(共25张PPT)
Unit 2 Culture Shock
---A thank-you email
Brad Li
Host parents---
Mr. and Mrs. Hurst
Review --- Brad Li’s experience in the US
Brad stayed with ____________ during his stay in the US.
The host family were _________ him.
kind to
a host family
Mr. and Mrs. Hurst
the Hursts
Review --- Brad Li’s experience in the US
They ____________________________ for him so that he wouldn’t miss home or feel lonely.
organized a lot of activities
Review --- Brad Li’s experience in the US
They __________________ with him in winter.
They taught him to play ______________.
played in the snow
baseball
Review --- Brad Li’s experience in the US
At Halloween, they took him to a party and dressed him up as _________________.
They also prepared a big Thanksgiving dinner with ___________________ for him.
Harry Potter
a huge turkey
You are Brad Li!
Host parents---
Mr. and Mrs. Hurst
You have already come back to China.
Write a thank-you email to them
Form of a thank-you email
Names of your host family
Closing
Signature (Your name)
Body of the email
Part 1.
Part 2.
Part 3.
Structure of a thank-you email
Greetings
Thank them
What did you learn?
What was the most exciting thing?
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
What have you done since you returned to China?
Invite them to China
What did you do during your stay in America?
Your experience in America
Part 1.
Greetings
How to greet sb. and show your thanks to sb.
How are you?
How are things going?
How is everything?
I hope all is well with you and your family.
…?
Part 1.
Thank them
How to greet sb. and show your thanks to sb.
Thank you very much for …
I’m grateful to you for …
I’m writing to express my appreciation to you for…
…
look after
take good care of
Part 2.
Work in pairs. Ask and answer.
What did you do? learn? the most exciting thing?
A: What did you do during your stay in the US?
B: During my stay in the US, I ____________.
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
A: What did you learn during your stay in the US?
(about American culture, festivals, …)
B: I learnt a lot about ____________________.
A: What was the most exciting thing?
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
B: The most exciting thing was that ________.
Part 3.
What have you done? & Invite them.
What have you done since you returned to China?
Invite them to China
---I have __________________________________
since I returned to China. (tell my friends about my visit)
told my friends about my visit in the US
They are totally surprised to know that______________.
miss…
I would like to invite you to…
I sincerely hope that you can…
Write on your writing notebook (作文本)
Pay attention:
Include all the points.
Use correct form, proper words, expressions and sentence patterns.
Avoid spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes.
Part 1.
Part 2.
Part 3.
Structure of a thank-you email
Greetings
Thank them
What did you learn?
What was the most exciting thing?
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
What have you done since you returned to China?
Invite them to China
What did you do during your stay in America?
Share your writing
Share your writing in groups.
Pick out the best one in your group.
How to write a thank-you email.
In your life, a lot of people have done a favor to
you in different ways, including your parents,
teachers, friends, even strangers.
Express your thanks to them.
To see the world with a grateful heart.
Sum up
Homework
Read at least 5 classmates’ articles.
Rewrite and improve your own writing.
Thank you!
Dear Mr and Mrs Hurst,
How are you? Thank you very much for looking after me in the US. You made me feel like part of the family.
During my visit in the US, I enjoyed myself a lot. I made many new friends, went on some exciting trips and attended interesting parties. I also learned about American culture and festivals.
Since I returned to China, I have told my friends about my visit. At the same time, I miss my new friends, food, festivals and culture of America. I sincerely hope you can come and visit me in China some day.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Brad
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
How time flies! I hope you are well. Thank you for looking after me in China last year. You were so friendly that I felt like part of your family.
During my stay in China, I made great progress in my Chinese. I made a lot of new friends. I learnt a lot about Chinese culture and history. I also visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum.
The most exciting thing was that I learnt how to make paper cuttings.
I have already shared my experiences with my friends. Now, I really miss the things I did in China. I would like to invite you and your family to come to England. And I’ll show you around our city.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Jack
your thanks to the family:
Write the topic sentence of each paragraph.
Thank you for taking care of me during my stay in the US.
what you like best about the stay:
I had a lot of happy memories with you.
what you experienced during the visit:
I experienced the culture shock during the visit.
I have told my friends about my experience in the US.
I miss you and the school very much.
what you have done since you returned to China:
what you miss about the visit:
your wish:
I would like you to come and visit me in China soon.
A Read the speech on page 19 again. Imagine you are Brad. Use the following
outline to write a thank-you email to the Hurst family.
In groups, arrange the contents of each paragraph.
Paragraph 1
Thank you for taking care of me during my stay in the US.
Paragraph 2
I had a lot of happy memories with you. I still remember playing in the snow happily in your backyard last winter. … To tell you the truth, I experienced the culture shock during my stay in the US. The language, the food and the school were all quite strange to me. …
Paragraph 3
I have told my friends about my experience in the US since I came back. They were surprised to know that some American students have pink or purple hair. Anyway, I miss you and the school very much. How are my classmates and the teachers in the US? ... I would like you to come and visit me in China soon. I hope to take you to visit some places of interest around my city.
9B Unit 2 Culture Shock---A thank-you email (writing)
罗湖外语学校初中实验部 刘文静 Rory
Learning objectives 学习目标:
1.Knowledge objectives: By the end of the class, students will be able to master related words,
expressions and sentence patterns.
知识目标:学生能够掌握相关词汇表达与写作句型。
2. Ability objectives: Students can gain the ability of writing a thank-you email.
能力目标:学生能够获取给帮助过自己的人写感谢信的能力。
3. Emotional objectives: Students can learn how to express their thanks to others and realize the
importance of expressing their thanks to others. Besides, students will have a better understanding
of American culture through discussing the topic.
情感目标:学生能够学习如何表达感谢,以及向他人表达感谢的重要性。此外,学生将通过对该话题的讨论,对美国文化有更好的理解。进而,在本作文课的后续任务中,引导学生对于中国文化有更深入的了解和理解。
Learning procedures 学习流程:
Step 1: Lead in 第1步:引入
1. Review Brad Li’s experience in the US. 复习Brad Li的经历。
2. Lead in the theme. 引入主题。
Step 2: Pre-writing 第2步:写作前
Review and brainstorm the form and structure of the thank-you email.
复习并学习感谢邮件的格式和框架。
Discuss and learn how to write the body part of this email, including greeting and expressing thanks, recalling the experience in the US and inviting them to China.
讨论并学习如何写邮件的正文部分,包括问候、表达感谢,回忆在美国交流的经历以及邀请他们来中国等。
Step 3: While-writing 第3步:写作中
Write the email on their writing notebook by themselves.
在作文本上写这封邮件。
Step 4: Post-writing 第4步:写作后
Share their writing in groups and choose the best one.
组内分享作文,并选出最佳作文。
Share some group’s best articles to the whole class with the help of the Ipad.
在平板的帮助下,向全班分享小组最佳作文。
Step 5: Sum up 第5步:总结
Lead the students to realize the importance of expressing thanks to others.
引导学生意识到向其他人表达感谢的重要性,以及怀着一颗感恩的心看世界的价值观。
Homework: Rewrite and improve their own writing.
作业:阅读其他学生作文,重写并完善作文。
9B Unit 2 Culture Shock---A thank-you email (writing)
参考句型:
(加油加油,作为Brad Li, 发挥你的想象力,想象在美国的经历)
Part 1. How to greet sb. and show your thanks to sb.
Greetings
How are you?
How are things going?
How is everything?
I hope all is well with you and your family.
Thank them
Thank you very much for …
I’m grateful to you for …
I’m writing to express my appreciation to you for…
Part 2. What did you do? learn? the most exciting thing?
A: What did you do during your stay in the US?
B: During my stay in the US, I __________________________________.
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
A: What did you learn during your stay in the US?
B: I learnt a lot about _________________________________________.
(about American culture, festivals, …)
A: What was the most exciting thing?
B: The most exciting thing was that _____________________________.
(new friends, trips, parties, …)
Part 3. What have you done? & Invite them.
What have you done since you returned to China?
I have __________________________________ since I returned to China. (tell my friends about my visit)
Invite them to China
miss…
I would like to invite you to…
I sincerely hope that you can…