2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件88(共32张PPT)
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The Last Delivery
Interpretation of the text 文本解读
A story
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of the text 文本解读 (Who)
Strangers
Interpretation of the text 文本解读(When)
1. After purchasing everything they wanted, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it off at their home. (Para. 2)
2. …and finally he settled for $15. (Para. 3)
3. They reached their home and an hour passed, two hours passed…(Para. 4)
Interpretation of the text文本解读(How)
一对有钱的夫妇为了举办新年晚会去超市置办了很多昂贵的物品，然后让一位年老多病的搬运工以廉价的劳动力帮他们运到家里，因搬运工迟迟未送到而以貌取人怀疑搬运工的人品，最后从另一名搬运工那里了解真相后感到十分羞愧。
故事情节
情感线：
文中的年老多病的搬运工生活窘迫，即使充当最廉价的劳动力吃了亏也愿意帮助有钱的夫妇搬运新年货物。有钱的夫妇购买新年货物时挥金如土，而面对廉价的搬运费时还要讨价还价，非但没有同情心，而且还因为占了老人的便宜而沾沾自喜。最后结合所给的续写的两段首句可以发现，这对有钱的夫妇对老人的态度的前后反差较大，从沾沾自喜，埋怨愤怒到羞愧感动的过程。
Interpretation of the title 标题解读 (G-N策略）
1. 这位年老的搬运工因为身体原因而无法承担得起这次搬运任务而叫他的工友帮他完成最后一次搬运，表现出了老人的强烈的责任心；
2. 这对有钱的夫妇受老人的品质感动，而帮他解决了经济上的困难作为回报，让老人结束了这种超负荷的体力活，启发我们善良的品质能够感染他人。
...
market, purchasing, porter, delivering, $15, earn, address, trust,
angry, disappeared
porter
market; address
Interpretation of the underlined words 划线词解读
purchasing; delivering; earn; disappeared
$15
trust; angry
Character
Places
Actions
Things
Feelings
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.”
Given
Information
His clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able to meet his daily needs. (Para. 2)
They stopped him to inquire about the old porter but then noticed that he was carrying their stuff in his cart! (Para. 6)
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What was the new porter’s reaction when hearing the angry wife’s words?
② Where was the old porter?
③ What happened to the old porter?
④ Why did the old porter ask the new porter to help deliver the goods?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.”
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
The porter who came was of an old age, not very healthy looking.（Para.2)
The couple was very happy thinking about how well they had bargained with the poor porter…（Para.4)
Given
Information
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What did the husband say to his wife?
② How did the wife react to her husband’s words?
③ What a life lesson did the wife learn?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
glaring at her resentfully,
retorted...
was about to add
more contemptuous
comments
was struck dead with shame
Idea 1:
A rich
couple
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
regretted,
embarrassed，
apologized,
to visit...
Baffled,
responded at once,
smiled and continued his delivering in the sun
Idea 2:
The porter
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之动作、语言描写：安慰的肢体动作和语言篇
我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强叙述的画面感和内容的厚实感。已知文本侧重描写人物的动作和神态描写，使得文章充满可读性。在续写中我们要延续这种写作风格，聚焦人物的外在动作和内心情感的变化。为了更好地提高表达能力，我们可以从已知文本和课外素材中积累各种好的词汇和表达，通过训练不同的句型，达到表达多样化和内容丰富化的效果。
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之动作、语言描写：安慰的肢体动作和语言篇
I.词汇的积累：
名词： complaint
动词： throw, mind, argue, bargain, settle for, struggle, trust,
inquire, file, stop
形容词：rich, fixed, mere, single, poor, happy, angry
副词：still, always, immediately
II. 词块和句的积累：
1. throw a party, be of high cost, fixed price, purchase, drop...off,
healthy, looking, torn, meet one’s daily needs, quote, bargain with,
settle for, be struggling to do..., get angry at sb., feed oneself,
inquire, file a complaint against sb.
2. They wanted to maintain their high living standards so they
didn't mind paying a lot for it.
3. His clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able
to meet his daily needs.
4. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter, and
finally he settled for $15.
5. The porter was struggling to make money for every single
meal, so he needed anything he could earn.
6. The couple was very happy thinking about how well they had
bargained with the poor porter, paid him $15 in advance and left
after giving the porter their address for delivery.
7. I am sure that, instead of delivering it to our home, he must
have disappeared with everything.
III. 课外拓展
Emotional languages: “Surprise ” or “ Embarrassment”
1. Adjectives`
She stood besides her chair, surprised and embarrassed.
她站在椅子旁边，又是惊讶又是尴尬。
So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, feeling the blood rushing to her face.
她是如此的尴尬以至于她笨拙地站在那里，感到血液都冲到了脸上。
III. 课外拓展
Emotional languages: “Surprise ” or “ Embarrassment”
2. Body language:
She froze, her mouth hanging open.
她呆住了，嘴巴张开着。
She cupped her face with her hands, scratched her head, breathed and breathed until she felt calm.
她用手托着脸，挠挠头，不停地呼吸，直到感到平静下来。
She lowered a bit of her body, hesitated for a moment, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.
她微微低下身子，犹豫了一会儿，在想如何去掩饰内心的尴尬。
3. Facial expressions
She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.
她张大着嘴巴，同时瞪着眼睛，脸顿时变红。
Suddenly, she leapt up, embarrassment written in her red face.
突然，她跳了起来，涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。
4. Other indirect descriptions
All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world was watching her.
所有的空气似乎都消失了，她觉得整个世界好像都在注视着她。
She was struck dead with embarrassment, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.
她尴尬得要死，心脏在剧烈地跳动着，撞击着她的肋骨。
2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。
① The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用并列句结构)
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换
又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。
① The old ______________________________ go any further in this heat of the noon.
(运用..too...to...句型))
② ___________________, the old porter couldn’t go any further in this heat of the noon.
(运用形容词作主语补足语)
Tired and hungry
too tired and hungry to
and she felt the blood rushing to her face
② The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用现在分词作状语)
③ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用介词with的复合结构)
④ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用独立主格结构)
feeling the blood rushing to her face
the blood rushing to her face
with the blood rushing to her face
老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。
① ________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用…so...that...结构)
②
________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用So...that放句首的倒装句型)
③
_____________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用强调谓语动词句型)
The honesty of the old porter did strike the wife a great deal
So honest was the old porter that the wife was struck a great deal
The old porter was so honest that the wife was struck a great deal
④ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用独立主格结构)
the blood rushing to her face
4. 那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。
① ________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“only+状语”放句首的倒装句句型)
② __________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“Not until”放句首的倒装句句型)
③
_____________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“It was not until...that...”的强调句型)
Not until then did she realize
Only then did she realize
It was not until then that she realized
Possible version 1
Para.1
The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.” She was about to add more contemptuous comments on the old porter when she suddenly noticed that the man was glaring at her resentfully. “Madam, please calm down. Jack is not a thief! ” retorted the porter, “He is actually terribly sick and isn’t able to earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Just now, on the way to deliver your stuff, he was too weak to go any further in this heat of the noon. Despite falling down, he never forgot his promise and handed me $15, keeping telling me to deliver it as fast as possible”
Possible version 1
Para.2
Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife. “He was hungry, he was poor, but he was truly an honest man,” the husband admitted with trembling voice. At that, the wife was struck dead with shame, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs. How could she be angry with such a kind and responsible man? Like a child who made a mistake, she had no courage to look into her husband’s eyes. Through all these unexpected things, it eventually dawned on her that honesty has no class and she should respect everyone regardless of their financial and social status.
Possible version 1
评点：妻子的傲慢与年轻工友的义愤填膺，丈夫的热泪盈眶与妻子的满脸窘迫，这些细节的描写，都使人物的鲜明的性格跃然纸上。 “contemptuous”, “resentfully”, “retort”, “struck dead with shame”等与情感有关的高级词汇的使用，使文章变得有血有肉，读起来津津有味。最后，妻子的幡然悔悟对文章进行了一个主题上的升华，通过人物的改变给故事画上了圆满的句号。
Possible version 2
Para.1
The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.” Baffled, the porter responded at once, “ You mean Jack? He is not a thief ! He is the best guy I’ve ever known.” However, the wife sneered, “ You must be his accomplice, or our stuff couldn’t have ended in your cart.” The porter, his face flushing with irritation, retorted, “We are not thieves. We earn our living in an honest way! Actually Jack had a car accident after he set off with your shopping. Though badly injured, he anxiously called me up and handed me $15 to help him deliver it for you.”
Possible version 2
Para.2
Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife. “ Honey, we did misunderstand such an honest man. We owe him a sincere apology,” regretted the husband, seeking for his wife’s advice. But then came a dead silence for a while. The wife stood there embarrassed, the blood rushing to her face. Never did she realize such a poor man should be so honest and responsible. With quivering voice, the wife politely apologized and then decided to visit Jack at once. Gazing after the rich couple until they vanished from his sight, the porter smiled and continued his delivering in the sun. Amazingly, he didn’t feel unbearably hot any longer.
Possible version 2
评点：妻子不但怀疑老人是小偷，还怀疑他的工友是同谋，将故事的矛盾激化到了极致，使文章充满了张力。结尾处妻子一改之前傲慢嚣张的脾气，诚挚地道歉，并决定去看望老人。工友看着夫妻两人离去，微微一笑，似乎炎热的天气也变得没有那么热，这些描写使文章变得节奏缓慢，却又触动人心。总之，张弛有度，节奏把握得很好。另外， “baffled”, “sneer”, “flush with irritation”, “regret”, “quivering voice”, “gaze after”等与情感有关的动作神态的描写，使文章充满画面感，增强了故事的感染力，使人物形象栩栩如生。
The Last Delivery
Interpretation of the text 文本解读
A story
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of the text 文本解读 (Who)
Strangers
Interpretation of the text 文本解读(When)
1. After purchasing everything they wanted, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it off at their home. (Para. 2)
2. …and finally he settled for $15. (Para. 3)
3. They reached their home and an hour passed, two hours passed…(Para. 4)
Interpretation of the text文本解读(How)
一对有钱的夫妇为了举办新年晚会去超市置办了很多昂贵的物品，然后让一位年老多病的搬运工以廉价的劳动力帮他们运到家里，因搬运工迟迟未送到而以貌取人怀疑搬运工的人品，最后从另一名搬运工那里了解真相后感到十分羞愧。
故事情节
情感线：
文中的年老多病的搬运工生活窘迫，即使充当最廉价的劳动力吃了亏也愿意帮助有钱的夫妇搬运新年货物。有钱的夫妇购买新年货物时挥金如土，而面对廉价的搬运费时还要讨价还价，非但没有同情心，而且还因为占了老人的便宜而沾沾自喜。最后结合所给的续写的两段首句可以发现，这对有钱的夫妇对老人的态度的前后反差较大，从沾沾自喜，埋怨愤怒到羞愧感动的过程。
Interpretation of the title 标题解读 (G-N策略）
1. 这位年老的搬运工因为身体原因而无法承担得起这次搬运任务而叫他的工友帮他完成最后一次搬运，表现出了老人的强烈的责任心；
2. 这对有钱的夫妇受老人的品质感动，而帮他解决了经济上的困难作为回报，让老人结束了这种超负荷的体力活，启发我们善良的品质能够感染他人。
...
market, purchasing, porter, delivering, $15, earn, address, trust,
angry, disappeared
porter
market; address
Interpretation of the underlined words 划线词解读
purchasing; delivering; earn; disappeared
$15
trust; angry
Character
Places
Actions
Things
Feelings
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.”
Given
Information
His clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able to meet his daily needs. (Para. 2)
They stopped him to inquire about the old porter but then noticed that he was carrying their stuff in his cart! (Para. 6)
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What was the new porter’s reaction when hearing the angry wife’s words?
② Where was the old porter?
③ What happened to the old porter?
④ Why did the old porter ask the new porter to help deliver the goods?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.”
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
The porter who came was of an old age, not very healthy looking.（Para.2)
The couple was very happy thinking about how well they had bargained with the poor porter…（Para.4)
Given
Information
Interpretation of the first sentences of the two continued
paragraphs 续写首句解读（G-N策略）
New Information
① What did the husband say to his wife?
② How did the wife react to her husband’s words?
③ What a life lesson did the wife learn?
1. Interpretation of given information首句解读：
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
glaring at her resentfully,
retorted...
was about to add
more contemptuous
comments
was struck dead with shame
Idea 1:
A rich
couple
A rich couple
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
regretted,
embarrassed，
apologized,
to visit...
Baffled,
responded at once,
smiled and continued his delivering in the sun
Idea 2:
The porter
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之动作、语言描写：安慰的肢体动作和语言篇
我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强叙述的画面感和内容的厚实感。已知文本侧重描写人物的动作和神态描写，使得文章充满可读性。在续写中我们要延续这种写作风格，聚焦人物的外在动作和内心情感的变化。为了更好地提高表达能力，我们可以从已知文本和课外素材中积累各种好的词汇和表达，通过训练不同的句型，达到表达多样化和内容丰富化的效果。
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：
之动作、语言描写：安慰的肢体动作和语言篇
I.词汇的积累：
名词： complaint
动词： throw, mind, argue, bargain, settle for, struggle, trust,
inquire, file, stop
形容词：rich, fixed, mere, single, poor, happy, angry
副词：still, always, immediately
II. 词块和句的积累：
1. throw a party, be of high cost, fixed price, purchase, drop...off,
healthy, looking, torn, meet one’s daily needs, quote, bargain with,
settle for, be struggling to do..., get angry at sb., feed oneself,
inquire, file a complaint against sb.
2. They wanted to maintain their high living standards so they
didn't mind paying a lot for it.
3. His clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able
to meet his daily needs.
4. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter, and
finally he settled for $15.
5. The porter was struggling to make money for every single
meal, so he needed anything he could earn.
6. The couple was very happy thinking about how well they had
bargained with the poor porter, paid him $15 in advance and left
after giving the porter their address for delivery.
7. I am sure that, instead of delivering it to our home, he must
have disappeared with everything.
III. 课外拓展
Emotional languages: “Surprise ” or “ Embarrassment”
1. Adjectives`
She stood besides her chair, surprised and embarrassed.
她站在椅子旁边，又是惊讶又是尴尬。
So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, feeling the blood rushing to her face.
她是如此的尴尬以至于她笨拙地站在那里，感到血液都冲到了脸上。
III. 课外拓展
Emotional languages: “Surprise ” or “ Embarrassment”
2. Body language:
She froze, her mouth hanging open.
她呆住了，嘴巴张开着。
She cupped her face with her hands, scratched her head, breathed and breathed until she felt calm.
她用手托着脸，挠挠头，不停地呼吸，直到感到平静下来。
She lowered a bit of her body, hesitated for a moment, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.
她微微低下身子，犹豫了一会儿，在想如何去掩饰内心的尴尬。
3. Facial expressions
She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.
她张大着嘴巴，同时瞪着眼睛，脸顿时变红。
Suddenly, she leapt up, embarrassment written in her red face.
突然，她跳了起来，涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。
4. Other indirect descriptions
All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world was watching her.
所有的空气似乎都消失了，她觉得整个世界好像都在注视着她。
She was struck dead with embarrassment, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.
她尴尬得要死，心脏在剧烈地跳动着，撞击着她的肋骨。
2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。
① The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用并列句结构)
Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换
又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。
① The old ______________________________ go any further in this heat of the noon.
(运用..too...to...句型))
② ___________________, the old porter couldn’t go any further in this heat of the noon.
(运用形容词作主语补足语)
Tired and hungry
too tired and hungry to
and she felt the blood rushing to her face
② The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用现在分词作状语)
③ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用介词with的复合结构)
④ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用独立主格结构)
feeling the blood rushing to her face
the blood rushing to her face
with the blood rushing to her face
老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。
① ________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用…so...that...结构)
②
________________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用So...that放句首的倒装句型)
③
_____________________________________________, guilt written in her red face.
(运用强调谓语动词句型)
The honesty of the old porter did strike the wife a great deal
So honest was the old porter that the wife was struck a great deal
The old porter was so honest that the wife was struck a great deal
④ The wife stood there with embarrassment, ________________________________________.
(运用独立主格结构)
the blood rushing to her face
4. 那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。
① ________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“only+状语”放句首的倒装句句型)
② __________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“Not until”放句首的倒装句句型)
③
_____________________________ that we can’t judge a book by its cover.
(运用“It was not until...that...”的强调句型)
Not until then did she realize
Only then did she realize
It was not until then that she realized
Possible version 1
Para.1
The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.” She was about to add more contemptuous comments on the old porter when she suddenly noticed that the man was glaring at her resentfully. “Madam, please calm down. Jack is not a thief! ” retorted the porter, “He is actually terribly sick and isn’t able to earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Just now, on the way to deliver your stuff, he was too weak to go any further in this heat of the noon. Despite falling down, he never forgot his promise and handed me $15, keeping telling me to deliver it as fast as possible”
Possible version 1
Para.2
Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife. “He was hungry, he was poor, but he was truly an honest man,” the husband admitted with trembling voice. At that, the wife was struck dead with shame, heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs. How could she be angry with such a kind and responsible man? Like a child who made a mistake, she had no courage to look into her husband’s eyes. Through all these unexpected things, it eventually dawned on her that honesty has no class and she should respect everyone regardless of their financial and social status.
Possible version 1
评点：妻子的傲慢与年轻工友的义愤填膺，丈夫的热泪盈眶与妻子的满脸窘迫，这些细节的描写，都使人物的鲜明的性格跃然纸上。 “contemptuous”, “resentfully”, “retort”, “struck dead with shame”等与情感有关的高级词汇的使用，使文章变得有血有肉，读起来津津有味。最后，妻子的幡然悔悟对文章进行了一个主题上的升华，通过人物的改变给故事画上了圆满的句号。
Possible version 2
Para.1
The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our stuff.” Baffled, the porter responded at once, “ You mean Jack? He is not a thief ! He is the best guy I’ve ever known.” However, the wife sneered, “ You must be his accomplice, or our stuff couldn’t have ended in your cart.” The porter, his face flushing with irritation, retorted, “We are not thieves. We earn our living in an honest way! Actually Jack had a car accident after he set off with your shopping. Though badly injured, he anxiously called me up and handed me $15 to help him deliver it for you.”
Possible version 2
Para.2
Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife. “ Honey, we did misunderstand such an honest man. We owe him a sincere apology,” regretted the husband, seeking for his wife’s advice. But then came a dead silence for a while. The wife stood there embarrassed, the blood rushing to her face. Never did she realize such a poor man should be so honest and responsible. With quivering voice, the wife politely apologized and then decided to visit Jack at once. Gazing after the rich couple until they vanished from his sight, the porter smiled and continued his delivering in the sun. Amazingly, he didn’t feel unbearably hot any longer.
Possible version 2
评点：妻子不但怀疑老人是小偷，还怀疑他的工友是同谋，将故事的矛盾激化到了极致，使文章充满了张力。结尾处妻子一改之前傲慢嚣张的脾气，诚挚地道歉，并决定去看望老人。工友看着夫妻两人离去，微微一笑，似乎炎热的天气也变得没有那么热，这些描写使文章变得节奏缓慢，却又触动人心。总之，张弛有度，节奏把握得很好。另外， “baffled”, “sneer”, “flush with irritation”, “regret”, “quivering voice”, “gaze after”等与情感有关的动作神态的描写，使文章充满画面感，增强了故事的感染力，使人物形象栩栩如生。