外研版选修8 Module 7 Revision Writing 课件（26张PPT）
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(共26张PPT)
English writing
（1）Do you like writing ?Why?
（2）How many marks can you get in your daily exam?
Which composition is more attractive, why?
21
7
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
影响给分的因素之二：
文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
good
2. think
3.clever
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
in one's opinion/view
hold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
wise bright smart intelligent cute
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition
1.表递进
２.表转折
３.表因果
４.表目的
５.表归纳
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
because,since,therefore,so,thus,consequently， as a result,on account of...
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,
in a word,on the whole...
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇120词左右的短文并说明你的观点。
６５％的学生认为 ３５％的学生认为
１．应该春游 １．不应该春游
２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 ２．高考临近，没有心情玩
３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 ３．春游耽误学习
How to write a good compostion?
1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。
2. 围绕要点，写出句子。
3. 添加过度，确保连贯。
4. 先求正确，再求灵活。
5. 认真眷写，卷面整洁。
Can you list the outline of the writing?
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Conclusion paragraph: …
Introduction paragraph: …
Point 2…
Body
Point 1…
supporting idea 1
supporting idea 2
supporting idea 1
supporting idea 2
Key words:
1.introduction(topic):
高三学生（senior 3 students）
春游(go spring outing）
讨论（discussion）
2.body(supporting ideas):
接触自然（be close to nature）
呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）
精神放松（relax themselves ）
大脑休息（rest their brains ）
高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）
没心情玩（don’t feel like going ）
耽误学习(waste the time)
3.conclusion:
in my opinion…
主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性
How will you start your passage?
问句： … …
Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Pay special attention to the transition sentences(过渡句）:
Opinions are divided on the question.
What will you say？
Your answer？
The body part
Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）
Sentence pattern:
Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that...
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康
Sentence pattern:
They think it good to do sth……
In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth……
Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接）
递进
what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermore
Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）
注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）
Sentence pattern:
However, others prefer to…
Some others have just the opposite opinion…..
On the other hand….
Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.
Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
Sentence pattern:
They say/believe/hold the opinion that….
Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
Reason 2:春游耽误学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接）
Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
Conclusion: 总结，进一步亮明自己的观点，前后呼应。
Eg: As far as I’m concerned,we can go spring outing if we deal with our problems properly.
Show time
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.
On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
As far as I’m concerned,we can go spring outing if we deal with our problems properly.
Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that
On the other hand, about 35% students are
against the idea.
what’s more,
Besides
Homework:
Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.
Thank you!
English writing
（1）Do you like writing ?Why?
（2）How many marks can you get in your daily exam?
Which composition is more attractive, why?
21
7
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
影响给分的因素之二：
文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
good
2. think
3.clever
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
in one's opinion/view
hold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
wise bright smart intelligent cute
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition
1.表递进
２.表转折
３.表因果
４.表目的
５.表归纳
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
because,since,therefore,so,thus,consequently， as a result,on account of...
in order that,so that,for the purpose of...
in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,
in a word,on the whole...
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇120词左右的短文并说明你的观点。
６５％的学生认为 ３５％的学生认为
１．应该春游 １．不应该春游
２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 ２．高考临近，没有心情玩
３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 ３．春游耽误学习
How to write a good compostion?
1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。
2. 围绕要点，写出句子。
3. 添加过度，确保连贯。
4. 先求正确，再求灵活。
5. 认真眷写，卷面整洁。
Can you list the outline of the writing?
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Conclusion paragraph: …
Introduction paragraph: …
Point 2…
Body
Point 1…
supporting idea 1
supporting idea 2
supporting idea 1
supporting idea 2
Key words:
1.introduction(topic):
高三学生（senior 3 students）
春游(go spring outing）
讨论（discussion）
2.body(supporting ideas):
接触自然（be close to nature）
呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）
精神放松（relax themselves ）
大脑休息（rest their brains ）
高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）
没心情玩（don’t feel like going ）
耽误学习(waste the time)
3.conclusion:
in my opinion…
主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性
How will you start your passage?
问句： … …
Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Pay special attention to the transition sentences(过渡句）:
Opinions are divided on the question.
What will you say？
Your answer？
The body part
Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）
Sentence pattern:
Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that...
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康
Sentence pattern:
They think it good to do sth……
In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth……
Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接）
递进
what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermore
Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）
注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）
Sentence pattern:
However, others prefer to…
Some others have just the opposite opinion…..
On the other hand….
Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.
Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
Sentence pattern:
They say/believe/hold the opinion that….
Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
Reason 2:春游耽误学习
（注意：两个观点之间的连接）
Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies
Conclusion: 总结，进一步亮明自己的观点，前后呼应。
Eg: As far as I’m concerned,we can go spring outing if we deal with our problems properly.
Show time
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.
On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
As far as I’m concerned,we can go spring outing if we deal with our problems properly.
Opinions are divided on the question.
Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that
On the other hand, about 35% students are
against the idea.
what’s more,
Besides
Homework:
Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.
Thank you!