外研版选修8 Module 5 The Conquest of the Universe Writing 课件（39张PPT）
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(共39张PPT)
writing
Proper use of advanced vocabulary and complicated sentence structures
(适当使用高级词汇和复杂句式结构)
有人用汉语翻译了一首英文诗 全世界都醉了
一首英文诗，多个版本的汉语翻译，哪个版本更能打动你的心呢？
英文原文
You say that you love rain,
but you open your umbrella when it rains...
You say that you love the sun,
but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines...
You say that you love the wind,
But you close your windows when wind blows...
This is why I am afraid;
You say that you love me too...
普通版
你说你喜欢雨，
但是下雨的时候你却撑开了伞；
你说你喜欢阳光，
但当阳光播撒的时候，
你却躲在阴凉之地；
你说你喜欢风，
但清风扑面的时候，
你却关上了窗户。
我害怕你对我也是如此之爱。
文艺版
你说烟雨微芒，兰亭远望；
后来轻揽婆娑，深遮霓裳。
你说春光烂漫，绿袖红香；
后来内掩西楼，静立卿旁。
你说软风轻拂，醉卧思量；
后来紧掩门窗，漫帐成殇。
你说情丝柔肠，如何相忘；
我却眼波微转，兀自成霜。
离骚版
君乐雨兮启伞枝，
君乐昼兮林蔽日，
君乐风兮栏帐起，
君乐吾兮吾心噬。
When translating English into Chinese, we need to think over and choose the best words and sentences to fully and exactly express its original meanings . The same is true when we translate Chinese sentences into English. If we can translate each sentence well, then the whole essay will be a good one. But that's not enough. We should make a better one in order to get a higher mark. So how?
Let's look at the following two compositions .
Which one do you like better?
Think over and give me your reasons.
From what you say ,we can conclude that a better composition should have more advanced vocabulary and sentence structures instead of simple ones. So are you eager to improve your vocabulary and sentence structures in your writing ?
Part1 .improve your vocabulary
1.Computers are very important in our daily life.
Computers are ______ ______ __________ in our daily life.
Computers ______ ______ ___________ ______ in our daily life.
of great importance
play an important
role
2. I'm writing to thank you for your help when I stayed in England with you.
I'm writing to ________ ________ _________ to you for your help _______ _____ ______ in England with you.
3. The products are very good and are very popular in China.
The products are _______ _______ _________ and ___________________in China.
express my appreciation
during my stay
of high quality
enjoy great popularity
4. You can find the library easily.
You will _______ ________ _________ finding the library.
5. All the participants should arrive at school before 8 .
All the participants _____ ____________________ _______arrive at school before 8.
have no difficulty
are supposed/expected/required
to
We use _______ to replace simple words and sentences.
tip 1.
phrases
Exercises:
1. I think I am fit for the position.
I think I am ___________ for the position.
I think I am __________ to the position.
2. As a volunteer,I am proud that I can do something for society.
As a volunteer,I am proud that I can ______ _______ ______ ____________ to society.
qualified
equal
make
a small contribution
3.He was so busy with his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so _________ in his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so __________ to his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so __________ to his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
absorbed
devoted
addicted
4.I am good at English,so I can talk with foreigners freely.
I _____ _____ _____ _________/__________of English,so I can __________________ with foreigners freely.
5. There are 56 students in our class.
Our class is ________ ______ of 56 students.
Our class is ___________ of 56 students.
Our class ___________ of 56 students.
have a good
knowledge
command
communicate with
made up
composed
consists
tip 2.
We use more advanced vocabulary to replace the less advanced vocabulary.
Part2.improve your sentences
1.定语从句的适当应用
An English speech contest is to be held by our school's English paper. Its theme is “Protect the environment”.
(两个简单句）
An English speech contest is to be held by our school's English paper，_______ _______ is “Protect the environment”
I am glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival .It falls on the fifth day of lunar May.
I am glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival , _________falls on the fifth day of lunar May.
（同上）
whose theme
which
（用定语从句将两个独立句子合为一个长句子）
2.名词性从句的适当使用
Participants are expected to talk about _____ _______ _____ _____ _____to protect the environment.(采取什么措施,主动句，做介词的宾语）
Participants are expected to talk about _____ _________
______ ______ ______to protect the environment.
(采取什么措施，被动句，做介词的宾语）
what measures
we should take
what measures
should be taken
3.非谓语动词的使用
1.We bicycled to the countryside to have a picnic,and we talked and laughed all the way.
We bicycled to the countryside to have a picnic,_______ ______ _______all the way .
(When )________ with difficulties,we should never give in easily.
2.When we are faced with difficulties,we should never give in easily.
talking and laughing
faced
3.If everything is taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.
__________ taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.
(独立主格结构代替条件状语从句）
4. As the Spring Festival is approaching, people have varieties of activities to celebrate it.
________ the Spring Festival ___________ , people have varieties of activitiesto celebrate it.
(with 复合结构代替简单句）
3.非谓语动词的使用
Everything
With
approaching
4.同位语和同位语从句的应用
1. Quyuan is a great poet in ancient China. He threw himself into the river when his country was beaten by its enemies.（两个简单句）
Quyuan, __________________________, threw himself into the river when his country was beaten by its enemies.（通过同位语，转化成一个长句）
2. Our team won the macth. We all felt excited at the news.
We all felt excited at the news ________ __________________.
a great poet in ancient China
that our
team won the match
5.倒装（全倒和部分倒装）的应用有时会让句子更突出重点或便于句子衔接，试比较：
1.In this way ,we can enjoy a meaningful and colorful life in college.
Only in this way can we enjoy a meaningful and colorful life in college.
Opposite the teaching building stands the school library, where students can read various books.
2.The school library stands opposite the teaching building. Students can read various books there.
（语气较强，运用倒装，丰富句式）
（语气一般，句子简单）
（运用倒装丰富句子结构，更利于定语从句的衔接,使文章更流畅）
（两个简单句，单一乏味）
6.被动语态的适当应用，尤其在在主语不明确或不必要时。
We will give one first prize,two second prizes and three third prizes for the winners. And we will announce the winners on the school's website.
(改为被动句）
One first prize, two second prizes and three third prizes will be given .And the winners will be announced on the school's website.
（改为被动句后语言更简洁，且突出重点）
Summary
升级句式
定语从句
名词性从句
非谓语动词（包括独立主格和with 复合结构）
倒装等特殊句式
被动语态
Consolidation
Try your best to translate the following sentences.
1.他突然意识到他把钥匙落在学校了。
He suddenly realised that he had left his keys at school.
It occurred to him that he had left his keys at home.
2.去年夏天，我在这样的饭店当过服务生.所以，我有工作经验，我能够胜任这份工作。
Last summer , I woked in such a restaurant as a waiter.So I have working experience . I can be fit/qualified for the job.
My working experience as a waiter in such a restaurant last summer enables me to be qualified for the position.
It struck/hit him that he had left his keys at school.
3.这就是雷锋，一个舍己为人的人。
This was Leifeng. He was a man who forgot himself and worked for others.
Such was Leifeng, a man who ignored himself and were devoted to serving others.
4.我写信邀请你担任下周日我校举行的英语演讲大赛的一个评委。
Next Sunday,our school will hold an English Speech Contest. I am writing to invite you to be one of the judges for it.
I am writing to invite you to serve as one of the judges for the English Speech Contest to be held next Sunday by our school.
I am writing to invite you to serve as one of the judges for the English Speech Contest ,which will be held next Sunday by our school.
5.期待早日答复，我将不胜感激。
I will be grateful/thankful if you can give me an early reply.
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.（固定句式）
An early reply will be highly appreciated.
(专业，简洁）
Summary
词汇升级
句式升级
We use phrases to replace simple words and sentence.
We use more advanced vocabulary to replace the less advanced vocabulary.
We use original and native words
定语从句
名词性从句
被动语态
非谓语动词（包括独立主格和with 复合结构）
倒装等特殊句式
在写作文时，我们要力求要选用高级词汇和复杂句式，体现我们对词汇及句式的掌握程度和我们的英语水平。但不能句句都那么做，否则，会显得太刻意，又让评卷老师反感。并且，在给定要点较多的情况下，我们要考虑到字数的要求。所以在该简洁明了的时候，我们就不要去追求长句子。
T i p s:
practice
假定你是李华。最近，你校打算举办一个以“传播传统文化（Keep Traditional Chinese Culture Alive)”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一则英文通知，刊登在你校英文报上。
征文对象：全校师生
稿件内容：1.有些传统文化正在流失；2.列举保护传统文化的措施；
稿件长度：约500词
奖项设置：一等奖1名，二等奖2名，三等奖3名；获奖名单将在校英文报上公布；
截止日期：2016年5月20日
交稿邮箱：85948250@qq.com
One possible version：
Notice
An essay contest is to be held by the school's English paper,whose theme is “Keep Traditional Chinese Culture Alive”.
All teachers and students are welcome to take part in the contest. Participants are expected to write about how the traditional culture is disappearing and what we should do to keep traditional Chinese culture alive. About 500 words would be fine.All entries should be submitted to 85948250 @qq.com before May20,2016. One first prizes ,two second prizes and three third prizs will be given and the winners will be announced in the school's English newspaper.
School's English newspaper
Homework
1.Review what we have learned ;
2. Finish and perfect your composition, and hand it in tomorrow;
Dare you take the challenge?
6月6日，习主席在第八轮中美战略与经济对话开幕式上，发表了重要讲话。你知道下面的句子用英语怎么翻译么？
1.中国宋代诗人辛弃疾有一句名句，叫作“青山遮不住，毕竟东流去。”
2.2000多年前，孔子就说：“人而无信，不知其可也。”
3. 一分耕耘，一分收获。三年耕耘，我们有了不少收获。
That's all . Thank you.
writing
Proper use of advanced vocabulary and complicated sentence structures
(适当使用高级词汇和复杂句式结构)
有人用汉语翻译了一首英文诗 全世界都醉了
一首英文诗，多个版本的汉语翻译，哪个版本更能打动你的心呢？
英文原文
You say that you love rain,
but you open your umbrella when it rains...
You say that you love the sun,
but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines...
You say that you love the wind,
But you close your windows when wind blows...
This is why I am afraid;
You say that you love me too...
普通版
你说你喜欢雨，
但是下雨的时候你却撑开了伞；
你说你喜欢阳光，
但当阳光播撒的时候，
你却躲在阴凉之地；
你说你喜欢风，
但清风扑面的时候，
你却关上了窗户。
我害怕你对我也是如此之爱。
文艺版
你说烟雨微芒，兰亭远望；
后来轻揽婆娑，深遮霓裳。
你说春光烂漫，绿袖红香；
后来内掩西楼，静立卿旁。
你说软风轻拂，醉卧思量；
后来紧掩门窗，漫帐成殇。
你说情丝柔肠，如何相忘；
我却眼波微转，兀自成霜。
离骚版
君乐雨兮启伞枝，
君乐昼兮林蔽日，
君乐风兮栏帐起，
君乐吾兮吾心噬。
When translating English into Chinese, we need to think over and choose the best words and sentences to fully and exactly express its original meanings . The same is true when we translate Chinese sentences into English. If we can translate each sentence well, then the whole essay will be a good one. But that's not enough. We should make a better one in order to get a higher mark. So how?
Let's look at the following two compositions .
Which one do you like better?
Think over and give me your reasons.
From what you say ,we can conclude that a better composition should have more advanced vocabulary and sentence structures instead of simple ones. So are you eager to improve your vocabulary and sentence structures in your writing ?
Part1 .improve your vocabulary
1.Computers are very important in our daily life.
Computers are ______ ______ __________ in our daily life.
Computers ______ ______ ___________ ______ in our daily life.
of great importance
play an important
role
2. I'm writing to thank you for your help when I stayed in England with you.
I'm writing to ________ ________ _________ to you for your help _______ _____ ______ in England with you.
3. The products are very good and are very popular in China.
The products are _______ _______ _________ and ___________________in China.
express my appreciation
during my stay
of high quality
enjoy great popularity
4. You can find the library easily.
You will _______ ________ _________ finding the library.
5. All the participants should arrive at school before 8 .
All the participants _____ ____________________ _______arrive at school before 8.
have no difficulty
are supposed/expected/required
to
We use _______ to replace simple words and sentences.
tip 1.
phrases
Exercises:
1. I think I am fit for the position.
I think I am ___________ for the position.
I think I am __________ to the position.
2. As a volunteer,I am proud that I can do something for society.
As a volunteer,I am proud that I can ______ _______ ______ ____________ to society.
qualified
equal
make
a small contribution
3.He was so busy with his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so _________ in his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so __________ to his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
He was so __________ to his work that he didn't notice what was happening around him.
absorbed
devoted
addicted
4.I am good at English,so I can talk with foreigners freely.
I _____ _____ _____ _________/__________of English,so I can __________________ with foreigners freely.
5. There are 56 students in our class.
Our class is ________ ______ of 56 students.
Our class is ___________ of 56 students.
Our class ___________ of 56 students.
have a good
knowledge
command
communicate with
made up
composed
consists
tip 2.
We use more advanced vocabulary to replace the less advanced vocabulary.
Part2.improve your sentences
1.定语从句的适当应用
An English speech contest is to be held by our school's English paper. Its theme is “Protect the environment”.
(两个简单句）
An English speech contest is to be held by our school's English paper，_______ _______ is “Protect the environment”
I am glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival .It falls on the fifth day of lunar May.
I am glad to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival , _________falls on the fifth day of lunar May.
（同上）
whose theme
which
（用定语从句将两个独立句子合为一个长句子）
2.名词性从句的适当使用
Participants are expected to talk about _____ _______ _____ _____ _____to protect the environment.(采取什么措施,主动句，做介词的宾语）
Participants are expected to talk about _____ _________
______ ______ ______to protect the environment.
(采取什么措施，被动句，做介词的宾语）
what measures
we should take
what measures
should be taken
3.非谓语动词的使用
1.We bicycled to the countryside to have a picnic,and we talked and laughed all the way.
We bicycled to the countryside to have a picnic,_______ ______ _______all the way .
(When )________ with difficulties,we should never give in easily.
2.When we are faced with difficulties,we should never give in easily.
talking and laughing
faced
3.If everything is taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.
__________ taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.
(独立主格结构代替条件状语从句）
4. As the Spring Festival is approaching, people have varieties of activities to celebrate it.
________ the Spring Festival ___________ , people have varieties of activitiesto celebrate it.
(with 复合结构代替简单句）
3.非谓语动词的使用
Everything
With
approaching
4.同位语和同位语从句的应用
1. Quyuan is a great poet in ancient China. He threw himself into the river when his country was beaten by its enemies.（两个简单句）
Quyuan, __________________________, threw himself into the river when his country was beaten by its enemies.（通过同位语，转化成一个长句）
2. Our team won the macth. We all felt excited at the news.
We all felt excited at the news ________ __________________.
a great poet in ancient China
that our
team won the match
5.倒装（全倒和部分倒装）的应用有时会让句子更突出重点或便于句子衔接，试比较：
1.In this way ,we can enjoy a meaningful and colorful life in college.
Only in this way can we enjoy a meaningful and colorful life in college.
Opposite the teaching building stands the school library, where students can read various books.
2.The school library stands opposite the teaching building. Students can read various books there.
（语气较强，运用倒装，丰富句式）
（语气一般，句子简单）
（运用倒装丰富句子结构，更利于定语从句的衔接,使文章更流畅）
（两个简单句，单一乏味）
6.被动语态的适当应用，尤其在在主语不明确或不必要时。
We will give one first prize,two second prizes and three third prizes for the winners. And we will announce the winners on the school's website.
(改为被动句）
One first prize, two second prizes and three third prizes will be given .And the winners will be announced on the school's website.
（改为被动句后语言更简洁，且突出重点）
Summary
升级句式
定语从句
名词性从句
非谓语动词（包括独立主格和with 复合结构）
倒装等特殊句式
被动语态
Consolidation
Try your best to translate the following sentences.
1.他突然意识到他把钥匙落在学校了。
He suddenly realised that he had left his keys at school.
It occurred to him that he had left his keys at home.
2.去年夏天，我在这样的饭店当过服务生.所以，我有工作经验，我能够胜任这份工作。
Last summer , I woked in such a restaurant as a waiter.So I have working experience . I can be fit/qualified for the job.
My working experience as a waiter in such a restaurant last summer enables me to be qualified for the position.
It struck/hit him that he had left his keys at school.
3.这就是雷锋，一个舍己为人的人。
This was Leifeng. He was a man who forgot himself and worked for others.
Such was Leifeng, a man who ignored himself and were devoted to serving others.
4.我写信邀请你担任下周日我校举行的英语演讲大赛的一个评委。
Next Sunday,our school will hold an English Speech Contest. I am writing to invite you to be one of the judges for it.
I am writing to invite you to serve as one of the judges for the English Speech Contest to be held next Sunday by our school.
I am writing to invite you to serve as one of the judges for the English Speech Contest ,which will be held next Sunday by our school.
5.期待早日答复，我将不胜感激。
I will be grateful/thankful if you can give me an early reply.
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.（固定句式）
An early reply will be highly appreciated.
(专业，简洁）
Summary
词汇升级
句式升级
We use phrases to replace simple words and sentence.
We use more advanced vocabulary to replace the less advanced vocabulary.
We use original and native words
定语从句
名词性从句
被动语态
非谓语动词（包括独立主格和with 复合结构）
倒装等特殊句式
在写作文时，我们要力求要选用高级词汇和复杂句式，体现我们对词汇及句式的掌握程度和我们的英语水平。但不能句句都那么做，否则，会显得太刻意，又让评卷老师反感。并且，在给定要点较多的情况下，我们要考虑到字数的要求。所以在该简洁明了的时候，我们就不要去追求长句子。
T i p s:
practice
假定你是李华。最近，你校打算举办一个以“传播传统文化（Keep Traditional Chinese Culture Alive)”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一则英文通知，刊登在你校英文报上。
征文对象：全校师生
稿件内容：1.有些传统文化正在流失；2.列举保护传统文化的措施；
稿件长度：约500词
奖项设置：一等奖1名，二等奖2名，三等奖3名；获奖名单将在校英文报上公布；
截止日期：2016年5月20日
交稿邮箱：85948250@qq.com
One possible version：
Notice
An essay contest is to be held by the school's English paper,whose theme is “Keep Traditional Chinese Culture Alive”.
All teachers and students are welcome to take part in the contest. Participants are expected to write about how the traditional culture is disappearing and what we should do to keep traditional Chinese culture alive. About 500 words would be fine.All entries should be submitted to 85948250 @qq.com before May20,2016. One first prizes ,two second prizes and three third prizs will be given and the winners will be announced in the school's English newspaper.
School's English newspaper
Homework
1.Review what we have learned ;
2. Finish and perfect your composition, and hand it in tomorrow;
Dare you take the challenge?
6月6日，习主席在第八轮中美战略与经济对话开幕式上，发表了重要讲话。你知道下面的句子用英语怎么翻译么？
1.中国宋代诗人辛弃疾有一句名句，叫作“青山遮不住，毕竟东流去。”
2.2000多年前，孔子就说：“人而无信，不知其可也。”
3. 一分耕耘，一分收获。三年耕耘，我们有了不少收获。
That's all . Thank you.