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BOOK 8 Module 4 Which English
Writing
1)To review the structures of subjunctive mood in if-clause .
2)To use present unreal conditionals to express your ideas .
3)To practise writing about contrast.
Learning goals(学习目标):
Enjoy the song and pay attention to the if-clauses in it .
If Everyone Cared
If everyone cared
and nobody cried
If everyone loved
and nobody lied
If everyone shared
and swallowed their pride
We’d see the day
when nobody died
Who can tell the three forms of Subjunctive mood in “if” clauses?
Revision:
My bike was broken on my way to school.
If the bike 1.______(run) well, I 2.________(arrive) on time.
If I 3.____(have) money , I 4.________(buy) a new one.
If I 5._____(be) the teacher now, I 6._______(give) the student one more chance.
And if I 7._________(be) a scientist in the future ,
I 8._________(invent) a more convenient bike!
would have arrived
had
were
would give
were to be
would invent
would buy
had run
Revision: Fill in the blanks with subjunctive mood
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Let's practise the grammar in expressing our ideas.
“It would be much easier if everyone in the world
just spoke English.”
Do you agree? Why/ Why not?
Activity
It would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.
For Against
I’m for the idea, because ...
it would reduce misunderstandings among people. I’m against the idea, because ...
Requirement:
1.use subjunctive mood in if-clause
2. Two students write down the key words
Brainstorm
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Thinking :How to write a good contrast?
Match the transitions with their meanings
1 firstly (a) used to finish the text
2 Next,… (b) used to introduce your final idea
3 On the other hand… (c) used to add an extra idea
4 In conclusion (d) used to introduce your first idea
5 Furthermore,… (e) used to show a contrast idea
6 Finally/Lastly… (f) used to introduce your next idea
some transitions for organizing our reasons:
To list points
Firstly....Secondly....Thirdly.....
To make a contrasting point:
On one hand.....On the other hand....,
on the contrary/ in contrast......
To add more points to the same topic:
In addition/Besides, What's more/Moreover/Furthermore
To conclude:
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word
Ⅱ.Fill in the blanks with the phrases
second,third,on (the) one hand,what's worse,in a word,
on the other (hand) As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _________________,online shopping has many advantages.First,online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. ____________,it is much faster for us to do shopping.__________,we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. _________________,online shopping also has many disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.______________ we cannot see the things in detail. __________,despite the disadvantages of online shopping,I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.
On (the) one hand
_Second
Third
On the other hand_
What's worse
In a word
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The structure of a contrast composition
Introduction : Part1: State an opinion
Body part: Part2. Give some reasons for the topic.
Part3. Give some reasons against the topic.Conclusion: Part4. Draw a conclusion to show your idea.
Introduction:
We have had a discussion about whether we should ...
Opinions are divided on the question
Body: Many students think ....... ...
Others, however, hold the belief that ...
Conclusion:
As far as I am concerned, I support the view that...
In my opinion ...
Some expressions for the topic sentences of each paragraph
The Pattern of the Contrast Composition
There is a discussion on ________________.Opinions are divided on the question.
some students agreed, for they believe that
① For one thing, _______________ .
② For another thing, _____________.
③ Furthermore/Besides_______________.
However, others disagreed with the idea. They hold the view that
① First of all,_____________.
② Moreover, ______________.
③ Most important of all, _______.
In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned, ________________.
Who can fill in the pattern with the ideas shown on the blackboard?
Activity
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Practise writing the contrast
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由
1.可以交很多朋友 2.可自由表达思想 3.利于外语学习
反对的理由
1.浪费时间 2.影响学习 3.可能上当受骗
你的看法:…
参考词汇: 网络朋友 on-line friend(s)
上当受骗 get cheated
Requirement:
write your composition on a piece of paper
use some expressions of subjunctive mood in if-clauses
show your assessment
Cooperation
your task:
1 cooperate in groups to solve your confusion
2 finish your writing by yourself
3 exchange compositions with your partners
4 mark the composition of your partner
0/5
Assessment
1.The structure
including introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion. _________2'
2 . topic sentences . _________2'
3.proper transitions . _________2'
4 one or two expressions of subjunctive mood. ________2'
5. handwriting _________2'
Final score__________
5/10
Recently we had a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on line. Opinions are divided into two parts.
Some students are in favor of it. First of all, the internet helps them make many friends. In addition, chatting on line, students can express their opinions freely. Besides, if they made friends on line, it may be helpful to their foreign language studies.
However, the others are strongly against it. In the first place, they say making friends on line is a waste of time. What’s more, making friends on line may have a bad effect on their studies. Also, if they made friends on line, they might be cheated by someone.
Personally speaking, I support the idea bacause I think students should place their study, health and safety before other things.
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Make a summary
what have we got in this class?
the writing structure
Tip 1
transitions and expressions for opinions
Tip 2
the subjunctive mood in if-clause
Tip 3
Post-task
Homework
If students used the smart phone at school , it would bring benefit to our life.
Do you agree or disagree?Why?Why not?
Write a composition with the knowledge we have got in this class.
A Beautiful Poem to You
If you were a tear-drop; In my eye,
For fear of losing you, I would never cry
And if the golden sun, Should cease to shine its light,
Just one smile from you, would make my whole world bright
如果你是我眼里的一滴泪;为了不失去你;我将永不哭泣;如果金色的阳光;停止了它耀眼的光芒;你的一个微笑;将照亮我的整个世界。(cease [si:s] 停止, 终止, 结束)
If you were a teardrop in my eye
By Byron