2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件69(共24张PPT)
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(共24张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之次要信息的提炼策略
表达微技能之句子花样表达篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： The stress and its impact
结构：
Para 1
Para 3
Para 2
Para 4
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
“Stop the world, I want to get off!” This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic, or stress, which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing, try to relax, and become calm again. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. It can increase the pulse rate, make the heart miss beats, and can cause high blood pressure. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘) and cause a person to breathe too fast, resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide. Stress can affect the stomach. It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food. These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.
Emotions are also easily affected by stress. People suffering from stress often feel anxious. They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time. When people are under stress, they often overreact to little problems. For example, a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. Depression, an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness, can be the result of continued and increasing stress. Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.
It is obvious that stress is a serious problem. It attacks the body. It affects the emotions. Untreated, it may eventually result in mental illness. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while.
②
④
③
①
⑤
Physical impact
phenomenon
Suggestions
Emotional impact
Mental impact
写作思路解读
Para. 1: “Stop the world, I want to get off!” This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic, or stress, which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing, try to relax, and become calm again. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
压力是现代生活中健康问题最常见的原因之一。太多的压力会导致身体、情绪和心理健康问题。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 2: There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. It can increase the pulse rate, make the heart miss beats, and can cause high blood pressure. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘) and cause a person to breathe too fast, resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide. Stress can affect the stomach. It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food. These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.
压力有许多身体上的影响：压力会影响心脏，呼吸系统，会影响胃。（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: Emotions are also easily affected by stress. People suffering from stress often feel anxious. They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time. When people are under stress, they often overreact to little problems. For example, a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
情绪也很容易受到压力的影响。压力会使人生气、情绪化或焦虑不安。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 4: Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. Depression, an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness, can be the result of continued and increasing stress. Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.
情绪也很容易受到压力的影响。压力会使人生气、情绪化或焦虑不安。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: It is obvious that stress is a serious problem. It attacks the body. It affects the emotions. Untreated, it may eventually result in mental illness. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while.
压力对我们的健康、情绪和思想都有很大的影响。所以，减少压力：停下来，休息一会儿。（要点5）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally. Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things. Continual stress may contribute to severe mental diseases, like depression. Since stress does harm to us, we should stop to have a rest to relieve stress.
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章的全部要点，但是仔细阅读后我们会发现文章有句式表达单一，衔接不流畅等缺点。因此，在表达微技能中，我们将聚焦如何利用词性转换、短语和各种句式结构提高表达的水平，如何花样表达同一个意思。
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally. Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things. Continual stress may contribute to severe mental diseases, like depression. Since stress does harm to us, we should stop to have a rest to relieve stress.
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章的全部要点，但是仔细阅读后我们会发现文章有句式表达单一，衔接不流畅等缺点。因此，在表达微技能中，我们将聚焦如何利用词性转换、短语和各种句式结构提高表达的水平，如何花样表达同一个意思。
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
本章节将以此文本为例聚焦“句子花样表达”在概要写作中的运用。
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems. （要点1）
同义替换：results in = contributes to/ leads to/ gives rise to/ causes/ brings about/ is to blame for
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Excessive/ Overwhelming stress may give rise to health problems
还可以改变句子的主语变成:
②Many health problems are mainly due to too much stress.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
2. There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. Stress can affect the stomach.（要点2）
同义替换：affect = have a bad/negative effect on, put... at risk, ruin, destroy, impact, be harmful/detrimental to
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将二段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Stress affects one’s physical health by impacting the heart, disturbing the respiratory system and harming the stomach.
归纳多种信息还可以使用like, including, such as, range from….to…
② Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
3. Emotions are also easily affected by stress. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious. （要点3）
改变词性：emotions变成emotionally，或者用angry, anxious的名词形式; 改变语态(被动语态变主动语态)
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将三段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things/irritable.
② Stress brings about negative feelings, such as anger, anxiety and tiresomeness.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
4. Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.（要点4）
结合两个句子我们可以采用常见的定语从句和非谓语结构。这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将四段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Continual stress may contribute to depression and certain addictions , which threaten one's mental health.
② Lasting stress may give rise to depression and certain addictions , thus threatening one's mental health.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
5. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while. （要点5）
我们可以采用一些特殊的句式结构如强调句和倒装来作为建议和呼吁的结尾。这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将五段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy
② It’s necessary for us to take a rest to lessen it so that we can live a healthy life.
一、将两个句子合并成一个句子。
1. In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination. It has a greatly negative influence on our wealth and health.
① In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination, _________________________________________
② In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination, _________________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
which has a great influence on our wealth and health
causing great influence on our wealth and health
5.牛刀小试
2. Emotions are also easily affected by stress. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
① Emotions are also easily affected by stress, _________________________________________.
② Emotions are also easily affected by stress, _________________________________________.
which can make people angry, moody or anxious
making people angry, moody or anxious.
3. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
① Stress, _________________________________________, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally.
② Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life, does harm to us __________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
which is one of the most common causes of health problems
physically , emotionally and mentally
2. Most people consider dandelions annoying weeds but they are wrong.
① Dandelions __________________ annoying weeds, but they are actually very useful.
② Dandelions, _______________________________________, actually are very useful.
二、改变主语
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of physical, emotional and mental health problems.
Many health problems ________________ / _________________ / __________________ too much stress.
Many health problems are mainly _________________________too much stress.
③ People under too much stress _______________ many health problems.
5.牛刀小试
result from
due to/ because of/ owing to
arise from/out of
are caused by
suffer from
are considered as
which used to be described as annoying weeds
四、改变词性
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of physical, emotional and mental health problems.
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us ___________________________________.
2. Traffic jams will affect the effectiveness of work.
People work less ___________as a result of traffic jams.
三、语态变化
Emotions are also easily affected by stress and stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
Stress also ________________, making people angry, moody or anxious.
5.牛刀小试
affects emotions
physically and emotionally as well as mentally
effectively
五、特殊句式
We should reduce stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy.
__________________________________________________________________________________. (It is….that)
_________________________________________________________________________________. (Only by doing)
5.牛刀小试
It is high time we reduced stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy
Only by reducing stress can we reduce stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy.
参考范文欣赏1
Nowadays, stress is a major contributing factor in the occurrence of many health problems. First of all, too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Emotionally, people suffering from stress may feel anxious and can’t control their temper. What’s worse, lasting stress can account for various mental illnesses like depression as well. Therefore, only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy. (74 w)
参考范文欣赏2
Stress is one of the most common causes of modern people’s physical, emotional, and mental health problems. Initially, many physical organs like heart, respiratory system and stomach can not function well due to numerous stress. Besides, too much stress can cause emotional problems like angry, moody or anxious. Finally, long-term untreated stress also contributes to various mental illnesses and addicted behaviors. Consequently, it is high time to reduce stress to keep us physically, emotionally and mentally healthy. (77 w)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之次要信息的提炼策略
表达微技能之句子花样表达篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： The stress and its impact
结构：
Para 1
Para 3
Para 2
Para 4
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
“Stop the world, I want to get off!” This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic, or stress, which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing, try to relax, and become calm again. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. It can increase the pulse rate, make the heart miss beats, and can cause high blood pressure. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘) and cause a person to breathe too fast, resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide. Stress can affect the stomach. It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food. These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.
Emotions are also easily affected by stress. People suffering from stress often feel anxious. They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time. When people are under stress, they often overreact to little problems. For example, a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. Depression, an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness, can be the result of continued and increasing stress. Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.
It is obvious that stress is a serious problem. It attacks the body. It affects the emotions. Untreated, it may eventually result in mental illness. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while.
②
④
③
①
⑤
Physical impact
phenomenon
Suggestions
Emotional impact
Mental impact
写作思路解读
Para. 1: “Stop the world, I want to get off!” This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic, or stress, which makes people want to stop whatever they are doing, try to relax, and become calm again. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
压力是现代生活中健康问题最常见的原因之一。太多的压力会导致身体、情绪和心理健康问题。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 2: There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. It can increase the pulse rate, make the heart miss beats, and can cause high blood pressure. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. It can lead to asthma(哮喘,气喘) and cause a person to breathe too fast, resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide. Stress can affect the stomach. It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food. These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.
压力有许多身体上的影响：压力会影响心脏，呼吸系统，会影响胃。（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: Emotions are also easily affected by stress. People suffering from stress often feel anxious. They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time. When people are under stress, they often overreact to little problems. For example, a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
情绪也很容易受到压力的影响。压力会使人生气、情绪化或焦虑不安。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 4: Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. Depression, an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness, can be the result of continued and increasing stress. Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.
情绪也很容易受到压力的影响。压力会使人生气、情绪化或焦虑不安。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: It is obvious that stress is a serious problem. It attacks the body. It affects the emotions. Untreated, it may eventually result in mental illness. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while.
压力对我们的健康、情绪和思想都有很大的影响。所以，减少压力：停下来，休息一会儿。（要点5）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally. Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things. Continual stress may contribute to severe mental diseases, like depression. Since stress does harm to us, we should stop to have a rest to relieve stress.
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章的全部要点，但是仔细阅读后我们会发现文章有句式表达单一，衔接不流畅等缺点。因此，在表达微技能中，我们将聚焦如何利用词性转换、短语和各种句式结构提高表达的水平，如何花样表达同一个意思。
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally. Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things. Continual stress may contribute to severe mental diseases, like depression. Since stress does harm to us, we should stop to have a rest to relieve stress.
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章的全部要点，但是仔细阅读后我们会发现文章有句式表达单一，衔接不流畅等缺点。因此，在表达微技能中，我们将聚焦如何利用词性转换、短语和各种句式结构提高表达的水平，如何花样表达同一个意思。
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
本章节将以此文本为例聚焦“句子花样表达”在概要写作中的运用。
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems. （要点1）
同义替换：results in = contributes to/ leads to/ gives rise to/ causes/ brings about/ is to blame for
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Excessive/ Overwhelming stress may give rise to health problems
还可以改变句子的主语变成:
②Many health problems are mainly due to too much stress.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
2. There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. Stress can affect the stomach.（要点2）
同义替换：affect = have a bad/negative effect on, put... at risk, ruin, destroy, impact, be harmful/detrimental to
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将二段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Stress affects one’s physical health by impacting the heart, disturbing the respiratory system and harming the stomach.
归纳多种信息还可以使用like, including, such as, range from….to…
② Too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
3. Emotions are also easily affected by stress. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious. （要点3）
改变词性：emotions变成emotionally，或者用angry, anxious的名词形式; 改变语态(被动语态变主动语态)
这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将三段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Stress affects people emotionally, making us moody and nervous and even sensitive to small things/irritable.
② Stress brings about negative feelings, such as anger, anxiety and tiresomeness.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
4. Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.（要点4）
结合两个句子我们可以采用常见的定语从句和非谓语结构。这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将四段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Continual stress may contribute to depression and certain addictions , which threaten one's mental health.
② Lasting stress may give rise to depression and certain addictions , thus threatening one's mental health.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
5. Stress has a great influence on our health, our feelings and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while. （要点5）
我们可以采用一些特殊的句式结构如强调句和倒装来作为建议和呼吁的结尾。这样，综合整段信息，我们可以将五段主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息
① Only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy
② It’s necessary for us to take a rest to lessen it so that we can live a healthy life.
一、将两个句子合并成一个句子。
1. In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination. It has a greatly negative influence on our wealth and health.
① In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination, _________________________________________
② In our daily life, almost everyone has experienced procrastination, _________________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
which has a great influence on our wealth and health
causing great influence on our wealth and health
5.牛刀小试
2. Emotions are also easily affected by stress. Stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
① Emotions are also easily affected by stress, _________________________________________.
② Emotions are also easily affected by stress, _________________________________________.
which can make people angry, moody or anxious
making people angry, moody or anxious.
3. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional and mental health problems.
① Stress, _________________________________________, does harm to us physically and emotionally as well as mentally.
② Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life, does harm to us __________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
which is one of the most common causes of health problems
physically , emotionally and mentally
2. Most people consider dandelions annoying weeds but they are wrong.
① Dandelions __________________ annoying weeds, but they are actually very useful.
② Dandelions, _______________________________________, actually are very useful.
二、改变主语
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of physical, emotional and mental health problems.
Many health problems ________________ / _________________ / __________________ too much stress.
Many health problems are mainly _________________________too much stress.
③ People under too much stress _______________ many health problems.
5.牛刀小试
result from
due to/ because of/ owing to
arise from/out of
are caused by
suffer from
are considered as
which used to be described as annoying weeds
四、改变词性
1. Stress is one of the most common causes of physical, emotional and mental health problems.
Stress, one of the most common causes of health problems, does harm to us ___________________________________.
2. Traffic jams will affect the effectiveness of work.
People work less ___________as a result of traffic jams.
三、语态变化
Emotions are also easily affected by stress and stress can make people angry, moody or anxious.
Stress also ________________, making people angry, moody or anxious.
5.牛刀小试
affects emotions
physically and emotionally as well as mentally
effectively
五、特殊句式
We should reduce stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy.
__________________________________________________________________________________. (It is….that)
_________________________________________________________________________________. (Only by doing)
5.牛刀小试
It is high time we reduced stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy
Only by reducing stress can we reduce stress to keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy.
参考范文欣赏1
Nowadays, stress is a major contributing factor in the occurrence of many health problems. First of all, too much stress is harmful to many physical organs, ranging from the heart to the stomach. Emotionally, people suffering from stress may feel anxious and can’t control their temper. What’s worse, lasting stress can account for various mental illnesses like depression as well. Therefore, only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy. (74 w)
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Stress is one of the most common causes of modern people’s physical, emotional, and mental health problems. Initially, many physical organs like heart, respiratory system and stomach can not function well due to numerous stress. Besides, too much stress can cause emotional problems like angry, moody or anxious. Finally, long-term untreated stress also contributes to various mental illnesses and addicted behaviors. Consequently, it is high time to reduce stress to keep us physically, emotionally and mentally healthy. (77 w)