必修4 Module 4 Great ScientistsWriting 课件（22张PPT）
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Continuation Writing
读 后 续 写
庭有枇杷树，吾妻死之年所手植也，今已亭亭如盖矣。
低俗版本续写 ：
今伐之，为博小娘子一笑
有趣版本：
小娘子一笑，正若吾妻年少时。
高阶版本：
小娘子为吾妻及吾之女，今伐树，为小娘子造出 嫁之物，愿伉俪情深，不输吾与亡妻。
北镇高中 于倩
Learning aims:
know the requirements of the writing.
process the important information of the reading passage.
learn how to infer, develop and write the end of the story according to the given information.
learn how to polish the writing
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
2016年高考读后续写
Step 1：Thorough Reading
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。
Paragraph 1：
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What's the style of the passage?
Narration (记叙文)
B. Exposition (说明文)
C. Argumentation (议论文)
?
A story
when
where
who
what
how
why
Jane, Tom
Jane was lost.
UNKNOWN
Read for basic information
------ask basic 6 questions
in the forest
One weekend in July
they started to quarrel.
Jane was so angry that
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
In what order is the material developed?
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
With which person viewpoint is the material descripted?
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
With what tense is the material developed?
Read for the plot
quarrel, walked away
angry
was lost
cried
saw, drank, ate, felt stronger
kept moving, had to stop, wanted
heard, took off, thinking
frightened,
regretful,
confused，
joyful, hopeful
hopeful, anxious
behaviors feelings
para. 1
para. 2
para. 3
para. 4
para. 5
para. 6
actions
words
surroundings
thoughts
looks
Beginning
Climax
Ending
quarrelled
got lost
cried
wanted
saw, drank, ate
heard, took off, thinking that ...
angry
frightened
regretful
(helicopters)
joyful
hopeful
no more helicopters
woke up
rescued?
feelings?
Three kinds of conflict:
man against man, man against nature, man against himself.
Read for
the language
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
With no path to follow, Jane……
……, she turned around, hoping to ……
Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that ……
Jane rose……, hungry and thirsty.
If only she had not left her mobile phone ……
Never in her life had she tasted anything better.
The underlined words
Step 2：Creative plotting（构思）
Classify 10 key words into different groups.
_________________: Jane, Tom
_________________: walked, climbed
_________________: helicopter, yellow blouse
_________________: lake, stream, at a distance
_________________: to her great joy
characters
behaviors
tools
places
feelings
(consequence)
prehaps something that Jane thought might help save her from the troublesome situation.
Infer the ending(the plot,the underlined key words,the given two sentences)
细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节。
Para. 1: But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?
How did Jane feel then?
How did Jane struggle through the night?
Did she fall asleep?
Para. 2: It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.
Was Jane rescued?
Who rescued Jane?
How was she rescued?
What Jane did for survival?
How did she feel after the reunion with Tom?
Step 3：Swift drafting
There is little posiblility that the helicopter would save Jane.
Jane fell asleep.
to her great joy
Checklist for continuation writing
☆Have I included at least 5 of the given words and underlined them?
☆Does the writing follow the given sentences naturally?
☆Does the second paragraph follow the first logically?
☆Does the extended part convey a message or relate to a central idea already expressed or implied?
☆Have I employed specific words to make details vivid?
☆Have I used appropriate transitional words to make the paragraph coherent?
☆Are there any grammatical errors in tenses, plurals and verb forms?
1.Using transitional words（连接词） can make your writing more fluent.
2. Adding some details (the actions, feelings, and the conversation) will make your writing vivid.
3. Using different structures and sentence pattern can make your language native and beautiful.
Step 4：Careful polishing
2016年10月高考作文 23分
悲伤
快乐
Step 5：Handwriting (neat and clear)
Thank You!
Tips for writing:
1. Thorough reading
2. Creative plotting（构思）
3. Swift drafting
4. Careful polishing
5. Neat copying
Homework：How to polish your writing
Continuation Writing
读 后 续 写
庭有枇杷树，吾妻死之年所手植也，今已亭亭如盖矣。
低俗版本续写 ：
今伐之，为博小娘子一笑
有趣版本：
小娘子一笑，正若吾妻年少时。
高阶版本：
小娘子为吾妻及吾之女，今伐树，为小娘子造出 嫁之物，愿伉俪情深，不输吾与亡妻。
北镇高中 于倩
Learning aims:
know the requirements of the writing.
process the important information of the reading passage.
learn how to infer, develop and write the end of the story according to the given information.
learn how to polish the writing
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
2016年高考读后续写
Step 1：Thorough Reading
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。
Paragraph 1：
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What's the style of the passage?
Narration (记叙文)
B. Exposition (说明文)
C. Argumentation (议论文)
?
A story
when
where
who
what
how
why
Jane, Tom
Jane was lost.
UNKNOWN
Read for basic information
------ask basic 6 questions
in the forest
One weekend in July
they started to quarrel.
Jane was so angry that
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
In what order is the material developed?
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
With which person viewpoint is the material descripted?
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
Read for the organization
With what tense is the material developed?
Read for the plot
quarrel, walked away
angry
was lost
cried
saw, drank, ate, felt stronger
kept moving, had to stop, wanted
heard, took off, thinking
frightened,
regretful,
confused，
joyful, hopeful
hopeful, anxious
behaviors feelings
para. 1
para. 2
para. 3
para. 4
para. 5
para. 6
actions
words
surroundings
thoughts
looks
Beginning
Climax
Ending
quarrelled
got lost
cried
wanted
saw, drank, ate
heard, took off, thinking that ...
angry
frightened
regretful
(helicopters)
joyful
hopeful
no more helicopters
woke up
rescued?
feelings?
Three kinds of conflict:
man against man, man against nature, man against himself.
Read for
the language
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?_________________________________
It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.?_________________________________________
With no path to follow, Jane……
……, she turned around, hoping to ……
Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that ……
Jane rose……, hungry and thirsty.
If only she had not left her mobile phone ……
Never in her life had she tasted anything better.
The underlined words
Step 2：Creative plotting（构思）
Classify 10 key words into different groups.
_________________: Jane, Tom
_________________: walked, climbed
_________________: helicopter, yellow blouse
_________________: lake, stream, at a distance
_________________: to her great joy
characters
behaviors
tools
places
feelings
(consequence)
prehaps something that Jane thought might help save her from the troublesome situation.
Infer the ending(the plot,the underlined key words,the given two sentences)
细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节。
Para. 1: But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.?
How did Jane feel then?
How did Jane struggle through the night?
Did she fall asleep?
Para. 2: It?was?daybreak?when?Jane?woke?up.
Was Jane rescued?
Who rescued Jane?
How was she rescued?
What Jane did for survival?
How did she feel after the reunion with Tom?
Step 3：Swift drafting
There is little posiblility that the helicopter would save Jane.
Jane fell asleep.
to her great joy
Checklist for continuation writing
☆Have I included at least 5 of the given words and underlined them?
☆Does the writing follow the given sentences naturally?
☆Does the second paragraph follow the first logically?
☆Does the extended part convey a message or relate to a central idea already expressed or implied?
☆Have I employed specific words to make details vivid?
☆Have I used appropriate transitional words to make the paragraph coherent?
☆Are there any grammatical errors in tenses, plurals and verb forms?
1.Using transitional words（连接词） can make your writing more fluent.
2. Adding some details (the actions, feelings, and the conversation) will make your writing vivid.
3. Using different structures and sentence pattern can make your language native and beautiful.
Step 4：Careful polishing
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Step 5：Handwriting (neat and clear)
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Tips for writing:
1. Thorough reading
2. Creative plotting（构思）
3. Swift drafting
4. Careful polishing
5. Neat copying
Homework：How to polish your writing