高中英语人教版选修六 选修六 Unit 3 A healthy life writing课件(53张ppt)

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选修六 Unit 3 A healthy life(6)
高二年级 英语


Lesson 6 Writing


Revision
1. What happened to the grandson James?

2. How did his grandad help him solve the problem?

Revision

1. What happened to the grandson James?



2. How did his grandad help him solve the problem?

James was addicted to smoking. He also had an unhealthy life, and he wanted to quit smoking.
His grandad wrote a persuasive letter and told his experience.
Dear James,
I’m terribly sorry to hear that you are addicted to smoking. Now I am writing to give you some tips that may work.
First of all, I suggest that you should make a list of all the bad effects and benefits you will get from smoking. Secondly, you are advised to be determined and do some relaxation exercise to break the bad habit.







If I were you, I would require my parents and friends to help me form a good habit. Last but not the least, keep trying and you will succeed eventually.

Love from,
Grandad



due to
quit
over and over again
Neither did I know…
strengthen your resolve
decide on


do terrible damage to
do great harm to
be harmful to
affect one’s health
have a(an)…effect on
be unfit


Can you conclude some useful expressions in the passage Advice from Grandad which can be used in your writing?
Dear Michael,
I hope everything goes on well with you. I am suffering from tough time in my life. I am eager for your suggestions and aid.
I am really nervous and stressed out as the final exam is approaching. Consequently, I have sleep problem at night and can’t have enough sleep.
I feel exhausted in class and it is really impossible for me to fully concentrate on my studies. What should I do?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.

Love from,
Lihua
What happened to Lihua?


Problems:
feel nervous and stressed out
have sleep problem and feel exhausted in class
can’t fully concentrate on his classes

You are the excellent advisor!
Your advice should be reasonable and acceptable!


What advice will you give him?

Possible advice:

Go over your lessons as carefully as you can to make full
preparations for the approaching exam.
Strike a right balance between work and play so that you
can study with high efficiency.
Take up some healthy activities to relax yourself, such as
swimming, playing basketball, listening to music and so on.

Possible advice:


Never be afraid of failure. Believe in yourself and be
confident as well as optimistic.
Exchange opinions with your parents, teachers as well as
your friends.
Set a goal and make every effort to achieve it.
Dear Lihua,
I’m terribly sorry to hear that you are suffering from examination anxiety currently. Now I am writing to give you some tips that may work.
First of all, I suggest that you should go over all the lessons as carefully as you can to make full preparations for the approaching exam. Secondly, you are advised to learn to strike a right balance between work and play so that you can study with high efficiency. If I were you, I would take up some healthy activities to relax myself, such as swimming, playing basketball, listening to music and so on.
In addition, never be afraid of failure. Believe in yourself and be confident as well as optimistic. What’s more, it is also my suggestion that you should exchange opinions with your parents, teachers as well as friends. Last but not the least, you are supposed to set a goal and make every effort to achieve it.
I sincerely hope that you will find the advice practical and helpful.
Best wishes and good luck to you.
Love from,
Michael
Dear Lihua,
I’m terribly sorry to hear that you are suffering from examination anxiety currently. Now I am writing to give you some tips that may work.
salutation
Beginning :the reason
First of all, I suggest that you should go over all the lessons as carefully as you can to make full preparations for the approaching exam. Secondly, you are advised to learn to strike a right balance between work and play so that you can study with high efficiency. If I were you, I would take up some healthy activities to relax myself, such as swimming, playing basketball, listening to music and so on.
Middle:
advice
In addition, never be afraid of failure. Believe in yourself and be confident as well as optimistic. What’s more, it is also my suggestion that you should exchange opinions with your parents, teachers as well as friends. Last but not the least, you are supposed to set a goal and make every effort to achieve it.
I sincerely hope that you will find the advice practical and helpful.
Best wishes and good luck to you.
Love from
Michael

Middle:
advice
Ending:
Follow-up action
Signature

Contents of a letter of advice
Beginning: the reason
Middle: your advice
Ending: Conclusion (best wishes, hope)


Suggested sentence patterns

Main body:
You had better do …
Why not do …?
Why don’t you do …?
It is a good idea to do sth. …
You should do …


Suggested sentence patterns

How about / What about doing…?
I recommend that ... should do...
I advise / suggest that ...should do...
My suggestion is that ...should do...
If sb. did, sb. would do...
The reason why ...is that it will ...



Linking words

firstly/ first of all/ to begin with/ above all…
besides / in additon / moreover / what’s more / more important
/ apart from that / secondly / furthermore
lastly / last but not the least / in a word / in conclusion


Suggested sentence patterns

To show your pity and sorry:
I am sorry to hear that you are faced with some problems.
To comfort him/her:
Please don’t be worried. I can give you some suggestions that may help you.
To give your best wishes and hope:
I am looking forward to your early reply/good news.
I hope my advice can help you.



Oral practice
Dear Tony,
Can you help me please? My friend has just started smoking. I do not like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said that I was not grown-up enough.
Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed and awkward. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want to start smoking, but I do not want to lose my best friend, either.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
What happened to Jim?
Problems:





You are the excellent advisor!
Your advice should be reasonable and acceptable!



be laughted at
don't know how to refuse
don't want to lose his close friend
Possible advice:
Stop feeling embarrassed and awkward.
List down all the disadvantages of smoking.
Tell her smoking can make you ill later in life.
You should talk to your friend gently and honestly, and
explain that you are still good friends and don’t want to
break this friendship.


Suggested sentence patterns

Main body:
You had better do …
Why not do …?
Why don’t you do …?
It would be a good idea to do sth. …
I advise / suggest that ... should do...
The reason why... is that…
If I were you, I would do…


Linking words

firstly/ first of all/ to begin with/ above all…
besides / in additon / moreover / what's more / more important
/ apart from that / secondly / furthermore
lastly / last but not the least / in a word / in conclusion

Suggested sentence patterns

Beginning:
I am sorry to read about your problem.
Beginning:
Please don’t be worried. I can give you some suggestions that may help you.
Ending:
I am looking forward to your early reply/good news.
I hope my advice can help you.



Dear Jim,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. But please don’t be worried and disappointed. Here is some advice that can be of some help to you.



Beginning: the reason
First of all, I suggest that you should stop feeling embarrassed and awkward. It is not your fault. Secondly, if I were you, I would list down all the disadvantages of smoking: (1) Smoking cigarettes is an addictive, expensive and dirty habit. (2) It can make you ill later in life. Even breathing in other people’s smoke can make you ill. (3) It is more difficult to stop than it is to start.
Middle: advice
Middle: advice
What’s more, it is my advice that you should talk to your friend gently and honestly and explain that you are still good friends and don’t want to break this friendship. However, you are not supposed to begin smoking to suit her. Give her the information above and then explain that whatever she chooses to do, you will remain her friend.
Ending









I sincerely hope that you will find the advice practical and helpful.
Best wishes and good luck to you.

Love from,
Tony



Please based on your experiences write a letter of advice to your nephew, Jack, who has been addicted to online games for a long time and his study is suffering. In your letter, you should cover the following aspects:

the bad effects of online games.
at least three pieces of advice based on your own
experience.



Task

Outline
Beginning

Show your sympathy for him and encourage him.

Middle
List the bad effects of being addicted to online games and give him advice.
Ending
Express your wish.
Discussion
What are the harmful effects of being addicted to online games?
What advice should you give him?



What are the harmful effects of being addicted to online games?

1. do damage to eyesight
2. get a great pain in one’s neck
3. affect one’s study and fall behind others
4. waste time and money
5. break away from the society, live in one’s own world
6. have no friends, become lonely
7. settle disagreements with violence

What advice should you give him?

1. List the disadvantages and put the list where one can see it.
2. Limit the time of playing online games.
3. Find something good to do. For example, doing sports,
leaving more time with friends, review lessons.
4. Make an effective schedule and find a supervisor.



Can you think of some useful expressions which can be used in the letter of advice?

Beginning:



Ending:
I am sorry to read about your problem.
You had better do …
It would be a good idea to do sth. …
If I were you, I would…
I suggest that you should…
linking words

Middle:
I hope my advice can help you…

Beginning: the reason

Dear Jack,
I feel sorry to know you has been addicted to online games recently and your study is affected. Abandoning yourself to the internet will not only affect your health but also make your study decline. Because I have such experience, so I know how you feel now. I'm writing to you with the intention of helping you overcome the Internet addiction.
Here are some suggestions with you, which I hope could be of help to you. To begin with, you should understand the benefits and effects of the Internet to help you use it wisely. In addition, why not set a specific time to play the computer to protect your eyes as well as reduce the using time. For example, twice a week.
Middle: advice
Middle: advice
Apart from the advice above, it would be a good idea to do some other things, for instance, reading books and playing basketball with your friends instead of playing computer whole day. It can help you get more knowledge and refresh yourself from the pressure.


Ending: follow-up action

Hopefully, what I've mentioned about could be helpful. Please feel free to contact me, if you have further questions.

Yours,
Uncle
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you have heavy pressure in preparing your exam due to playing online games. I also like playing online games and I know how it easy to be addicted to it and how tough it is to stop. but now I quit it and have a good job. I also get a high salary. When I am in my spare time, I would like to go abroad to enjoy the life.

Beginning: the reason
A teacher's version

Middle: advice

Just you mentioned, once we were addicted to games, we can’t concentrate on our lessons. As a result, we may quickly fall behind others, which may upset our parents. I don’t know whether you have noticed other bad effects of playing games. Besides, if I play online games every day, my eyes will be painful. Also, it can do terrible damage to my neck. Once I played online games all day and even forget to eat meals, when I finish playing, I feel so dizzy.

Middle: advice






Do you have the similar feeling? What’s more, it is reported that many games are filled with violence. If we play these games over and over again, we may also settle disagreements with violence automatically, which may be the worst effect.
Do you know who helped me at the end? It is my teacher, who give me a lot of advice. Here I will share it with you. Firstly, my teacher let me list the disadvantages of that bad habit.


Middle: advice
Then put the list to the place where I can see it easily. Besides, she advised me to find something fun and good to do, but not play games right away. It is a good idea to leave more time with your friends, more time to review our lessons and hang out at a bookstore, join a sport team or something else. Lastly, she suggests me making an effective schedule and a supervisor. He or she will give warning if you go to play games. With the help of her, my study soon improved.


Ending: follow-up action


I think it is time for you to strengthen your resolve to quit playing games. I do hope you can become as hardworking a student as your classmates.

Love from,
Your uncle
Assessment rubric (评价量规)

Ideas Are the ideas clear?
Is the advice practical and persuasive?
Organization salutation□ beginning□ middle□
ending□ closing□ signature□
Language Are expressions used properly?
Logic Are connectives (连接词) used properly?




Summary

Complete Contents
Clear Structure
Coherent Context
Appropriate Communication
Correct Language
Clean Handwriting



Homework

1. Polish your writing and write it down on your
notebook.
2. Accumulate good sentences and other
expressions in your writing notebook.