外研版必修2 Module 1 Our Body and Healthy Habits how to write a letter 课件（25张PPT）
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课件25张PPT。授课类型：写作课
课程名称：How to Write a Letter of Advice
学段学科：高一英语
教材版本：外研社必修二
I want to lose weight！What is your advice?slim/healthy
How to write
a letter of adviceWriting Today's task: write a letter of advice 假如你是李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己发胖，很苦恼，她写信请你给她就如何减肥提供建议，请你根据以下内容给他写一封信。
词数：100 左右
1.健康饮食 2. 多锻炼 3.多喝水Tip 1: Good structureDear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.
Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. I’m sure you will make great progress sooner or later.
In conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies.Beginningstate your purpose Bodygive your advice and reasonsEndingexpress your hope/wishesTip 2: Use sentence patterns A . State your purpose (para. one)1. I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
2. I am writing to express my views concerning...
3. Knowing that..., I'd like to give you some suggestions.Translation: 知道你减肥有困难，我想给你提一些建议。Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Tip 2: Use sentence patterns B . Give your advice (para. two)1. It is helpful/important to...
2. It is a good idea to...
3. I strongly suggest that...Translation:
1.有健康的饮食是很重要的。
It is very important to keep a healthy diet.2. 多做锻炼也是一个不错的主意It is also a good idea to do more exercise.3. 我强烈建议你多喝水。I strongly suggest that you should drink more water.Tip 2: Use sentence patterns C . Express your hope (para. three)1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
3. I am greatly convinced that if you..., you will...Translatin: 我深信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和健康。I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane: It is very important to keep a healthy diet. It is also a
good idea to do more exercise.I strongly suggest that
you should drink more water.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaTip 3: Use conjunctions(连接词) Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane: it is very important to keep a healthy diet. it is also a good idea to do more exercise. I strongly suggest that you should drink more water.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaFirst of all,In addition,Last but not least,Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane:First of all, it is very important to keep a healthy diet.
In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts.In addition, it also helps to do more exercise.
If you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.Last but not least, I strongly suggest you should drink more water,I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaTip 4: Write more details to support the main points because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.What makes a compostion a good one?1. Good structure
2. Properly use some sentence patterns
3. Use conjunctions
4.Write some details to support and enrich the
main pointsPlus: properly use some advanced words or phrases or some sentence patterns.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences 1. I'd like to give you some suggestions. I'd like to offer you some valuable suggestions. 2. In order to lose weight, you can eat more
vegetables and friuts.For the purpose of losing weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts.1. It is important to keep a healthy diet. （用另一词替换 important;再用of great+n)
2. It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet. (用主语从句改此句）
3. If you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.（用 the more...the more...改此句）
4. ....because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.
(用定语从句改此句）
Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences It is important to keep a healthy diet.
It is significant to keep a healthy diet.( of great+n)
It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet.
(用主语从句改此句）What is of great significance is to keep a healthy diet.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences Tip 6: Properly use complex sentencesIf you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.
（用 the more...the more...改此句）The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off.Tip 6: Properly use complex sentences....because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.
(用定语从句改此句）...because water can support our body, which helps us lose weight.Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to offer you some valuable suggestions.Dear Jane,First of all, what is of great importance is to keep a healthy diet. For the purpose of losing weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts. In addition, it is also a good idea to do more exercise. The more exercise you do, the more fat you will burn off. Last but not least, I stongly suggest that you should drink more water, because water can support our body, which helps us lose weight.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaFinal versionThe evaluation standards(评分标准）
of a good writing1. Good structure
2. properly use some sentence patterns
3. Use conjunctions
4. Write details to support and enrich the points
5. Properly use advanced words or phrases or sentence pattern
Good handwriting/ Cover all the points / No grammar or spelling mistakes假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为将来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。
1、制定复习计划，树立信心。
2、坚持锻炼身体。
3、保持足够睡眠。
注意：词数100词左右。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。WritingState your writing purposeAdvice + supporting details Express wishesFirst/second personPresent tenseA letter of adviceFeedback+ : excellent √: ok -: need improving
Homework1. Remember the sentence patterns
2. Polish your writingThank You !
课程名称：How to Write a Letter of Advice
学段学科：高一英语
教材版本：外研社必修二
I want to lose weight！What is your advice?slim/healthy
How to write
a letter of adviceWriting Today's task: write a letter of advice 假如你是李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己发胖，很苦恼，她写信请你给她就如何减肥提供建议，请你根据以下内容给他写一封信。
词数：100 左右
1.健康饮食 2. 多锻炼 3.多喝水Tip 1: Good structureDear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.
Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. I’m sure you will make great progress sooner or later.
In conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies.Beginningstate your purpose Bodygive your advice and reasonsEndingexpress your hope/wishesTip 2: Use sentence patterns A . State your purpose (para. one)1. I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
2. I am writing to express my views concerning...
3. Knowing that..., I'd like to give you some suggestions.Translation: 知道你减肥有困难，我想给你提一些建议。Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Tip 2: Use sentence patterns B . Give your advice (para. two)1. It is helpful/important to...
2. It is a good idea to...
3. I strongly suggest that...Translation:
1.有健康的饮食是很重要的。
It is very important to keep a healthy diet.2. 多做锻炼也是一个不错的主意It is also a good idea to do more exercise.3. 我强烈建议你多喝水。I strongly suggest that you should drink more water.Tip 2: Use sentence patterns C . Express your hope (para. three)1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
3. I am greatly convinced that if you..., you will...Translatin: 我深信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和健康。I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane: It is very important to keep a healthy diet. It is also a
good idea to do more exercise.I strongly suggest that
you should drink more water.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaTip 3: Use conjunctions(连接词) Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane: it is very important to keep a healthy diet. it is also a good idea to do more exercise. I strongly suggest that you should drink more water.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaFirst of all,In addition,Last but not least,Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to give you some suggestions.Dear Jane:First of all, it is very important to keep a healthy diet.
In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts.In addition, it also helps to do more exercise.
If you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.Last but not least, I strongly suggest you should drink more water,I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaTip 4: Write more details to support the main points because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.What makes a compostion a good one?1. Good structure
2. Properly use some sentence patterns
3. Use conjunctions
4.Write some details to support and enrich the
main pointsPlus: properly use some advanced words or phrases or some sentence patterns.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences 1. I'd like to give you some suggestions. I'd like to offer you some valuable suggestions. 2. In order to lose weight, you can eat more
vegetables and friuts.For the purpose of losing weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts.1. It is important to keep a healthy diet. （用另一词替换 important;再用of great+n)
2. It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet. (用主语从句改此句）
3. If you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.（用 the more...the more...改此句）
4. ....because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.
(用定语从句改此句）
Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences It is important to keep a healthy diet.
It is significant to keep a healthy diet.( of great+n)
It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences It is of great significance to keep a healthy diet.
(用主语从句改此句）What is of great significance is to keep a healthy diet.Tip 5: Use some advanced words or phrases or sentences Tip 6: Properly use complex sentencesIf you take more exercise, you will burn off more fat.
（用 the more...the more...改此句）The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off.Tip 6: Properly use complex sentences....because water can support our body, and help us lose weight.
(用定语从句改此句）...because water can support our body, which helps us lose weight.Knowing that you have difficulty losing weight, I'd like to offer you some valuable suggestions.Dear Jane,First of all, what is of great importance is to keep a healthy diet. For the purpose of losing weight, you can eat more vegetables and friuts. In addition, it is also a good idea to do more exercise. The more exercise you do, the more fat you will burn off. Last but not least, I stongly suggest that you should drink more water, because water can support our body, which helps us lose weight.
I am greatly convinced that if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier.
Yours，
Li HuaFinal versionThe evaluation standards(评分标准）
of a good writing1. Good structure
2. properly use some sentence patterns
3. Use conjunctions
4. Write details to support and enrich the points
5. Properly use advanced words or phrases or sentence pattern
Good handwriting/ Cover all the points / No grammar or spelling mistakes假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为将来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。
1、制定复习计划，树立信心。
2、坚持锻炼身体。
3、保持足够睡眠。
注意：词数100词左右。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。WritingState your writing purposeAdvice + supporting details Express wishesFirst/second personPresent tenseA letter of adviceFeedback+ : excellent √: ok -: need improving
Homework1. Remember the sentence patterns
2. Polish your writingThank You !