(共35张PPT)
Book7 Unit 1 Writing
He/she is .
Describe people
and practise using non-finite verbs
Thomas Edison
william shakespeare
madam curie
helen keller
Fill in the chart according to what you know.
Name Achievement Character
Helen keller
Thomas Edison
Madam curie
William Shakespeare
What is description?
Description is like a photograph or a painting in words.
The writer uses a careful selection of specific and concrete details to make a clear dominant impressions on the readers.
Essentials of descriptive writing
Know your purpose
focus on a dominant idea
base your description on observation
Read the passage about Yaoming
find out the adjectives to describe personalities and brainstorm more suitable adjectives.
What information should be included when describing people?
Task1: find out adjectives to describe personalities and brainstorm more suitable adjectives
Task2: What information should be included when describing people?
Discussion
Word bank
aggressive, modest,devoted,diligent,considerate
responsible, organized, motivated, courageous,
cheerful, creative, easy-going, warm-hearted,
generous,, dynamic, unselfish, determined,
independent, brave, educated, enthusiastic,
Framwork
Necessary information
A special person
A brief introduction
Character Achievement People’s view about him or her
Conclusion
practice using non-finite verbs
简单句的高级形式___________
使用 非谓语动词
1. Looking from the top of mountain, the
city is beautiful .
2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an
enjoyable thing.
3. —Which team is good at cooking?
—A team called itself the supper cook.
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误
1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致
Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .
Looked from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误
2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语
2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.
In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误
3、主动、被动含义混淆
A team calling itself the supper cook.
3. —Which team is good at cooking?
—A team called itself the supper cook.
A team called the supper cook.
1.When I heard that, I was much moved.
2.“It is very strange” the woman said and smiled.
3.They were faced with many problems. They didn’t lose heart.
4.I was seriously injured and I couldn’t stand up.
5. My brother was riding a bike and I sat at the back of it.
6. My teacher helped me and my English has improved a lot.
1.When I heard that,I was much moved
Hearing that, I was much moved.
2.“It is very strange” the woman said and smiled.
“It is very strange”said the woman , smiling.
3. They were faced with many problems.They didn’t lose heart.
Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart.
4. I was seriously injured and I couldn’t stand up.
Seriously injured, I couldn’t stand up.
5.My brother was riding a bike and I sat at the back of it.
My brother was riding a bike with me sitting
on the seat back
With my teacher helping me, my English has greatly improved.
6. My teacher helped me and my English has improved a lot.
__________________Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.
1. 出生于美国的托马斯·爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。
Born in America ,
为了学习好,我们需要体育运动.
______________________we need to do sports...
In order to study well,
3.与其他老师相比,李先生更注意教学方法。
_______________________________Mr. Li pays more attention to his way of teaching.
Compared with other teachers,
_______________________, He became the winner.
Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months
4.练习了两个月的篮球,他获胜了。
——————————————————, it‘s necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.
With the society developing rapidly,
6.随着社会快速发展,我们有必要掌握英语和
电脑知识。
5.从她脸上的神情看,她一定有非常令人兴奋的消息要告诉我们。
——————————
she must have news of great excitement to tell us.
Judging from the expression on her face,
I will regard it as my duty
__________________
7.我会把它当作我的职责,以帮助保持我们的环境清洁和健康。
8. 能告诉你关于当地生活的一些相关信息是我的荣幸。
It is a great honour for me
_______________
to help keep our environment clean and healthy.
to tell you some information relevant to the local life.
牛刀小试: Now it’s your turn!
根据以下要点,写一篇关于邓亚萍的文章。
出生于河南,身高1.55米。
5岁开始打球,师从其父。1988进入国家队。
获得14次世界冠军,并获得4枚奥运金牌。被誉为“世界乒坛皇后”
注意:词数100词左右。
Attention
文体
分段
时态
人称
信息点整合
1.Born in … , he is a 18-year-old student, studying in a university…
2.Known as a … , he is confident and independent, with a positive attitude to…
3.He is devoted to his work, spending lots of time…
4. She took classes, having…., achieved a lot
Topic sentence
supporting sentence1,
for example, supporting sentence2,
for instance, supporting sentence3,
concluding sentence
The outline below will be of great help.
criteria self-evaluation peer-evaluation teacher’s evaluation
1.content
2.organization
3. vocabulary
4.grammar
5.handwriting
Reading makes a full man;
conference a ready man;
and writing an exact man.
Francis Bacon
阅读使人充实,会谈使人敏捷,写作使人精确。?—— 培根
Homework
to polish and revise their writing and hand in the final draft.
My problems____________________________ _______________________________________
My solution ______________________________________________________________________________
Thank you !