外研版选修8 Module 1 Deep South Writing 课件（32张PPT）

(共32张PPT)
Book 8 Module 1 Deep South
------ an account of the journey
Marco Polo and his book
Which city have you been to before?
If you have a chance to travel a beautiful or famous city, what will you say about it?
浮生偷闲游故宫，皇城门上朱丹红。
云裁月镂七间楼，风戏蝶翻蟾边构。
琉璃瓦下大政殿，青砖亭内十王侯。
煌煌紫气今犹在，不见昔时太祖游。
----游沈阳故宫记
1. Where did you go?
2. How was the weather?
3. What did you do?
4. How was the food?
5. How were the people?
6. How did you feel about the trip?
place
weather
routes
food
people
feeling
Summarize：
Mind map:
place weather routes
food people feeling
journey
place
weather
routes
food
people
feeling
Mind map:
clauses从句
nonfinite verbs
非谓语动词
conjunctions连词
What expressions can we use to connect the routes together?
on the first day
on the second day
the following day
later
then
last but not least/ lastly
in addition (to) / besides
What’s more./moreover/furthermore
Beijing
Connect the routes with the expressions above
Last month my parents took me to Beijing. _______, we went to the Great Wall. _______, we went to the Palace Museum. ______, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan and Xiang Hill. _______, we tasted the Beijing Roast Duck.
Expressions:
on the first day
on the second day
the following day
later
then
last but not least/ lastly
in addition (to) / besides
What’s more./moreover/furthermore
Connect the routes with the expressions above
Last month my parents took me to Beijing. _______, we went to the Great Wall. _______, we went to the Palace Museum. ______, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan and Xiang Hill. _______, we tasted the Beijing Roast Duck.
Connect sentences together by clauses or expressions to make them better.
On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. It is very long and old.
On the first day, we went to the Great Wall, ________is very long and old.
2. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.
We felt very tired _______ ________to the top of the Great Wall.
which
when
climbing
3. We wanted to prove the words.
One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.
We wanted to prove the words_________
one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.
4. There were many antiques. We could know the great culture.
There were many antiques, ______ made us know the great culture.
that
which
5. The scenery of red maple leaves all over the hill was very spectacular(壮丽). I took many photos.
The scenery of red maple leaves all over the hill was ______ spectacular_______ I took many photos.
so
that
Try to translate into Chinese.
漫山红色枫叶的景色如此之壮丽以至于我拍了很多照片。
How can we start a conclusion ?
I feel...
I enjoy...
The trip is worthwhile.
The structure of the composition：
The first part:
place
The second part:
The third part:
routes
feeling
We got our composition:
I like traveling very much. Beijing is one of the cities I have visited. My stay there is most comfortable. Last month my parents took me to Beijing.
On the first day, we went to the Great Wall, which is very long and old. I was proud of the wisdom and talent of ancient people. We felt very tired when climbing to the top of the Great Wall. But we wanted to prove the words that one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. We also went to the Palace Museum.
There were many antiques which made us know the great culture. The following days,we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, and Xiang Hill. The scenery of red maple leaves all over the hill was so spectalcular that I took many photos. Lastly, we tasted one of the most famous traditional foods, which is Beijing Roast Duck.
Later, I went back with my parents by train. The unique cultural tradition and the distinctive natural beauty of Beijing will be a wonderful memory of my life.
Write a composition by yourselves.
Now that we have known Beijing, next let’s enjoy another video.
A Lively City
Benxi
Among these cities, which one are you
familiar with very much?
Information:
The Guanmen Mountain 关门山
Benxi Water Cave 本溪水洞
The Five-Fairy Mountain 五女山
The Pingding Mountain 平顶山
The Peony (牡丹) in Benxi Zoo
wild vegetables
wine
mutton soup
blood sausage
hazelnuts
sour corn noodles
The requirements of the composition:
According to the information, write 60-80 words, not just translate Chinese. Pay attention to the handwriting.
on the first day
on the second day
the following day
later
then
last but not least/ lastly
in addition (to) / besides
What’s more./moreover/furthermore
clauses 从句
nonfinite verbs 非谓语动词
conjunctions 连词
The rules about assessing a composition:
1.The composition has a proper structure._______2 points
2. The routes are joined reasonably. ________ 2 points
3. The composition has long and excellent sentences. ______ 2 points
4. The composition has a conclusion. ________ 2 points
5. The handwriting is good. _____ 2 points
Final score:________
Homework:
Rewrite the composition.