2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件81(共25张PPT)
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(共25张PPT)
Going Home
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读
A story
how
where
when
why
who
what
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
Vingo
Wife
Three boys and three girls
Husband
Strangers
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读(When)
1. When the young people boarded the bus, they noticed Vingo;
上车后，他们注意到主人公Vingo
晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其中一女孩想与他交谈，却并未得到回应。
2. Deep into the night，one of the girls started to talk with him but failed.
3. The next morning, Vingo told his story at the young people’s insistence.
第二天，在年轻人们的坚持下，Vingo与他们坐在一起并谈起了自己的故事
Interpretation of the Text文本解读(How)
Vingo’s love for his wife
if the kids kept asking questions, and if it hurt her too much, she could just forget me. I’d understand. Get a new guy, I said. She’s a wonderful woman. (para 7)
eyes fixed upon on a photo, completely in silence; became silent again; slowly and painfully, he began his story (para 1)
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读 (G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it.
Given
Information
1. “Well, when I was in prison I wrote to my wife,” She’s a wonderful woman.(Para.7)
2. We used to live in Brunswick, and there’s a big oak（橡树） tree just as you come into town. If she didn’t want me, forget it -- no handkerchief and I’d go on through.” (Para.9)
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree.
3. We used to live in Brunswick, and there’s a big oak（橡树） tree just as you come into town. I told her that if she didn’t have a new man and if she’d take me back, she should put a yellow handkerchief on the tree, and I’d get off and come home. If she didn’t want me, forget it -- no handkerchief and I’d go on through.” (Para.3)
Given
Information
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What’s the young people’s reaction towards the photo?
② How did Vingo comment on his wife?
③ How did the young people and Vingo feel when the bus gradually approached the tree?
④ What was his wife’s choice? Was there a yellow handkerchief on the tree?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it.
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree.
① If the handkerchief is there, what’s the young people’s reaction?
② What about Vingo? How did he feel when he saw the yellow handkerchief?
③ What did Vingo do then? Did he go home finally?
④ How did the young people feel at last?
2. Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：
Vingo，photo，the young people，sat，home，married，wife，Brunswick，oak tree，handkerchief
Characters
Places
Objects
Actions
Vingo, the young people, wife
home, Brunswick
photo, oak tree, handkerchief
sat, married
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读
Vingo
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
Wife and kids
Look at the photos
Nervous
oak tree
Stare at
handkerchief
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇
读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”。所谓“内容的丰富性”，就是要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情等。
After a while, slowly and painfully, he began his story.
(para.3)
I. 词的积累
形容词：nervous, uneasy, tense, excited
名词：tension, nerves, anxiety
动词：tighten one’s face, tremble, shake, stress out
我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强画面的叙述感，使得文章血肉丰满，厚实动人。平时注重积累相关的词汇、句子的积累。
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇
II. 句的积累
1. Tension slowly creeps upon him.
His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
3. A flood of tension welled up in him. / Tension flooded over him.
4. His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
He shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
6. He tightened his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment.
7. His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled.
He felt so nervous that he felt his throat tightened.
9. He felt so nervous that he couldn’t move an inch.
10. Scared and nervous, she was frozen to the spot.
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换
1. 随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick, Vingo内心紧张不已。
① As the bus got closer and closer to Brunswick, _____________________________________________________.(运用so…that…句型)
② With the bus getting closer and closer to Brunswick, _____________________________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
Vingo’s heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated
Vingo shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles
1. 随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick, Vingo内心紧张不已。
③ With Brunswick approaching, _________________________________________________________________.(运用as if的非虚拟用法)
④ ______________________, Vingo tightened his face, ________________________________________. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
Vingo tightened his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment
As Brunswick approaches
as if protecting himself against another disappointment
2. 看到橡树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。
① (On) Seeing the oak tree full of yellow handkerchiefs, ______________________________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
② ______________________________ at the oak trees which was filled with yellow handkerchiefs.
they all jumped up from their seats, dancing and screaming with joy
Their eyes shone/beamed with joy
3. 他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。
He was about to respond____________________________________. (运用be about to…when…句型)
when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating
4. 当他们仍旧气喘吁吁，心跳飞快时，突然意识到刚刚所发生的事都是真实的。
① ___________________________________________________, they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
② _______________________________________________, they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true. (运用独立主格结构)
As they were still out of breath and their heart beat wildly
As they were still out of breath, their heart beating wildly
5. 他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。
He reached up to grab her hand, __________________________________________. (运用only to do作结果状语)
only to find her freezing fingers, sweating and trembling
6. 紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。
____________________, I stared at Dad and tried to seek a solution for the trouble from him. (运用伴随状语)
____________________, I stared at Dad, _____________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
Nervous and frightened
Nervous and frightened
trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him
7. 为了避免我的马伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马绳。
Instinctively, _____________, ___________________ in order to stop the horse from hurting the little rabbit. (运用非谓语动词)
I yelled out loud pulling back the reins hard
8. 一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中迷了路，我打了个寒颤。
① The thought _________________________________________ sent shivers down my spine.(运用同位语从句)
② _________________________________________________, I shuddered in the cold.(运用句型“一…就…”)
③ I shivered inwardly _______________________________________. (运用短语“一想起…”)
that we might have got lost in such darkness
The moment I realized that we might have got lost in such darkness
at the thought of our/us getting lost in such darkness
9. 感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。
① __________________________________, Dad tried to make me laugh. (运用非谓语动词)
② Dad tried to make me laugh ___________________________________. (运用时间状语从句)
Sensing my stress and fear of the unknown
10. Rigo感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使自己不要慌张。
Rigo was a little nervous, ___________________________________, but he forced himself not to panic. (运用连动句句型)
slowering his head and couldn’t help trembling
when he sensed my stress and fear of the unknown
Possible version 1
Para.1:
Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it. “What a lovely woman and cute kids.” “Yeah, she is a smart woman who can always make our small house warm and comfortable.” Vingo murmured. With Brunswick approaching, Vingo stopped staring at the photo, tightening his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment. The young people took over window seats, waiting for the coming of the oak tree. Then Brunswick was ten miles, and then five. All the people opened their eyes wide, waiting for a miracle. Suddenly, they all jumped up from their seats, screaming except Vingo.
Possible version 1
Para.2:
Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree. It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs, twenty or thirty of them, maybe hundreds, flying in the wind. The oak tree stood like a banner of welcome, blowing in the wind. All the young people were up out of their seats, shouting, crying, doing small dances or shaking fists in triumph. As the young people remained thrilled, Vingo slowly rose from his seat, holding himself tightly, and made his way to the front of the bus to go home.
评点：在车越来越靠近家的过程中，Vingo的紧张情绪是逐步加深的。从他停止看照片(stopped staring at the photo)，开始绷紧脸(tightening his face)，怕自己又一次失望的动作(as if protecting himself against another disappointment)及情绪描写中，很快就能给人一种画面感，Vingo内心的忐忑不安和期盼回家的心情不言而喻。此处又为下文满树的黄手帕的出现做好了铺垫，从紧张不安到安心雀跃，两种情绪形成鲜明的对比，推动了情节的发展。而年轻人们睁大眼睛，看着窗外，期盼能看到奇迹，此处是从侧面进一步烘托了人物紧张的情感，也对故事的发展起到了推波助澜的作用，使人更期待看到树上挂着黄手帕。第二段结尾处，当Vingo看到了满树的黄手帕时，他缓慢地从座位起身，这时他的紧张带有一种想要飞奔回家又害怕回家的紧张，hold himself tightly把他的这种心情形容地恰到好处。
Going Home
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读
A story
how
where
when
why
who
what
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
Vingo
Wife
Three boys and three girls
Husband
Strangers
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读(When)
1. When the young people boarded the bus, they noticed Vingo;
上车后，他们注意到主人公Vingo
晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其中一女孩想与他交谈，却并未得到回应。
2. Deep into the night，one of the girls started to talk with him but failed.
3. The next morning, Vingo told his story at the young people’s insistence.
第二天，在年轻人们的坚持下，Vingo与他们坐在一起并谈起了自己的故事
Interpretation of the Text文本解读(How)
Vingo’s love for his wife
if the kids kept asking questions, and if it hurt her too much, she could just forget me. I’d understand. Get a new guy, I said. She’s a wonderful woman. (para 7)
eyes fixed upon on a photo, completely in silence; became silent again; slowly and painfully, he began his story (para 1)
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读 (G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it.
Given
Information
1. “Well, when I was in prison I wrote to my wife,” She’s a wonderful woman.(Para.7)
2. We used to live in Brunswick, and there’s a big oak（橡树） tree just as you come into town. If she didn’t want me, forget it -- no handkerchief and I’d go on through.” (Para.9)
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree.
3. We used to live in Brunswick, and there’s a big oak（橡树） tree just as you come into town. I told her that if she didn’t have a new man and if she’d take me back, she should put a yellow handkerchief on the tree, and I’d get off and come home. If she didn’t want me, forget it -- no handkerchief and I’d go on through.” (Para.3)
Given
Information
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What’s the young people’s reaction towards the photo?
② How did Vingo comment on his wife?
③ How did the young people and Vingo feel when the bus gradually approached the tree?
④ What was his wife’s choice? Was there a yellow handkerchief on the tree?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it.
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree.
① If the handkerchief is there, what’s the young people’s reaction?
② What about Vingo? How did he feel when he saw the yellow handkerchief?
③ What did Vingo do then? Did he go home finally?
④ How did the young people feel at last?
2. Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：
Vingo，photo，the young people，sat，home，married，wife，Brunswick，oak tree，handkerchief
Characters
Places
Objects
Actions
Vingo, the young people, wife
home, Brunswick
photo, oak tree, handkerchief
sat, married
Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读
Vingo
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
Wife and kids
Look at the photos
Nervous
oak tree
Stare at
handkerchief
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇
读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”。所谓“内容的丰富性”，就是要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情等。
After a while, slowly and painfully, he began his story.
(para.3)
I. 词的积累
形容词：nervous, uneasy, tense, excited
名词：tension, nerves, anxiety
动词：tighten one’s face, tremble, shake, stress out
我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强画面的叙述感，使得文章血肉丰满，厚实动人。平时注重积累相关的词汇、句子的积累。
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇
II. 句的积累
1. Tension slowly creeps upon him.
His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
3. A flood of tension welled up in him. / Tension flooded over him.
4. His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
He shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
6. He tightened his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment.
7. His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled.
He felt so nervous that he felt his throat tightened.
9. He felt so nervous that he couldn’t move an inch.
10. Scared and nervous, she was frozen to the spot.
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换
1. 随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick, Vingo内心紧张不已。
① As the bus got closer and closer to Brunswick, _____________________________________________________.(运用so…that…句型)
② With the bus getting closer and closer to Brunswick, _____________________________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
Vingo’s heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated
Vingo shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles
1. 随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick, Vingo内心紧张不已。
③ With Brunswick approaching, _________________________________________________________________.(运用as if的非虚拟用法)
④ ______________________, Vingo tightened his face, ________________________________________. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
Vingo tightened his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment
As Brunswick approaches
as if protecting himself against another disappointment
2. 看到橡树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。
① (On) Seeing the oak tree full of yellow handkerchiefs, ______________________________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
② ______________________________ at the oak trees which was filled with yellow handkerchiefs.
they all jumped up from their seats, dancing and screaming with joy
Their eyes shone/beamed with joy
3. 他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。
He was about to respond____________________________________. (运用be about to…when…句型)
when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating
4. 当他们仍旧气喘吁吁，心跳飞快时，突然意识到刚刚所发生的事都是真实的。
① ___________________________________________________, they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
② _______________________________________________, they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true. (运用独立主格结构)
As they were still out of breath and their heart beat wildly
As they were still out of breath, their heart beating wildly
5. 他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。
He reached up to grab her hand, __________________________________________. (运用only to do作结果状语)
only to find her freezing fingers, sweating and trembling
6. 紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。
____________________, I stared at Dad and tried to seek a solution for the trouble from him. (运用伴随状语)
____________________, I stared at Dad, _____________________________________. (运用非谓语动词)
Nervous and frightened
Nervous and frightened
trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him
7. 为了避免我的马伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马绳。
Instinctively, _____________, ___________________ in order to stop the horse from hurting the little rabbit. (运用非谓语动词)
I yelled out loud pulling back the reins hard
8. 一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中迷了路，我打了个寒颤。
① The thought _________________________________________ sent shivers down my spine.(运用同位语从句)
② _________________________________________________, I shuddered in the cold.(运用句型“一…就…”)
③ I shivered inwardly _______________________________________. (运用短语“一想起…”)
that we might have got lost in such darkness
The moment I realized that we might have got lost in such darkness
at the thought of our/us getting lost in such darkness
9. 感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。
① __________________________________, Dad tried to make me laugh. (运用非谓语动词)
② Dad tried to make me laugh ___________________________________. (运用时间状语从句)
Sensing my stress and fear of the unknown
10. Rigo感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使自己不要慌张。
Rigo was a little nervous, ___________________________________, but he forced himself not to panic. (运用连动句句型)
slowering his head and couldn’t help trembling
when he sensed my stress and fear of the unknown
Possible version 1
Para.1:
Looking at the photo, the young people found a young woman and three children in it. “What a lovely woman and cute kids.” “Yeah, she is a smart woman who can always make our small house warm and comfortable.” Vingo murmured. With Brunswick approaching, Vingo stopped staring at the photo, tightening his face, as if protecting himself against another disappointment. The young people took over window seats, waiting for the coming of the oak tree. Then Brunswick was ten miles, and then five. All the people opened their eyes wide, waiting for a miracle. Suddenly, they all jumped up from their seats, screaming except Vingo.
Possible version 1
Para.2:
Vingo sat there amazed, staring at the oak tree. It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs, twenty or thirty of them, maybe hundreds, flying in the wind. The oak tree stood like a banner of welcome, blowing in the wind. All the young people were up out of their seats, shouting, crying, doing small dances or shaking fists in triumph. As the young people remained thrilled, Vingo slowly rose from his seat, holding himself tightly, and made his way to the front of the bus to go home.
评点：在车越来越靠近家的过程中，Vingo的紧张情绪是逐步加深的。从他停止看照片(stopped staring at the photo)，开始绷紧脸(tightening his face)，怕自己又一次失望的动作(as if protecting himself against another disappointment)及情绪描写中，很快就能给人一种画面感，Vingo内心的忐忑不安和期盼回家的心情不言而喻。此处又为下文满树的黄手帕的出现做好了铺垫，从紧张不安到安心雀跃，两种情绪形成鲜明的对比，推动了情节的发展。而年轻人们睁大眼睛，看着窗外，期盼能看到奇迹，此处是从侧面进一步烘托了人物紧张的情感，也对故事的发展起到了推波助澜的作用，使人更期待看到树上挂着黄手帕。第二段结尾处，当Vingo看到了满树的黄手帕时，他缓慢地从座位起身，这时他的紧张带有一种想要飞奔回家又害怕回家的紧张，hold himself tightly把他的这种心情形容地恰到好处。