful place to live.Paragraph 1 Hello，I’m John. I am going to show you around my hometown.Begin with the greeting（打招呼）
Show the writing purpose(写作目的)1. Introduction Look, this is my house. It is on a farm. It has two floors. Most people here live in houses like this. There are many flowers and trees around my house. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There is a lake near my house. Sometimes we row a boat there.Paragraph 2About things to doAbout the house 2. Main BodyParagraph 3 There are about one hundred families in our town. Some families raise cows, and others grow wheat. People here know each other. They are all friendly. There are buses to the town centre every day. Usually my mother drives us there to do the shopping.About people
Transport(交通) 2. Main BodyParagraph 4 We enjoy our life here. I think it is a wonderful place to live. I hope you can come and visit soon!3.ConclusionInvitationOpinions1. Introduction 2. Main Body3. ConclusionGeneral information like greetings and writing purposes.Details like houses, things to do, people and transport. Feelings like opinions and invitation.What useful expressions can you find？A script for a video presentationWhat is a script?A script is a written version of a play or a movie; it's about what you are supposed to say for a video presentation.Be conversational(口语化)Read your script aloud and see how it flows(流畅).Find someone to tell you what they really think of it.To make your audience clearly understand you, use specific(具体的) words. Read loudlyGet feedback(反馈)Follow a good story structure, a beginning, middle, and end. Tell a storyEditHow to write a script?As you choose your words, make each word work for a spot on the page. They need to have a purpose(目的).You also want to prepare a video presentation on your hometown. Think about what you can see and do, make some notes and write a script.A video script about your hometownShare your writingWrite step-by-stepChoose a topicCollect and organize details(细节)Write a first draft(草稿)：a beginning + a middle + an endingImprove your writingCheck for errorsHow to write?Choose a topic/Collect detailsMy hometownSubject:Form:Purpose:Audience:a script for a video presentationto describe a placethe exchange studentsChoose a topicChoose a topic/Collect detailsCollect details(细节)Topic:seehearsmellflowersa lakethe birds singopera
...Fried rice
...My hometownfriendlyfeeltasteflowers
...treesdelicious foodgardens
... Ideas include (1) the basic details of your hometown; (2) sensory (感官) details about what people see, hear, smell, taste and feel. enjoy
...comfortableChoose a topic/Collect detailsOrganize(组织) detailsMy hometown Yanghzouflats, flowers, trees, a lake...go shopping, taste food, hear birds sing, visit gardens...friendly, comfortable, enjoy...describe the peoplename your hometowndescribe things to dodescribe your houseBeginningMiddleEndingOpening sentences
● Look, this is my house...● Every day, I can...● Some people...Closing sentencesThe ending tells how you feel.The middle gives details about your hometown.The beginning catches the readers’ attention.We enjoy our life here.. Hello, welcome to ... Write a first draft(草稿)Write a first draft(草稿) In your first paragraph, you should get the readers’ attention and introduce the place. Here are two ways to begin your paragraph.▉ Make a connection with the reader. ▉ Begin with a fact or an interesting statement. Hello, I'm John. I'm glad to show you around my hometown. My hometown Yangzhou is very famous as a tour city. It has a history of nearly 2,500 years. Why not come and enjoy its beauty in the beautiful April?Write two or three beginnings for your first paragraph and choose the best one!Write a first draft(草稿)▉ Include sensory details. ▉ Use the topic sentence first and then the supporting details.Before you start, review your details to make sure you don’t forget anything. The middle part tells about the place. It should follow your organzied list. Here are some things to keep in mind.Write a first draft(草稿) Look! This is my house. It is in the centre of the city. I live in a house which has only one floor. In my neighbourhood, most people live in houses like this. There are a few trees in front of my house. I can hear the birds sing when I study. There is a river through this area. It's clean, so we can go fishing there.
There are a lot of people living in the neighbourhood. Everyone here is calm and kind. They often help each other and chat together. There is a supermarket not far away. Usually my parents walk there to buy something we need. There are some other places of interest there, such as the Great Canal and Wenyoutai and so on.Topic sentence, then supporting details.Sensory details help the reader “see” and “feel” .Don’t worry about making mistakes!Write a first draft(草稿) The ending paragraph should tell the reader how you feel about the place. Here are two possible ways.▉ Remind your reader about your beginning.▉ Show how you feel about the place. We really enjoy our life here. I think it is a nice place to live. Now you know something about my hometown. We are looking forward to seeing you here.Use one of these ways to end your story and if you don’t like it, try another one.Write your own article about your hometown.Write a first draft(草稿)Assessment tableShare your writingWrite step-by-stepChoose a topicCollect and organize details(细节)Write a first draft(草稿)：a beginning + a middle + an endingImprove your writingCheck for errors