外研版选修6 Module 7 Revision how to enrich writing写作课件（28张PPT）
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外研版 高二年级(选修6) Module 7
英语写作
How to enrich our letter
by adding details
英语作文之细节描写法
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷I）
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的：
2．个人优势：
3．能做的事情。
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷II）
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
2019年高考英语全国卷 Ⅲ书面表达
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析
1.在高考全国卷英语高考书面表达中，应用文的命题形式主要以提纲式材料来呈现。所提供信息趋向于简单化，要点化，多呈现半开放式命题特点。
2.这既是机遇（发挥空间更大）。
3.这又是挑战（字数不够，拿什么来凑？）？？？
注意：可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
如何“短话长说”？
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
3
逻辑性拓展
1
交际性拓展
拓展
I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
Sample One
1. I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
2. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
给今年即将读大学的全体高三学生写封信，信中建议他们在高考（the College Entrance Examination）结束后的暑假中能够安排一些有意义的事去做。
给
建议
(15')
(18')
(22')
1. 英国朋友对中国传统文化感兴趣。你邀请他参加中国国画展览。
I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese painting exhibition.
1
Practice ：
Improve it!
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese painting exhibition.
Look forward to your reply.
Sample One
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
2.盼望收到你的回复。
tip：
交际性拓展，主要集中在信件开头与结尾，可通过背景介绍，感谢期待等内容的添加，让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。
1. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
2. I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities.
Sample Two
In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of food, and most importantly, getting lucky money.
1. 向英国朋友介绍中国学生的寒假生活。
I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for his favor.
In China, the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship, reunion and good luck, so I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for his favor.
2.你准备了中国结作为礼物送给外国网友，感谢他的帮助。
Practice ：
细节拓展可通过两方面进行:
1.下义延伸，即通过适当添加例子，将写作内容具体化。（such as, for example, like…）
2.平行补充：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
3
逻辑性拓展
Sample Three
1.邀请他来中国体验文化。
2. 所有老师全部为外教。
3. 暑假建议你去学车。
Look at the sentences below:
I would like to invite you to come to China this summer.
All the teachers are native English speakers.
You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license.
Why not pay a visit to China, so that you can have a taste of Chinese culture in person?
All the teachers are native English speakers, making you exposed to fluent language environment.
You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license, which will enable you to drive in your daily routine.
so that
making
which
表结果
试
试
4. 向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，推荐同学李雷为导游。
5. 学校茶文化活动通知。
6. 李华，考试不要紧张。
I’d like to recommend my classmate Li Lei to be your guide.
A Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.
Li Hua, don’t be nervous while taking exams.
As I know, you want someone who has a broad knowledge of
traditional Chinese painting. So I’d like to recommend Li Lei
to be your guide.
In order to enrich our students’ knowledge of tea, a Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.
Li Hua, don’t be nervous while taking exams, because it will
prevent you from concentrating your attention on the test paper.
Look at the sentences below:
Sample Three
表原因
1.课前请做好充分准备。Please make full preparations for the lesson.
1
2
2.建议网友Peter学习中国唐诗。
Why not try to learn Tang poetry?
Practice ：
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
1.学校安全会议召开。A meeting will be held on May 13th in Room 504, Building No.1.
3
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In order to raise students’ awareness of security, a meeting will be held
on May 13th in Room 504, Building No.1.
Why not try to learn Tang poetry so that you can feel the beauty of
Chinese language?
Please make full preparations for the lesson, which will enable you to understand the content much better.
?掌握拓展技巧，在于先写出句子主干(核心信息)，再根据需要增添附加成分。
逻辑性
拓展
交际性拓展
细节性
拓展
拓展小结
写出句子主干
课堂练习
假定你是李华，你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 作业多，没有时间运动。
2. 压力大，难以入睡。
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
111
1
1.你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。
2. 作业多，没有时间运动。
3. 压力大，难以入睡。
4. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
1.你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。
Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my final exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.
2. 作业多，没有时间运动。
I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.
3. 压力大，难以入睡。
The high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
4. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. _________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for the final exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. I will appreciate it very much if my trouble can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Homework
Review what we get today.
Finish the writing task of module7 in book6.
THANK YOU!
外研版 高二年级(选修6) Module 7
英语写作
How to enrich our letter
by adding details
英语作文之细节描写法
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷I）
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的：
2．个人优势：
3．能做的事情。
2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（全国卷II）
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
2019年高考英语全国卷 Ⅲ书面表达
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
分析
1.在高考全国卷英语高考书面表达中，应用文的命题形式主要以提纲式材料来呈现。所提供信息趋向于简单化，要点化，多呈现半开放式命题特点。
2.这既是机遇（发挥空间更大）。
3.这又是挑战（字数不够，拿什么来凑？）？？？
注意：可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
如何“短话长说”？
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
3
逻辑性拓展
1
交际性拓展
拓展
I am writing to offer you some suggestions.
Sample One
1. I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
2. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
给今年即将读大学的全体高三学生写封信，信中建议他们在高考（the College Entrance Examination）结束后的暑假中能够安排一些有意义的事去做。
给
建议
(15')
(18')
(22')
1. 英国朋友对中国传统文化感兴趣。你邀请他参加中国国画展览。
I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese painting exhibition.
1
Practice ：
Improve it!
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese painting exhibition.
Look forward to your reply.
Sample One
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
2.盼望收到你的回复。
tip：
交际性拓展，主要集中在信件开头与结尾，可通过背景介绍，感谢期待等内容的添加，让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。
1. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.
2. I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities.
Sample Two
In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of food, and most importantly, getting lucky money.
1. 向英国朋友介绍中国学生的寒假生活。
I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for his favor.
In China, the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship, reunion and good luck, so I prepared a Chinese knot as a present in return for his favor.
2.你准备了中国结作为礼物送给外国网友，感谢他的帮助。
Practice ：
细节拓展可通过两方面进行:
1.下义延伸，即通过适当添加例子，将写作内容具体化。（such as, for example, like…）
2.平行补充：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。
1
交际性拓展
拓展
2
细节性拓展
3
逻辑性拓展
Sample Three
1.邀请他来中国体验文化。
2. 所有老师全部为外教。
3. 暑假建议你去学车。
Look at the sentences below:
I would like to invite you to come to China this summer.
All the teachers are native English speakers.
You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license.
Why not pay a visit to China, so that you can have a taste of Chinese culture in person?
All the teachers are native English speakers, making you exposed to fluent language environment.
You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license, which will enable you to drive in your daily routine.
so that
making
which
表结果
试
试
4. 向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，推荐同学李雷为导游。
5. 学校茶文化活动通知。
6. 李华，考试不要紧张。
I’d like to recommend my classmate Li Lei to be your guide.
A Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.
Li Hua, don’t be nervous while taking exams.
As I know, you want someone who has a broad knowledge of
traditional Chinese painting. So I’d like to recommend Li Lei
to be your guide.
In order to enrich our students’ knowledge of tea, a Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.
Li Hua, don’t be nervous while taking exams, because it will
prevent you from concentrating your attention on the test paper.
Look at the sentences below:
Sample Three
表原因
1.课前请做好充分准备。Please make full preparations for the lesson.
1
2
2.建议网友Peter学习中国唐诗。
Why not try to learn Tang poetry?
Practice ：
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
1.学校安全会议召开。A meeting will be held on May 13th in Room 504, Building No.1.
3
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In order to raise students’ awareness of security, a meeting will be held
on May 13th in Room 504, Building No.1.
Why not try to learn Tang poetry so that you can feel the beauty of
Chinese language?
Please make full preparations for the lesson, which will enable you to understand the content much better.
?掌握拓展技巧，在于先写出句子主干(核心信息)，再根据需要增添附加成分。
逻辑性
拓展
交际性拓展
细节性
拓展
拓展小结
写出句子主干
课堂练习
假定你是李华，你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 作业多，没有时间运动。
2. 压力大，难以入睡。
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
111
1
1.你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。
2. 作业多，没有时间运动。
3. 压力大，难以入睡。
4. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
1.你正在为期末考试紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。
Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my final exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.
2. 作业多，没有时间运动。
I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.
3. 压力大，难以入睡。
The high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
4. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. _________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for the final exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. I will appreciate it very much if my trouble can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Homework
Review what we get today.
Finish the writing task of module7 in book6.
THANK YOU!