人教版八年级英语下册Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum?写作学法指导课课件(共34张PPT)

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Introduce a place you've ever been to

——Unit 9 写作学法指导课


Preparations
Learning goals
1、能够介绍自己的家乡或曾经旅行去过的某个地方的基本情况和主要特点。
2、学会用以读促写的策略进行写作。
3、能够在写作中每段运用主题句，并能运用适当的连词让文章结构更加紧密。

情境支架—激发兴趣
Can you guess my hobby?






Travelling
Beautiful China
TV Program
Beautiful China
Sanya
What aspets (方面) of Sanya does it talk about?

Shirley's
article
Sanya—An Amazing Place for Holidays
Have you ever been to Sanya? It is an amazing place for holidays. Sanya is a southern city in Hainan Province. You can have a lot of fun here.
You can visit many beautiful places and try interesting activities in Sanya. It is famous for wonderful beaches, such as Yalong Beach. What's more, there are different kinds of holiday activities, including water sports and shopping. You will never feel bored in Sanya.
You can also taste many kinds of food. For example, if you are a fruit lover, Sanya must be a dream place for you. There are fruits like mangoes, pineapples, coconuts and so on. Besides, delicious food in and out of China can be found in Shangpin Road.
As for the weather of Sanya, it is warm all year round because it is very close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you want especially in cold winter. Welcome to Sanya!

Sanya—An Amazing Place for Holidays
Find out the aspects mentioned (涉及) in this passage.
Have you ever been to Sanya? It is an amazing place for holidays. Sanya is a southern city in Hainan Province. You can have a lot of fun here.
You can visit many beautiful places and try interesting activities in Sanya. It is famous for wonderful beaches, such as Yalong Beach. What's more, there are different kinds of holiday activities, including water sports and shopping. You will never feel bored in Sanya.
You can also taste many kinds of food. For example, if you are a fruit lover, Sanya must be a dream place for you. There are fruits like mangoes, pineapples, coconuts and so on. Besides, delicious food in and out of China can be found in Shangpin Road.
As for the weather of Sanya, it is warm all year round because it is very close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you want especially in cold winter. Welcome to Sanya!





location (位置)
places to visit
activities
food
weather

Content
写作策略1: List out the aspects you can write about and choose 2-3 aspects to focus on. (把可写的方面列出来，挑选2-3个方面重点介绍)
Content 内容
Structure 结构
Language 语言
What makes a good article?

结构支架—谋篇布局
[?ɑ?t?kl]
文章
Topic sentences

Read and choose the correct structure chart (结构图).
Structure
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Have you ever been to Sanya? It is an amazing place for holidays. Sanya is a southern city in Hainan Province. You can have a lot of fun here.
You can visit many beautiful places and try interesting activities in Sanya. It is famous for wonderful beaches, such as Yalong Beach. What's more, there are different kinds of holiday activities, including water sports and shopping. You will never feel bored in Sanya.
You can also taste many kinds of food. For example, if you are a fruit lover, Sanya must be a dream place for you. There are fruits like mangoes, pineapples, coconuts and so on. Besides, delicious food in and out of China can be found in Shangpin Road.
As for the weather of Sanya, it is warm all year round because it is very close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you want especially in cold winter. Welcome to Sanya!
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Sanya—An Amazing Place for Holidays

Sanya—An Amazing Place for Holidays
Topic sentence
Underline the topic sentence in each paragraph.
Have you ever been to Sanya? It is an amazing place for holidays. Sanya is a southern city in Hainan Province. You can have a lot of fun here.
You can visit many beautiful places and try interesting activities in Sanya. It is famous for wonderful beaches, such as Yalong Beach. What's more, there are different kinds of holiday activities, including water sports and shopping. You will never feel bored in Sanya.
You can also taste many kinds of food. For example, if you are a fruit lover, Sanya must be a dream place for you. There are fruits like mangoes, pineapples, coconuts and so on. Besides, delicious food in and out of China can be found in Shangpin Road.
As for the weather of Sanya, it is warm all year round because it is very close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you want especially in cold winter. Welcome to Sanya!
写作策略2: Divide the whole article into 4-5 paragraphs, and write down a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph. (把整篇文章分成4-5段，并在每段段首写出中心句。)
Language 语言
Linking words
What makes a good article?

语言支架—遣词造句
Content 内容
Structure 结构
You can visit many beautiful places and try interesting activities in Sanya. It is famous for wonderful beaches, such as Yalong Beach. What's more, there are different kinds of holiday activities, including water sports and shopping. You will never feel bored in Sanya.
You can also taste many kinds of food. For example, if you are a fruit lover, Sanya must be a dream place for you. There are fruits like mangoes, pineapples, coconuts and so on. Besides, delicious food in and out of China can be found in Shangpin Road.
As for the weather of Sanya, it is warm all year round because it is very close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you want especially in cold winter. Welcome to Sanya!
本文用到的连接词：
such as, What's more, for example, like, besides, as for, because，so
Circle the linking words(关联词).

Linking words can make your article more fluent and logical. 关联词可以让你的文章更流畅、更有逻辑性。




Language







写作策略3: Add proper linking words. (加上恰当的关联词)
You are invited to write to “Beautiful China”!
Beautiful China
Good news!
Beautiful China
Next up: Dongguan

How to introduce Dongguan?

Step 1: Choose 2-3 aspects to focus on

Step 2: Write down the title and topic sentences

Step 3: Prepare useful expressions to describe the aspects
Step 4: Add proper linking words
Step 5: Evaluate (评价) your writing
Five steps to go
What aspects (方面) can we write about to introduce a place?








Content

Step 1: Choose 2-3 aspects to focus on
Facts about Dongguan
Topics Dongguan
Location & size in _____________________; _______ square kilometers
Weather _______ all year around, neither too _____ nor too ______
History Dongguan has a _____ history of more than ____ years.
Places to visit ________________, _________, _______________________, ...
Special food ____________ Rice-flour Noodles (烧鹅濑粉), ________________ (腊肠)
Facts about Dongguan
Fill in the information card.
Guangdong Province
warm
hot
cold
long
2000
Songshan Lake
Keyuan
Huangqi Mountain Park
Roast Goose
Chinese sausage

2,460
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_____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________.
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Dongguan is a/an _________ city.
There are many places worth visiting in
One great thing about Dongguan is that ...

Step 2: Write down the title and topic sentences
请模仿三亚的介绍，写下介绍东莞的文章标题和每段中心句。
Dongguan-- a/an ________ city
Dongguan.
You can enjoy a lot of delicious food here.
Structure
此处答案并非唯一正确答案，只要重点介绍2-3个方面，语法正确皆可。

beautiful, nice, pleasant, great, charming (迷人的), attractive (吸引人的), amazing, wonderful, fantastic, interesting, unforgettable, comfortable ......
Language
What do you think of Dongguan?

Step 3: Prepare useful expressions to describe the aspects
Location 位置
Dongguan is in __________ part of Guangdong Province.
Dongguan is a city in Guangdong Province.
south
Size 面积
Dongguan is 2,460 square kilometers ___________.
in size
Dongguan _________________________ 8.46 million by 2019.
has a population of
Population 人口
Places to visit
______________ many interesting places to visit in Dongguan.
You __________________________ ...
There are
can go to/ can visit
Food
Dongguan _________________ (因……而著名) Roast Goose Rice-flour Noodles.
You ______________________________________ if you come to Dongguan.
(必须尝一下/ 不能错过)
is famous for
must have a try/ can't miss it
Dongguan is ________ all year round because ______________________________.
(离赤道很近)
Weather

warm
it is close to the equator
Beginning 开头
_______________________________________________ 你曾经到过东莞吗？
Ending 结尾
_________________________________ 欢迎到东莞来！
在文章开头用现在完成时提问，拉近作者和读者之间的距离。
在文章结尾，欢迎读者到东莞来旅游观光。
Welcome to Dongguan!
Have you ever been to Dongguan?
Step 4: Add proper linking words
连接词的答案并非唯一正确答案，只要逻辑合理，语法正确皆可。
常见连接词：
1. 表起始
first, firstly, to begin with...
2. 表承接
second, what's more, also, besides...
3. 表转折
but, however, on the other hand...
4. 表举例
such as, for example，like
5. 表因果
because, so, as a result...
6. 表总结
all in all, in short, in a word...
1. There are many places worth visiting in Dongguan, ________ Songshan Lake, Keyuan and Dongguan Botanical Garden.
2. Dongguan used to be an agricultural city. ____ now it has turned into one of the most important manufacturing cities in China.
3. You can enjoy a lot of delicious food. _____
________, you can try Chinese sausage. ____________________, you can't miss Roast Goose Rice-flour Noodles when you visit Dongguan.
4. Dongguan is quite close to the equator, ____ the weather is warm all year round, _______ too hot ____ too cold.
For
But
such as
example
What's more/ Besides
so
neither
nor
Self-check Peer-check Teacher-check
Structure
结构
(3分) Effective paragraph construction with topic sentences and supporting details.
有效的段落组织，包含主旨句和支持句。（3分）
Content
内容
（6分） General informatin 基本信息 （2分）
Aspect 1 方面1 （2分）
Aspect 2 方面2 （2分）
Language
语言
（6分） Linking words 关联词 （2分）
Grammar 语法 （2分）
Spelling 拼写 （2分）



Marking Ladder (量化评价表)
修改上交
自我评价
同伴互评

评价支架—反思提升
Step 5: Evaluate (评价) your writing


Summary
Writing Strategies
（写作策略）

写作策略1: List out the aspects you can write about and choose 2-3 aspects to focus on.
(把可写的方面列出来，挑选2-3个方面重点介绍)
写作策略2: Divide the whole article into 4-5 paragraphs, and write down a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph. (把整篇文章分成4-5段，并在每段段首写出中心句。)
写作策略3: Add proper linking words. (加上恰当的关联词)
1. 完成介绍东莞的文章写作，注意运用本节课所学的3个写作策略。

2. 根据《量化评价表》，先自行评价自己的作文，并拍照给同学互评，修改后再拍照提交给老师批改。

Preparations

Homework

Enjoy travelling & enjoy living.