2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件76(共18张PPT)
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(共18张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路解读之议论文写作模板定位策略
表达微技能之同义词组替换
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：
主题：
结构：
Para 3
Para 2
Para 5
Para 1
Para 4
议论文
people wear different colors
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
You might think that whether you choose a blue shirt or a yellow one to wear to work or college makes no difference to your day and those around you. However, an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
The power of color has been used for centuries and we should be making the most of it in our lives. Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize. It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Some people even believe that the blind can benefit from the ‘vibrations’ (震动) that color gives off.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. For example, purple is seen as creative and mixes well with red, to show that a company has ideas and the power to make them happen. Orange and blue are also recommended colors for companies to use, because orange is the color of communication and blue suggests safety and security. So this could be a particularly good combination. Companies have found certain colors ‘speak’ to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their products, for example, as it is vibrant and more youthful than colors like gold and navy, which older customers seem to prefer.
Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so it is important to consider this when deciding what to wear in the morning. If you want people to take you seriously, then wearing navy blue or black is good. Blue would also be helpful for an interview or oral examination because it relaxes you and makes you feel calm. Red gets you noticed by everyone and makes you, the wearer, feel energetic, but be careful, as it can raise your pulse rate and not everyone wants this effect.
So think carefully before you leave the house. The colors you choose are a wonderful tool. Are you making the right impression-on yourself and on others?
②
④
③
①
分论点1
总论点
分论点3
分论点2
⑤
总结及建议
Para. 1: You might think that whether you choose a blue shirt or a yellow one to wear to work or college makes no difference to your day and those around you. However, an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
写作思路解读
总论点：人们所选择的颜色会影响我们的心情、职业前景甚至健康。（要点1）
Para.2: The power of color has been used for centuries and we should be making the most of it in our lives. Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize. It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Some people even believe that the blind can benefit from the ‘vibrations’ (震动) that color gives off.
写作思路解读
分论点①：色彩在医学上的应用。（要点2）
Para. 3: Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. For example, purple is seen as creative and mixes well with red, to show that a company has ideas and the power to make them happen. Orange and blue are also recommended colors for companies to use, because orange is the color of communication and blue suggests safety and security. So this could be a particularly good combination. Companies have found certain colors ‘speak’ to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their products, for example, as it is vibrant and more youthful than colors like gold and navy, which older customers seem to prefer.
写作思路解读
分论点②：色彩在市场营销上的应用。（要点3）
Para. 4: Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so it is important to consider this when deciding what to wear in the morning. If you want people to take you seriously, then wearing navy blue or black is good. Blue would also be helpful for an interview or oral examination because it relaxes you and makes you feel calm. Red gets you noticed by everyone and makes you, the wearer, feel energetic, but be careful, as it can raise your pulse rate and not everyone wants this effect.
写作思路解读
分论点③：色彩在人际交往中的应用。（要点4）
具体事例，舍弃
Para. 5: So think carefully before you leave the house. The colors you choose are a wonderful tool. Are you making the right impression-on yourself and on others?
写作思路解读
总结或建议：呼吁人们出门前仔细检查自己的穿衣颜色。（要点5）
因为第四、五段要点重复，所以要点4，要点5合并：Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，便得到了这样一段概要：
An increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health. Color affects us greatly and is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Some colors have certain meanings and ‘speak’ to specific age groups. Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression. (102w)
写作思路解读
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，有多处表达抄袭原文，此外，有些表达过于冗长，又缺乏连贯性，那么如何进行改写，让文章更简洁精炼呢？
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
掌握同义词互换或词性互换可以在概要写作中自如地用自己的话概括文意，再也不用担心自己的表达变成“摘抄原文”。
1. An increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
① More experts think that the colors we choose have an effect on our mood, career prospects and even our health.
② More experts advocate that the colors we choose influence our mood, career prospects and even health.
③ As more experts claim, colors have an impact on our emotions, careers prospects and health.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
The power of color have been used for centuries and is greater than most of us realize. It is increasingly used by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
① The power of color, long used in our lives, can be greater than expected, which is increasingly used to affect our state of mind and treat illness.
② Widely used in mental and physical treatment, color is of great power than expected.
③ The power of color has been long used and psychologists and therapists are making full use of color to affect mood in life and medical treatment.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
3. Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Some colors have certain meanings and ‘speak’ to specific age groups.
① Companies also make full use of colors to push us customers to buy more.
② Companies employ color to encourage sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it attracts.
③ Companies employ color to promote sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it appeals to.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
4. Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression.
① As wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others respond to you, deciding what to wear is of great importance in making the right impression.
② As wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear is of great significance in making the right impression.
③ As wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ response to us, deciding what to wear is significant in making the right impression.
④ Since wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear matters in making the right impression.
⑤ Because wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear really counts in making the right impression.
一、运用同义词或改变词性来改写句子，使改写后的句子与原句句意保持不变。
1. The scientists think his invention is very important to cure the patients of deadly disease.
The scientists think his invention ____________________________ __________________________to cure the patients of deadly disease.
2. The temple is of great importance to the study of the Buddhism of that period.
The temple is _____________________________________________ _________________to the study of the Buddhism of that period.
3. How did the students react to the monitor’s suggestion?
① How did the students____________ the monitor’s suggestion?
② What was the students’ ______________ the monitor’s suggestion?
5.牛刀小试
is of great importance/significance
is greatly significant
respond to
reaction/ response
/is greatly significant
is very important/ is of great significance/
4. Your opinion will not affect my decision.
Your opinion will not ____________________________________ ____________________________________my decision.
5. Her speech made a profound impact on everyone.
Her speech ____________________________________ everyone.
6. It sounds reasonable that if people around you are happy, that might have an impact on your own happiness.
It __________ that if people around you are happy, that might _____________________________________ your own happiness.
7. Some computer games encourage violent behavior in young children.
Some computer games ____ violent behavior in young children.
5.牛刀小试
influence / have an influence on
profoundly affected/ profoundly influenced
makes sense
affect/ influence/ have an effect / influence on
fuel
have an effect on / have an impact on
8. Music and lighting are used to encourage shoppers to buy more.
① Music and lighting are used to _____________ shoppers to buy more.
② Music and lighting are used to _________________ sales.
9. Success?will?stimulate?the people?for?fresh?efforts.
Success?will?__________________?the people?for?fresh?efforts.
10. The blind can benefit from the color ‘vibrations’(震动).
The color ‘vibrations’ _________________________________ ______________________________the blind.
5.牛刀小试
push/ persuade
encourage/ foster/ promote
encourage/ promote
is beneficial to/ is of great benefit to
does good to / is good for
参考范文欣赏1
More experts consider the colors we wear significant due to their effects on our mood, career prospects and even our health. (要点1) Having been used for centuries, the power of color is greater than expected and psychologists and therapists use it increasingly to influence mood and state of mind. (要点2) Companies try to mix certain colors to push customers to buy more, from which they can gain more profits. (要点3) It is essential to take what color to wear into consideration since colors can make a difference to your feelings and others’ reactions to you. (要点4)
参考范文欣赏2
As more experts claim, colors have an impact on our emotions, careers prospects and health. (要点1) Their power, long used in our lives, can be greater than expected. They’re increasingly used to influence our state of mind and treat illness. (要点2) Also, companies employ color to promote sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it attracts. (要3) As colors of clothes can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear matters in making the right impression. (要点4)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路解读之议论文写作模板定位策略
表达微技能之同义词组替换
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：
主题：
结构：
Para 3
Para 2
Para 5
Para 1
Para 4
议论文
people wear different colors
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
You might think that whether you choose a blue shirt or a yellow one to wear to work or college makes no difference to your day and those around you. However, an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
The power of color has been used for centuries and we should be making the most of it in our lives. Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize. It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Some people even believe that the blind can benefit from the ‘vibrations’ (震动) that color gives off.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. For example, purple is seen as creative and mixes well with red, to show that a company has ideas and the power to make them happen. Orange and blue are also recommended colors for companies to use, because orange is the color of communication and blue suggests safety and security. So this could be a particularly good combination. Companies have found certain colors ‘speak’ to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their products, for example, as it is vibrant and more youthful than colors like gold and navy, which older customers seem to prefer.
Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so it is important to consider this when deciding what to wear in the morning. If you want people to take you seriously, then wearing navy blue or black is good. Blue would also be helpful for an interview or oral examination because it relaxes you and makes you feel calm. Red gets you noticed by everyone and makes you, the wearer, feel energetic, but be careful, as it can raise your pulse rate and not everyone wants this effect.
So think carefully before you leave the house. The colors you choose are a wonderful tool. Are you making the right impression-on yourself and on others?
②
④
③
①
分论点1
总论点
分论点3
分论点2
⑤
总结及建议
Para. 1: You might think that whether you choose a blue shirt or a yellow one to wear to work or college makes no difference to your day and those around you. However, an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
写作思路解读
总论点：人们所选择的颜色会影响我们的心情、职业前景甚至健康。（要点1）
Para.2: The power of color has been used for centuries and we should be making the most of it in our lives. Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize. It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Some people even believe that the blind can benefit from the ‘vibrations’ (震动) that color gives off.
写作思路解读
分论点①：色彩在医学上的应用。（要点2）
Para. 3: Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. For example, purple is seen as creative and mixes well with red, to show that a company has ideas and the power to make them happen. Orange and blue are also recommended colors for companies to use, because orange is the color of communication and blue suggests safety and security. So this could be a particularly good combination. Companies have found certain colors ‘speak’ to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their products, for example, as it is vibrant and more youthful than colors like gold and navy, which older customers seem to prefer.
写作思路解读
分论点②：色彩在市场营销上的应用。（要点3）
Para. 4: Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so it is important to consider this when deciding what to wear in the morning. If you want people to take you seriously, then wearing navy blue or black is good. Blue would also be helpful for an interview or oral examination because it relaxes you and makes you feel calm. Red gets you noticed by everyone and makes you, the wearer, feel energetic, but be careful, as it can raise your pulse rate and not everyone wants this effect.
写作思路解读
分论点③：色彩在人际交往中的应用。（要点4）
具体事例，舍弃
Para. 5: So think carefully before you leave the house. The colors you choose are a wonderful tool. Are you making the right impression-on yourself and on others?
写作思路解读
总结或建议：呼吁人们出门前仔细检查自己的穿衣颜色。（要点5）
因为第四、五段要点重复，所以要点4，要点5合并：Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，便得到了这样一段概要：
An increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health. Color affects us greatly and is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill. Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Some colors have certain meanings and ‘speak’ to specific age groups. Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression. (102w)
写作思路解读
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，有多处表达抄袭原文，此外，有些表达过于冗长，又缺乏连贯性，那么如何进行改写，让文章更简洁精炼呢？
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
掌握同义词互换或词性互换可以在概要写作中自如地用自己的话概括文意，再也不用担心自己的表达变成“摘抄原文”。
1. An increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our mood, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.
① More experts think that the colors we choose have an effect on our mood, career prospects and even our health.
② More experts advocate that the colors we choose influence our mood, career prospects and even health.
③ As more experts claim, colors have an impact on our emotions, careers prospects and health.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
The power of color have been used for centuries and is greater than most of us realize. It is increasingly used by psychologists and therapists for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
① The power of color, long used in our lives, can be greater than expected, which is increasingly used to affect our state of mind and treat illness.
② Widely used in mental and physical treatment, color is of great power than expected.
③ The power of color has been long used and psychologists and therapists are making full use of color to affect mood in life and medical treatment.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
3. Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Some colors have certain meanings and ‘speak’ to specific age groups.
① Companies also make full use of colors to push us customers to buy more.
② Companies employ color to encourage sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it attracts.
③ Companies employ color to promote sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it appeals to.
3.表达微技能之同义词组替换
4. Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so deciding what to wear is important in making the right impression.
① As wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others respond to you, deciding what to wear is of great importance in making the right impression.
② As wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear is of great significance in making the right impression.
③ As wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ response to us, deciding what to wear is significant in making the right impression.
④ Since wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear matters in making the right impression.
⑤ Because wearing different colors can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear really counts in making the right impression.
一、运用同义词或改变词性来改写句子，使改写后的句子与原句句意保持不变。
1. The scientists think his invention is very important to cure the patients of deadly disease.
The scientists think his invention ____________________________ __________________________to cure the patients of deadly disease.
2. The temple is of great importance to the study of the Buddhism of that period.
The temple is _____________________________________________ _________________to the study of the Buddhism of that period.
3. How did the students react to the monitor’s suggestion?
① How did the students____________ the monitor’s suggestion?
② What was the students’ ______________ the monitor’s suggestion?
5.牛刀小试
is of great importance/significance
is greatly significant
respond to
reaction/ response
/is greatly significant
is very important/ is of great significance/
4. Your opinion will not affect my decision.
Your opinion will not ____________________________________ ____________________________________my decision.
5. Her speech made a profound impact on everyone.
Her speech ____________________________________ everyone.
6. It sounds reasonable that if people around you are happy, that might have an impact on your own happiness.
It __________ that if people around you are happy, that might _____________________________________ your own happiness.
7. Some computer games encourage violent behavior in young children.
Some computer games ____ violent behavior in young children.
5.牛刀小试
influence / have an influence on
profoundly affected/ profoundly influenced
makes sense
affect/ influence/ have an effect / influence on
fuel
have an effect on / have an impact on
8. Music and lighting are used to encourage shoppers to buy more.
① Music and lighting are used to _____________ shoppers to buy more.
② Music and lighting are used to _________________ sales.
9. Success?will?stimulate?the people?for?fresh?efforts.
Success?will?__________________?the people?for?fresh?efforts.
10. The blind can benefit from the color ‘vibrations’(震动).
The color ‘vibrations’ _________________________________ ______________________________the blind.
5.牛刀小试
push/ persuade
encourage/ foster/ promote
encourage/ promote
is beneficial to/ is of great benefit to
does good to / is good for
参考范文欣赏1
More experts consider the colors we wear significant due to their effects on our mood, career prospects and even our health. (要点1) Having been used for centuries, the power of color is greater than expected and psychologists and therapists use it increasingly to influence mood and state of mind. (要点2) Companies try to mix certain colors to push customers to buy more, from which they can gain more profits. (要点3) It is essential to take what color to wear into consideration since colors can make a difference to your feelings and others’ reactions to you. (要点4)
参考范文欣赏2
As more experts claim, colors have an impact on our emotions, careers prospects and health. (要点1) Their power, long used in our lives, can be greater than expected. They’re increasingly used to influence our state of mind and treat illness. (要点2) Also, companies employ color to promote sales, considering the image it conveys and age groups it attracts. (要3) As colors of clothes can affect feelings and others’ reaction to us, deciding what to wear matters in making the right impression. (要点4)