课件17张PPT。Module 1 My First Day at Senior HighWriting Period
Enjoy a short video!Free-talkingWhat is your first memory of our shcool?
What can you remember about your first teacher?
Who was your first best friend? Is he/she still your best friend?
What was your favourite activity when you were in first grade?Fast-readingRead the letter quickly and think about the questions: Who wrote the letter? MarthaWhy does Martha write the letter to Li Kang? Martha has some questions about Li Kang's memories of his first year at shcool.Fast-readingWhat are the questions? What is your first memory of shcool?
What was your favourite activity when you were in first grade?
What can you remember about your first teacher?
Who was your first best friend? Is he/she still your best friend?
Careful-readingWork in groups, read and fill in the mind map. Martha's first year at schoolFirst _______ of school_________ _________First teacher First best friend _____ of paint,
they _____ the walls at the start of the year._______ pictures Miss sharp had the ____ _____ in the world Mollya girl_____ Molly,
were_____for three years
______ ___ California. memoryFavourite activitiessmell painted drawing called friendsmoved to biggest smile SummaryHow to write a letter Hello, my name is Martha, I'm 16 years old and I live in New York. I'm in tenth grade in Senior High School. My favourite subjects are history and Spanish. I'm also studying Chinese in evening class.
I'm writing to teenagers all over the world. I have some questions about your memories of your first year at school. Would you mind answering the questions for me?
What is your first memory of your shcool?
What was your favourite activity when you were in first grade?
What can you remember about your first teacher?
Who was your first best friend? Is he/she still your best friend?
Here are my answers! My first memory of school was the smell of paint! They painted the walls at the start of the year. The smell disappeared quite quickly, but I still remember it. My first best friend was a girl called Molly and we were friends for about three years. But then she moved to California. I still write to her. My favourite activity in first grade was drawing pictures. My first teacher was called Miss Sharp, and she had the biggest smile in the world.
Brief self-introductionWriting purposeBody Hello, my name is Martha, I'm 16 years old and I live in New York. I'm in tenth grade in Senior High School. My favourite subjects are history and Spanish. I'm also studying Chinese in evening class.
I'm writing to teenagers all over the world. I have some questions about your memories of your first year at school. Would you mind answering the questions for me?
What is your first memory of your shcool?
What was your favourite activity when you were in first grade?
What can you remember about your first teacher?
Who was your first best friend? Is he/she still your best friend?
Here are my answers! My first memory of school was the smell of paint! They painted the walls at the start of the year. The smell disappeared quite quickly, but I still remember it. My first best friend was a girl called Molly and we were friends for about three years. But then she moved to California. I still write to her. My favourite activity in first grade was drawing pictures. My first teacher was called Miss Sharp, and she had the biggest smile in the world.
DiscussionHow to make the letter more formal and better? PresentationThe structure of a formal letter
Dear XX,
Para.1---Greetings and Purpose
Para.2---Body
Para.3---Ending
Yours Sincerely,
X XI'm glad to receive your letter.
/How's it going?Looking forward to your reply.
/Hope that you can write back soon.I'm writing to tell you...Pay attention to expressing the points, writing topic sentences and writing logically
Here are my answers! My first memory of school was the smell of paint! They painted the walls at the start of the year. The smell disappeared quite quickly, but I still remember it. My first best friend was a girl called Molly and we were friends for about three years. But then she moved to California. I still write to her. My favourite activity in first grade was drawing pictures. My first teacher was called Miss Sharp, and she had the biggest smile in the world.
DiscussionWhat is the topic sentence of this paragraph? _____________Using connective words and phrases 表列举:for example、for instance、such as表补充:besides、in addition、moreover表原因:because of、because、as、for表结果:therefore、thus、as a result、so表结论:to conclude、in a word、all in all表转折:however、but My first memory of school was the smell of paint! They painted the walls at the start of the year. My first memory of school was the smell of paint because they painted the walls at the start of the year. To make better sentences Using complex sentences(复合句) My first teacher was called Miss Sharp, and she had the biggest smile in the world. My first teacher was called Miss Sharp, who had the biggest smile in the world. To make better sentences Practice Imagine you are Li Kang, write a letter to Martha to tell her your first year at school! Your letter will include the following points:
What is first memory of your shcool?
What was your favourite activity when you were in first grade?
What can you remember about your first teacher?
Who was your first best friend? Is he/she still your best friend?
Requirements: 1. Around 100 words;
2. You can add some details. Work in groups and write a letter to Martha.Discuss in groups and judge the letter according to the following standards. Groupwork全国卷高考英语作文评分标准(节选)
⑴覆盖所有内容要点 ;
⑵应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
⑶尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇;
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。Show the letter of your group in front of us. iHomeworkWrite a letter to Martha on your exercise book.Thank you for your listening!