2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件95(共15张PPT)

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Completing the story
读后续写之阅读与构思
What story can you think of in Chinese literature(中国文学)when we mention butterflies?
Read for main idea
Who are mentioned in the story?
What is the story mainly about?
Q1: What did the woman do to save the man?

Q2: Why did the man and the doctor fall in love?
(Para.2) … The woman guarded him by the bed in daytime calling his name nonstop and at night, she would go to the church and pray to God until her tears ran out.
(Para.6) It was said that the pretty female doctor took care of him and that finally they fell in sweet love.
Read for plots
(Para.4) … The woman did a deal with God that she would be a butterfly for three years.
Discuss
What is the possible ending of the story?
Could the woman and the man’s love continue?
If so, how would the story develop?
If not, how would the story develop?
Read the given sentences
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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Infer and brainstorm by raising questions
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The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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Para. 1
Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off?
What would be the man’s reaction(反应)?
How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction?
What else could the butterfly do?
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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Para. 2
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What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why?
If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do?
What is the possible ending of the story?
Read the underlined key words
love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.__________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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Para. 1
love the man the church tears God regret helplessly the butterfly sweet heartbroken
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__
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Para. 2
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________
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God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.__________________
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Para.1
Why did the butterfly rest on the man’s shoulder on and off?
What would be the man’s reaction(反应)?
How did the butterfly feel at the man’s reaction?
What else could the butterfly do?
Underlined key words: the butterfly, the man, tears, heartbroken, helplessly,…
Para. 2
What would be the butterfly’s answer? Why?
If she regretted, what would she/God say and do? If she didn’t regret, what would she/God say and do?
What is the possible ending of the story?
Underlined key words:
the butterfly, God, regret, love, ….
Design your plot
Homework
Complete your story and make a self-assessment
Paragraph 1
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man’s shoulder off and on.___________________________ __________________________________________
Paragraph 2
God also felt sad and asked the butterfly whether she regretted for what she had done.______________
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Self-assessment自评表
content Is your plot reasonable or logical?
language Is the language accurate and rich?
Is the tense correct?
Possible answer:
The butterfly could do nothing but rest on the man's shoulder off and on. Time flew and finally the day came when the deal between God and the butterfly was coming to an end. Coincidentally, the man was holding a magnificent wedding with his beloved. The church was crowded with their guests. The butterfly flew into it quietly and rested on the shoulder of the minister(牧师), listening to the man's
oath(誓言) to the bride and witnessing him put a ring on her finger with a sweet smile. The butterfly couldn't help shedding(流出) her tears sadly.
God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” Wiping away her tears on the face, the butterfly replied, “Absolutely not. It's far better to know he can live happily at some corner of the world, even if his bride is not me.” God was a bit
relieved and uttered(说), “What do you intend to do after becoming human again?” “For the last time, I'd like to enjoy the sunrise on the top of the mountain.” she replied, “There I'll let go of my memories about him and start my brand-new life journey on my own.”