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人教版七年级下册Writing 书面表达
如何写与交通方式有关的文章
Write an e-mail and tell him how you get to school.
Stage 1:
词汇
交通工具 (动词类)
1.乘公共汽车 6.骑自行车
2.乘地铁 7.走路去
3.乘火车
4.坐小汽车
5.开车去
take the/a _______
ride the/a ________ walk to
交通工具 (介词类)
1.乘公共汽车去 5.骑自行车去
2.乘地铁去 6.走路去
3.乘火车去
4.坐小汽车去
go by_______
go on ______
Stage 2:
连词成句
其他词汇
离开家
乘公交才之行
锻炼
住在一个小村庄
某人 乘 交通工具去 哪里
1.我乘______去学校。
I take the _____to school.
I go to school by_____.
2.他乘____去学校。
He takes the ____to school.
He goes to school by_____.
其他词汇
离开家
乘公交才之行
锻炼
住在一个小村庄
从我家到学校有______公里。
1.It’s about________ kilometers
from my home to school.
2.My school is about ______kilometers from my home.
20 minutes
---It takes me 20 minutes
---How long does it take
(
you
to get from home to school ?
to go to school by bike.
It takes sb some time to do sth.
It takes ____ about _____ minutes to go to school by/on ____.
乘(交通工具)上学花(某人) (多少)分钟。
Stage 3 :
连句成文
I’m a middle school student .I live in a small village.
On school days, I get up at 6:00, I leave home at 6:30 in the morning .My school is about 5 kilometers from my home. I go to school by bike. It takes me half an hour to get to school.
The bike ride is very interesting, It’s good exercise.
例文赏析
I’m a middle school student .I ____ in a small village.
On school days, I usually _____ up at 6:00, I ______ home ___ 6:30 in the morning .My school is about 5 kilometers _____ my home. I _____ to school _____ bike. It _____ me half an hour to _____ to school.
The bike ____ is very interesting, It’s good exercise.
仿写例文1
He____ (be) a middle school student .He____ (live) in a small village.
On school days, He____ ( get) up at 6:00, He_______ (leave) home at 6:30 in the morning .His school is about 5 kilometers from his home. He____( go) to school ____ bike. It takes _____ (he) half an hour to get to school.
The bike_____ is very interesting, It’s good exercise.
仿写例文2
is
lives
bike
him
by
goes
leaves
gets
根据下面内容,谈谈你的朋友的上学之旅。
姓名 Tom 家住 永川 起床 6:30 到学
校距离 6公里
年龄 12 学校 大安中学 离家时间 7:00 交通方式 公共汽车
花时间 半小时
1.书写工整,注意标点,大小写。
2.注意人称。
3.尽量使用学过的词汇和句型,语言通顺,表达要准确。
为书面表达增光添彩
Stage 4:
Have a try by yourselves!
自己试一试!
Who is the best writer?
谁是最好的作家?
Dear Mike,
I have a friend, he is _________.He is 12______ _______.He ______ _____ Yongchuan. He is in
Daan Middle School.
He _____ ______ at _______,He ______ home
at 7:00. It is about_____ kilometers _______his home to school. He _______ to school by ______, it takes him about _____ _____ _______.
The bus ride is never _________because he always _______ ______ classmates.
Your friend.
Tom
Tom
6:30
up
gets
in
lives
old
years
talks
boring
hour
an
half
bus
leaves
from
6
to
goes
Stage 1(第一关:词汇)
Stage 2(第二关:连词成句)
Stage 3(第三关:连句成文)
Stage 4(第四关:实践)
写作通关
Writing:
话题:给你的笔友(Bob)写信,寄一张你和家人或朋友的照片,并描述照片中的人和正在发生的事。
Dear Bob,
Beginning: 寒暄+过渡句
How’s it going? Thanks for your last letter and photos(寒暄). Here is a photo of my family. Do you want to know about what my family are doing? Let me tell you.(过渡句)
Body:过渡句+描述各个人物(外貌特征+动作)
Body:
In this photo. You can see my family at home.(过渡句)The lady in red is my mother. She is using the computer. That man with glasses is my father. He likes sports, so he is watching a basketball game on TV. These old couples老夫妇 are my grandparents. They are kind, aren’t they? My grandfather is reading a newspaper. My grandmother is talking on the phone with my aunt. The young girl is me. I am playing the piano.
Ending:总结+发问
All in all, I have a big and happy family. What do you think of my family? Write soon!
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Good luck to you !
Good bye!