中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
冲刺2020年江苏高考英语——(书面表达题)三年真题解读
写在前面的话
书面表达历来是江苏高考英语中占据分值仅次于阅读理解的一大题型，25分的分值足可以拉开考生的英语差距。由此可见书面表达对于我们争取高考英语高总分的重要性毋庸置疑。但是书面表达的两条能力要求“根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇”和“使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想”却让不少考生望之而却步，谈之而色变，因而在高考中只好匆匆写上几句，得分不高，着实让人惋惜。如何扭转这种状况，本专题将助你一臂之力。
2019
81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.
Su Hua: Yes,I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it’s a good idea. It’s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don’t have to dress that way. That’s not our daily style. Besides, it’s not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see. It’s the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It’s nice. It’s also a better display of our school culture.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2.在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
2018
81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
2017
81.请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
二、考点解读
年份 体裁 题材 提供材料的形式 范文词数
2019
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冲刺2020年江苏高考英语——(书面表达题)三年真题解读
写在前面的话
书面表达历来是江苏高考英语中占据分值仅次于阅读理解的一大题型，25分的分值足可以拉开考生的英语差距。由此可见书面表达对于我们争取高考英语高总分的重要性毋庸置疑。但是书面表达的两条能力要求“根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇”和“使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想”却让不少考生望之而却步，谈之而色变，因而在高考中只好匆匆写上几句，得分不高，着实让人惋惜。如何扭转这种状况，本专题将助你一臂之力。
2019
81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.
Su Hua: Yes,I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it’s a good idea. It’s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don’t have to dress that way. That’s not our daily style. Besides, it’s not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see. It’s the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It’s nice. It’s also a better display of our school culture.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2.在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【解析】 仔细审题，明确要求
用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；谈谈在上述场合你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？然后用不少于两个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
提炼要点，谋篇布局
第一段用约30个词概述关于是否穿传统中国服饰迎接外国学生的对话内容；从Li Jiang和Su Hua两人的对话看，两人的意见不一：Li Jiang赞同穿中国传统服装，而Su Hua则喜欢穿校服参加欢迎仪式。
第二段首先要明确表态是否赞成“在欢迎仪式穿中国传统服装”，以便就你的表态展开讨论；然后论述赞成或者反对的理由(不能少于两个)。
第三段总结全文，得出结论(需要与你所持的观点相适应)。
【答案】
Possible version one:
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.
Possible version two:
Li Jiang and Su Hua don’t agree on what to wear when greeting the British students Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What’s more, the traditional Chinese dress can’t reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.
2018
81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【解析】 仔细审题，明确要求
用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
提炼要点，谋篇布局
第一段用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象。看题目中的两篇日记：第一篇日记写的是一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二篇日记写的是一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating去消费，结果饭菜很不好吃。对两篇日记所反映的现象要表明自己的态度，作出价值判断，为下文铺垫，也就是要写好过渡性的语句。针对第一篇日记，我们可以表明对利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象赞成的态度；针对第二篇日记，我们可以表明对利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象反对的态度；
第二段谈谈如何看待消费排名，详写例证，举例说明赞成或者反对的理由；
第三段总结全文，得出结论。
【答案】
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers’ purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others’ advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
2017
81.请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【解析】 仔细审题，明确要求
用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
提炼要点，谋篇布局
第一段用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容：中国电影票房在2012-2016年间呈现不断增长的趋势，但是2016年的增长相比前几年要缓慢得多；
第二段分析我国电影票房收入变化的原因，并简要谈谈看法。参照两篇文本材料部分的内容，对原因的进行概括和阐述：票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关，人们有了多余的钱，才可能消费、娱乐；另一方面，电影的制作技术日臻成熟，许多优质的电影不断上映；再者，互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用；
第三段谈谈对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由，要求发表自己的观点及见解，并且提出合理的理由：票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由，对票房看涨或是看落皆可。
【答案】
Possible version one
The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.
Possible version two
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the internet plays an important part. On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.
However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
二、考点解读
年份 体裁 题材 提供材料的形式 范文词数
2019 说明+议论文 在欢迎外国学生仪式中是否穿中国传统服装 文字材料 149 150
2018 说明+议论文 如何看待消费排名 文字材料 150 150
2017 说明+议论文 电影票房收入变化的原因及对其走向的看法 文字材料+图表 150 150
根据上述统计，我们从题材上看，江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有真实性，与生活实际联系越来越紧密。从提供的材料形式上看既有读写式的文字介绍，也有读写式的文字介绍+图表。鉴于2019年的书面表达跟全国卷越来越相像，由此我们可以联想一下：2020年会不会再进一步地向全国卷靠拢，我们拭目以待。不过，无论怎么变化，江苏高考书面表达所提供的材料信息量都很大，这对我们考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力提出了很高的要求。
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