人教版英语八年级下册Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet? Writing （共17张PPT内嵌视频）

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Unit 8 Writing
Learning Objects 学习目标
能够基于特殊疑问词的问题介绍喜欢的歌手。
能够运用现在完成时描述所喜欢歌手取得的成就以及自己的收获。
学会列举证据支撑原因并借助连词、高级表达、插入语为文章增加亮点。
学习永不言败的精神，态度决定高度，要敢于做出改变。


































































































































































































































has made great progress
naughty
play computer
John

used to be
now
























LIKE
Let's watch a video .

























Who is John's favourite singer?
Task Ⅰ










































Jay Chou
Taylor Swift
G.E.M
根据上述信息，帮助John把介绍补充完整。
_________________ is John’ s favourite singer. She is from___________ . She was born _____________________. She has a pair of blue eyes.
who
where
when
Taylor Swift
America
on December 13, 1989

Nationality(国籍） Birth(出生日期） Outlook
America December 13 , 1989 pair of blue eyes
Who is John's favourite singer?
Task Ⅰ

























What achievements has Taylor Swift got?
请根据图片完成句子。



She ____________ a lot of beautiful songs.（已经写了）
She ________ many fans from all over the world.（已经拥有）
She _____________ a lot of music awards.（已经获得）
has already won
has got
has written
Task Ⅱ

























How to write the introduction ？
Fill in the blanks .

____________ is my favourite singer.
She is from ________ .
She was born on ___________________ .
She _______________a lot of music awards.
She _________many fans from all over the world.
She ____________a lot of beautiful songs.
Taylor Swift
America
who
where
when
Introduction
December 13, 1989

achievements
has already won
has got
has written
John

Task Ⅲ

























Let’s listen and enjoy the song Change.
What do you think of this song?
1.列举形容词

beautiful
cheerful（使人开心的）
powerful (有力量的）
名词+ful的形容词：
help+ful=helpful
use+ful=useful
wonder+ful=wonderful
2.串词成句
The song is _____________.
The song is______________.
The song is______________.
beautiful
cheerful
powerful
What’s the song about?
3.列举名词或动名词.

The song is about______________.
The song is about ________________.
The song is about ______________.
friendship
protecting animals
friendship…
protecting animals（保护动物）
never giving up(永不言弃）
never giving up
4.串词成句


I love all her songs, especially(尤其是) Change.
The song is beautiful and full of feelings about never giving up.
John

Task Ⅳ
What has Taylor Swift done to help others?
请根据图片用现在完成时完成句子。

























Her songs _____________________________ .
She __________________________________.
She __________________________________.
has encouraged many people
has given away money to many children
has joined a lot of activities

join
give away
encourage
Task Ⅴ

























How to express your thoughts?怎样表达你的看法呢？
(提醒我...)
(这让我想到...)
(决定做某事)
(我意识到...)
...
It makes me think about...
It reminds me of...
I decide to do sth.
I realize that...
It made me think about my study. I realized that I actually missed all of them. So, I decided to change.
Do you want to say something about Taylor's songs or deeds?
（事迹）
John

Task Ⅵ
Translate the sentence structures.翻译句型。

I love all her songs, especially Change.
When I was in Junior One, I ____________ unhappy because of my bad grades.
But when I __________the song Change, it _____________________ my study. The song is full of feelings of _______________.
I realized that I should study hard. So, I____________________.

























There is a story between John and the song Change.
Let’s listen and fill in the blanks.



1.used to be
used to be
listened to
made me think about
decided to change
never giving up
2.feelings
3.influences
Reasons


How to write reasons ？
通过列举证据去支撑原因
John

Task Ⅶ
Put them into order.
( ) Taylor Swift is a great singer.
( )And I have learned a lot from her, especially the spirit of never giving up.
( ) I think I will be her fan forever.
How to write ending ？

























Never give up
Spirit 精神/ Attitude 态度
1
2

3
1.Topic sentence：
2.What can you learn？
3.What will you do？
参考句型：（在将来，我会/想...)
I think I will ... in the future
I want to ... in the future

Ending

Taylor is a great singer.
I have learned a lot from her, especially the spirit of never giving up.
I think I will be her fan forever.
Task Ⅷ
John

My favourite singer
参考范文：
①Introduction:
who, when where, achievements
②Reasons:
1.used to be
2.feelings
3.inflences
③Ending
1. Topic sentence
2. What can you learn？
3.What will you do?
①Taylor Swift is my favourite singer. She is from America. And she has written a lot of beautiful songs.
② I love all her songs, especially Change. When I was in Junior One, I used to be unhappy because of my bad grades. But when I listened to the song Change , it made me think about my study. The song is full of feelings of never giving up. I realized I should study hard. So, I decided to change.
③ Taylor is a great singer. And I have learned a lot from her, especially the spirit of never giving up. I think I will be her fan forever.
提分策略：1.用上适当的连词让文章更有逻辑





表原因：because 表顺承：and, first, second
表转折：however(尽管), but 表让步：although（虽然）
表结果：so, therefore（因此）
提分策略：2.添加适当插入语承上启下
① Taylor Swift is my favourite singer. She is from America. What’s more, she has written a lot of beautiful songs.
As we all know（众所周知）
What's more （更重要的是）
③As we all know , Taylor is a great singer. And I have learned a lot from her, especially the spirit of never giving up. I think I will be her fan forever.
② I love all her songs, especially Change. When I was in Junior One, I used to be upset because of my bad grades. But when I listened to the song Change , it made me think about my study. The song is full of feelings of never giving up. I realized that I should study hard. So, I decided to change.
提分策略：3.使用高级词汇与表达代替常见词汇与表达
不开心：(同义词替换）
unhappy=upset
我认为：(同义词替换）I think=Personally speaking
In my opinion
I consider....
③As we all know, Taylor is a great singer. And I have learned a lot from her, especially the spirit of never giving up. I consider I will be her fan forever.

























My favourite singer

Summary
①Introduction:
who, when where, achievements
②Reasons:
1.used to be
2.feelings
3.influences
③Ending
1.Topic sentence
2.What can you learn?
3.What will you do？
3.使用高级词汇与表达代替常见词汇与表达
2.添加适当插入语承上启下
1.用上适当的连词让文章更有逻辑

提分策略
我认为：(同义词替换）
I think=Personally speaking，
In my opinion,
I consider....
表原因：because
表顺承：and, first, second
表转折：however(尽管), but
表让步：although（虽然）
表结果：so, therefore（因此）
What's more（更重要的是）
As we all know(众所周知）
不开心：(同义词替换）
unhappy=upset
Never give up ！
Your attitude（态度）,
not your aptitude（能力）,
determines your altitude（高度）!
永不言弃！
你的态度决定了你的高度！
John

Writing Task
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内容要求如下：
请以你最喜欢的作家或者歌手为主题，根据下面提示写一篇小短文。
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1.你最喜欢的作家/歌手是谁？
简单介绍他/她（国籍，出生，外貌，性格特点，获得成就等）
2.你喜欢他/她什么作品，这个作品是怎么影响你的？(请举例说明）。
3.将来你应该怎么做？
Homework

完成个人习作: My favourite singer/writer
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