2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件68(共17张PPT)
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(共17张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之策略
表达微技能之抽象名词作主语篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： news reader
结构：
Para 1&2
Para 4&5
Para 3
Para 6
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Technology is forever changing the way we get our news.?Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media, such as newspapers, television or radio. An increasing number of people also report turning to social media for information.
Now, there is?a new technology?that could greatly change the way we get the news: computer-created news readers. Recently, China launched what it called?the world’s first artificial intelligence, or Al news presenters.
The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen.?One is able to present newscasts?in English; the other, in Mandarin?Chinese. Report said machine learning was used to examine video images and sounds of the two newsmen. Similar technology has been used to create video products known as “deepfake videos”. A deep fake is a video that looks real, but was electronically changed. Such videos can make people appear to say things they never said.
It’s said that the Al presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day” on its website and on social media. One of the presenters even promised to “work tirelessly” to keep people informed. Some machine learning experts said the system showed off China's latest progress in voice recognition, text-to-speech technology and data analysis.
Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers.?Some people argued?that only low-level jobs requiring heavy labor will be easily replaced by robots.?Others praised?the technology as a way for companies to make money from low-cost labor machines.?Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
Britain’s BBC?recently released a video that used machine learning to make it look like one of its news readers speaking different languages. The London-based company that developed the system says its goal is to “remove the language barrier” for many different kinds of video across the Internet. Also,?Amazon’s working on Alexa smart speaker system to create a special news reader voice. Amazon is reportedly preparing to launch Alexa’s news reader voice in the near future.
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④
③
①
⑤
system
phenomenon
prospect
opinions
⑥
写作思路解读
Para. 1:?Technology is forever changing the way we get our news.?Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media, such as newspapers, television or radio. An increasing number of people also report turning to social media for information.
Para. 2: Now, there is?a new technology?that could greatly change the way we get the news: computer- created news readers. Recently, China launched what it called?the world’s first artificial intelligence, or AI news presenters.
文章主题：news reader成为人们新的获取信息的方式。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen.?One is able to present newscasts?in English; the other, in Mandarin?Chinese. Report said machine learning was used to examine video images and sounds of the two newsmen. Similar technology has been used to create video products known as “deepfake videos”. A deepfake is a video that looks real, but was electronically changed. Such videos can make people appear to say things they never said.
主题的补充信息：news reader的工作机制。（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 4: It’s said that the AI presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day” on its website and on social media. One of the presenters even promised to “work tirelessly” to keep people informed. Some machine learning experts said the system showed off China’s latest progress in voice recognition, text-to-speech technology and data analysis.
评价：news reader的好处。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers.?Some people argued?that only low-level jobs requiring heavy labor will be easily replaced by robots.?Others praised?the technology as a way for companies to make money from low-cost labor machines.?Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
评价：对于news reader的担心（要点4）
写作思路解读
Para. 6:?Britain’s BBC?recently released a video that used machine learning to make it look like one of its news readers speaking different languages. The London-based company that developed the system says its goal is to “remove the language barrier” for many different kinds of video across the internet. Also,?Amazon’s working on Alexa smart speaker system to create a special news reader voice. Amazon is reportedly preparing to launch Alexa’s news reader voice in the near future.
附加信息：举例说明人们对于这新技术的进一步行动（要点5）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media. The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen. AI presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day”. Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers. Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
评点：该概要尽管覆盖了文章的全部要点，对文本的要点也作了一些整合，但存在以下问题：字数超过80字；有多处表达抄袭原文；要点的整合不够到位，导致表达过于冗长；没有组织好要点之间的逻辑关系，导致文章缺乏连贯性。这些与概要写作的评分标准要求相差甚远。
3.表达微技能之抽象名词主语
1
2
大纲出现词汇1
ability, abortion, abuse, acceptance, access, acknowledge/ recognition, acquaintance, admission, advance, agreement, analysis, apology, appreciation, assistance, attempt, attention, balance, barrier, belief, birth, bite, bond, boom, boost, campaign, care, challenge, change, collection, combination, commitment, command/knowledge, concentration, concern, contribution, delay
大纲出现词汇2
delivery, demand, devotion, dislike, division, effort, evolution/progress, expectation, failure, fear, growth, hope, influence, involvement, motivation, objection, opposition, participation, performance, preference, preparation, progress, promotion, recovery, reference, rise, search, shortage, spread, struggle, success, thirst, understanding, visit, waste, worry
写作思路解读
我们在概要写作中如果能关注那些有动词意义的抽象名词，用它们作主语、表语、宾语等，可以替代从句、动宾词组，使句子变得简练。
1. It will be a serious problem if we don't solve the serious problem of pollution.
— Failure to solve the problem of pollution will be a disaster.
2. If the books can't be delivered in time, it will disturb our teaching schedule.
— Any delay in the delivery of books will disturb your schedule.
3. If we learn the English language well, we will have more chances to be admitted into the top universities.
— A good knowledge/command of English means easier access to top universities.
4. He lacks experience, so he is at a disadvantage compared to others employees.
— A lack of experience puts him at a disadvantage compared to other employees.
5. If you compare two ways of life carefully, you will find the former is superior to the latter.
— Careful comparison of two ways of life will show the superiority of the former over the latter.
一、运用抽象名词作主语策略，使改写后的句子与原句句意保持不变。
1. If you are able to work out the solution, you are more likely to be admitted into the club.
— The ________ to work out the solution will more likely admitted into the club.
— The ________ to solve the problem will make your _________ into the club possible.
5.牛刀小试
ability
ability
admission
If they abuse the power, they will end up in prison.
— The ________ of power will put them in prison.
abuse
4. We firmly believe that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
— We hold the _______ that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
— We are firm _______ that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
3. After they analyzed the whole matter, the eventually found out the truth.
— The _______ of the whole matter help them find out the truth eventually.
— The _______ of the whole matter led to the truth being found out.
5.牛刀小试
analysis
analysis
belief
believers
5. If we combine a balanced diet with proper exercise, we’ll be healthy, wealthy and wise.
— A balanced diet ________ with proper exercise will keep people healthy, wealthy and wise.
— A__________ of a balanced diet and proper exercise will keep people healthy, wealthy and wise.
5.牛刀小试
combined
combination
参考范文欣赏1
As China’s AI news presenters appear, the new technology will greatly change the way we obtain information. That’s because machine learning technology has been applied to broadcast news programmes without a break and make “deepfake videos”, which displays China’s latest advance in AI. Some worry that it may cause unemployment while others hold positive attitudes. Lately, Britain's BBC, along with America’s Amazon, also develops similar products by using machine learning. (70w)
参考范文欣赏2
Technology has been updating our source of information.?Now, another technology, AI news-reader, has become a hit?which?uses the voices of two great Chinese newsmen, broadcasting both in English and Chinese.?Though?some people worry about its influence on employment,?there are several advantages. It can work non-stop,?so?some regard it as a way of making money and do?further research. Many companies, including BBC and Amazon, are trying to produce better learning machine. (75w)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之策略
表达微技能之抽象名词作主语篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： news reader
结构：
Para 1&2
Para 4&5
Para 3
Para 6
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Technology is forever changing the way we get our news.?Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media, such as newspapers, television or radio. An increasing number of people also report turning to social media for information.
Now, there is?a new technology?that could greatly change the way we get the news: computer-created news readers. Recently, China launched what it called?the world’s first artificial intelligence, or Al news presenters.
The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen.?One is able to present newscasts?in English; the other, in Mandarin?Chinese. Report said machine learning was used to examine video images and sounds of the two newsmen. Similar technology has been used to create video products known as “deepfake videos”. A deep fake is a video that looks real, but was electronically changed. Such videos can make people appear to say things they never said.
It’s said that the Al presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day” on its website and on social media. One of the presenters even promised to “work tirelessly” to keep people informed. Some machine learning experts said the system showed off China's latest progress in voice recognition, text-to-speech technology and data analysis.
Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers.?Some people argued?that only low-level jobs requiring heavy labor will be easily replaced by robots.?Others praised?the technology as a way for companies to make money from low-cost labor machines.?Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
Britain’s BBC?recently released a video that used machine learning to make it look like one of its news readers speaking different languages. The London-based company that developed the system says its goal is to “remove the language barrier” for many different kinds of video across the Internet. Also,?Amazon’s working on Alexa smart speaker system to create a special news reader voice. Amazon is reportedly preparing to launch Alexa’s news reader voice in the near future.
②
④
③
①
⑤
system
phenomenon
prospect
opinions
⑥
写作思路解读
Para. 1:?Technology is forever changing the way we get our news.?Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media, such as newspapers, television or radio. An increasing number of people also report turning to social media for information.
Para. 2: Now, there is?a new technology?that could greatly change the way we get the news: computer- created news readers. Recently, China launched what it called?the world’s first artificial intelligence, or AI news presenters.
文章主题：news reader成为人们新的获取信息的方式。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen.?One is able to present newscasts?in English; the other, in Mandarin?Chinese. Report said machine learning was used to examine video images and sounds of the two newsmen. Similar technology has been used to create video products known as “deepfake videos”. A deepfake is a video that looks real, but was electronically changed. Such videos can make people appear to say things they never said.
主题的补充信息：news reader的工作机制。（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 4: It’s said that the AI presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day” on its website and on social media. One of the presenters even promised to “work tirelessly” to keep people informed. Some machine learning experts said the system showed off China’s latest progress in voice recognition, text-to-speech technology and data analysis.
评价：news reader的好处。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers.?Some people argued?that only low-level jobs requiring heavy labor will be easily replaced by robots.?Others praised?the technology as a way for companies to make money from low-cost labor machines.?Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
评价：对于news reader的担心（要点4）
写作思路解读
Para. 6:?Britain’s BBC?recently released a video that used machine learning to make it look like one of its news readers speaking different languages. The London-based company that developed the system says its goal is to “remove the language barrier” for many different kinds of video across the internet. Also,?Amazon’s working on Alexa smart speaker system to create a special news reader voice. Amazon is reportedly preparing to launch Alexa’s news reader voice in the near future.
附加信息：举例说明人们对于这新技术的进一步行动（要点5）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Many people now get a lot of their news on electronic devices, instead of traditional media. The news readers, supported by machine learning technology, are based on two real-life Chinese newsmen. AI presenters will be a great improvement to the news team because they “can work 24 hours a day”. Others wondered about?the effects robots might have on employment and workers. Some businesses?have experimented with similar technology for possible use in news operations.
评点：该概要尽管覆盖了文章的全部要点，对文本的要点也作了一些整合，但存在以下问题：字数超过80字；有多处表达抄袭原文；要点的整合不够到位，导致表达过于冗长；没有组织好要点之间的逻辑关系，导致文章缺乏连贯性。这些与概要写作的评分标准要求相差甚远。
3.表达微技能之抽象名词主语
1
2
大纲出现词汇1
ability, abortion, abuse, acceptance, access, acknowledge/ recognition, acquaintance, admission, advance, agreement, analysis, apology, appreciation, assistance, attempt, attention, balance, barrier, belief, birth, bite, bond, boom, boost, campaign, care, challenge, change, collection, combination, commitment, command/knowledge, concentration, concern, contribution, delay
大纲出现词汇2
delivery, demand, devotion, dislike, division, effort, evolution/progress, expectation, failure, fear, growth, hope, influence, involvement, motivation, objection, opposition, participation, performance, preference, preparation, progress, promotion, recovery, reference, rise, search, shortage, spread, struggle, success, thirst, understanding, visit, waste, worry
写作思路解读
我们在概要写作中如果能关注那些有动词意义的抽象名词，用它们作主语、表语、宾语等，可以替代从句、动宾词组，使句子变得简练。
1. It will be a serious problem if we don't solve the serious problem of pollution.
— Failure to solve the problem of pollution will be a disaster.
2. If the books can't be delivered in time, it will disturb our teaching schedule.
— Any delay in the delivery of books will disturb your schedule.
3. If we learn the English language well, we will have more chances to be admitted into the top universities.
— A good knowledge/command of English means easier access to top universities.
4. He lacks experience, so he is at a disadvantage compared to others employees.
— A lack of experience puts him at a disadvantage compared to other employees.
5. If you compare two ways of life carefully, you will find the former is superior to the latter.
— Careful comparison of two ways of life will show the superiority of the former over the latter.
一、运用抽象名词作主语策略，使改写后的句子与原句句意保持不变。
1. If you are able to work out the solution, you are more likely to be admitted into the club.
— The ________ to work out the solution will more likely admitted into the club.
— The ________ to solve the problem will make your _________ into the club possible.
5.牛刀小试
ability
ability
admission
If they abuse the power, they will end up in prison.
— The ________ of power will put them in prison.
abuse
4. We firmly believe that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
— We hold the _______ that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
— We are firm _______ that our attitude, rather than our aptitude, that determines our altitude.
3. After they analyzed the whole matter, the eventually found out the truth.
— The _______ of the whole matter help them find out the truth eventually.
— The _______ of the whole matter led to the truth being found out.
5.牛刀小试
analysis
analysis
belief
believers
5. If we combine a balanced diet with proper exercise, we’ll be healthy, wealthy and wise.
— A balanced diet ________ with proper exercise will keep people healthy, wealthy and wise.
— A__________ of a balanced diet and proper exercise will keep people healthy, wealthy and wise.
5.牛刀小试
combined
combination
参考范文欣赏1
As China’s AI news presenters appear, the new technology will greatly change the way we obtain information. That’s because machine learning technology has been applied to broadcast news programmes without a break and make “deepfake videos”, which displays China’s latest advance in AI. Some worry that it may cause unemployment while others hold positive attitudes. Lately, Britain's BBC, along with America’s Amazon, also develops similar products by using machine learning. (70w)
参考范文欣赏2
Technology has been updating our source of information.?Now, another technology, AI news-reader, has become a hit?which?uses the voices of two great Chinese newsmen, broadcasting both in English and Chinese.?Though?some people worry about its influence on employment,?there are several advantages. It can work non-stop,?so?some regard it as a way of making money and do?further research. Many companies, including BBC and Amazon, are trying to produce better learning machine. (75w)