2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件71(共17张PPT)
文档属性
| 名称 | 2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件71(共17张PPT) |  | |
| 格式 | zip | ||
| 文件大小 | 3.2MB | ||
| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | |||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2020-05-22 17:13:59 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
(共17张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能
表达微技能
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：说明文
主题： take notes by typing or take notes with a pen and paper
结构：
Para 1
Para 3&4
Para 2
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
If you were allowed to bring a laptop to class, would you prefer to take notes by typing or with a pen and paper? Most people would probably prefer a laptop. And the reason is obvious: you can write much more quickly using a keyboard and therefore take down more information.
But the truth is that faster isn’t always better. A new study, done by Princeton University and University of California, found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops, reported The Atlantic. In the study, 65 college students watch a video of a lecture and take notes either with pens or laptops. Students were then asked to complete different tests based on how well they remembered and understood the lecture. Results shows that pen users performed better than those who took notes with their laptops.
Curious about the results, they compared the notes of the two groups and immediately saw the difference — pen users’ notes were shorter and taken mostly in their own words. Laptop users, however, usually type down word by word what the lecturer said in a “mindless” way. They found that students with laptops always try to take more notes, so they usually write down information without processing its meaning while pen users know that they cannot possibly record every word in a lecture. Instead, they listen, think and focus on understanding the content of the lecture. Besides brain activities, there is another reason that laptops are not so useful in class. According to Scientific American, when college students use laptops in class, they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping, which obviously harms their school performance.
Indeed, technology is making our lives easier and doing things more efficiently. But learning may not be one of those things. As Scientific American put it: “When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power.”
result &causes
phenomenon
suggestions
reasons
If you were allowed to bring a laptop to class, would you prefer to take notes by tying or with a pen and paper? Most people would probably prefer a laptop. And the reason is obvious: you can write much more quickly using a keyboard and therefore take down more information.
topic / phenomenon(para 1)
Most people would probably prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker.
写作思路解读
But the truth is that faster isn‘t always better. A new study -- done by Princeton University and University of California, -- found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops, reported The Atlantic.In the study , Muller and Oppenheimer had 65 college students watch a video of a lecture and take notes either with pens or laptops. Students were then asked to complete different tests based on how well they remembered and understood the lecture. Results shows that pen users performed better than those who took notes with their laptops.
pay attention to some signal words !
Study showed that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops
写作思路解读
Curious about the results, Muller and Oppenheimer compared the notes of the two groups and immediately saw the difference --pen users’ notes were shorter and taken mostly in their own words. Laptop users, however, usually type down word -by- word what the lecturer said in a “mindless” way. They found that students with laptops always try to take more notes, so they usually write down information without processing its meaning while pen users, know that they cannot possibly record every word in a lecture. Instead, they listen, think and focus on understanding the content of the lecture. Besides brain activities, there is another reason that laptops are not so useful in class. According to Scientific American, when college students use laptops in class, they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping, which obviously harms their school performance.
Compared with laptops, using pens to take notes can contribute to more brain activities while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
pay attention to the linking word!
写作思路解读
Indeed, technology is making our lives easier and doing things more efficiently. But learning may not be one of those things. As Scientific American put it: “when it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs (电脑性能)and more brain power.”
Always consider the author’s writing purpose!
Students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
写作思路解读
写作思路解读
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，形成一段概要：
Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly. (Point 1) But a new study found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops. (Point 2)Besides brain activities, another reason that laptops are not so useful in class is that they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping. (Point 3) When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power. (Point 4) (98 words)
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，而且基本都是抄袭原文句子，不符合高考五档评分标准要求。此外上下文间有些句子是重复的，又缺乏连贯性，更不像一个段落。因此，我们有必要学习一些表达微技能来润色我们的段落。
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
下面我们将以此文本为例，再次聚焦“同义/近义词（组）替换及句型转换”技能在概要写作中的运用。
Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly.（要点1）
prefer to do sth. = would rather do sth. = prefer doing sth. = tend to do sth.; and the reason is that = because = as; be probably = be more likely; using a laptop = by typing
我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Most people may be more likely to prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker.
② Most people would tend to take notes by typing since it is much quicker.
③ Most people would probably rather take notes by using a laptop as it is much quicker.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
But a new study found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops. （要点2）
but转换成however; a new study found that = A new study showed/suggested that = According to a new study
综合第二段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① However, a study showed that students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those taking notes with their laptops.
② However, according to a new study, students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those taking notes by typing.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
3.Besides brain activities, another reason that laptops are not so useful in class is that they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping.（要点3）
besides = apart from = in addition to = one reason is that ... while ...; another reason ... is that = is because of/ due to/ owing to/ as a consequence of/ as a result of = result from = is responsible for (也可以用bring about/ contribute to/ give rise to/ result in等去改写句子); brain activities = brain power
我们可以将文章主题句信息概括为以下的句子信息：
① Pen users employ more brain power while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
② Apart from brain power, another reason is that laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
4. When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs(电脑性能) and more brain power.（要点4）
when it comes to taking notes可以替换成 it is suggested that = be advocated to do = you had better do = it is better for sb. to do sth.; fewer gigs and more brain power = take notes rather than laptops.由于这是文章的最后结论，所以可以给句子加上衔接词 Therefore。
综合第四段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Therefore, students are advocated to use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
② Therefore, it is better for students to use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
③ It is suggested that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
可见，要写好这篇概要，我们在平时的学习中要多积累同义词、近义词、
反义词和上下义词，掌握相关的同义表达句式。
一、根据句意和要求改写句子，使句意保持不变。
1. 同（近）义词（组）替换
① In the follow-up class, the teaching activities are similar to those used in conventional classes.
= In the follow-up class, the teaching activities _______________ those used in regular classes.
② Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly.
= Most people would probably _______ take notes with their laptops __________ it is much quicker.
③ Besides brain activities, another reason is that laptops are not so useful in class.
= _____________________ brain activities, another reason is that laptops are not so useful in class.
5.牛刀小试
do not differ from
rather
Apart from/ In addition to
as/because
2. 词性转换
① A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are crucially important.
= It is ___________________ to keep a balanced diet _____ well crucially important ______ a healthy eating habit.
② In biological terms, a species becomes extinct when its last individual dies.
= _____________, a species becomes extinct when its last individual dies.
③ The researchers suggested that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= It’s ____________________ that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= The __________________ is that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
5.牛刀小试
of great importance
as
as
Biologically
advised/ suggested
suggestion/advice
3. 短语替换
① A healthy diet can make us healthy and strong.
= A healthy diet can _______ us _______ a strong and healthy body.
= A healthy diet can _______ us _______ a strong and healthy body.
② When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power.
= When it comes to taking notes, students ____________________ use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= When it comes to taking notes, students ___________ use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
③ John fell into the river and before help could reach him, he went down under the water.
= John fell into the river and __________ with no help _________.
5.牛刀小试
equip
build
with
are advocated to
had better
sank
help
available
4. 句式替换
① You can obtain a large amount of information on the Internet nowadays.
= A large amount of information __________________ on the Internet nowadays.
= __________ information is __________ on the Internet nowadays.
② We don’t know its value until we lose health.
=_________ we lose the health ______ we know its value.
③ Undoubtedly, the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.
=_________________ that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.
5.牛刀小试
can be obtained
available
Not until
do
There is no doubt
Abundant
参考范文欣赏
Most people would probably prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker. (1) However, a new study showed that students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those who took notes with laptops (2) because using pens to take notes can contribute to more brain activities while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites. (3) Therefore, it is better for students to use pens to take notes rather than laptops. (4) (80w)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能
表达微技能
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：说明文
主题： take notes by typing or take notes with a pen and paper
结构：
Para 1
Para 3&4
Para 2
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
If you were allowed to bring a laptop to class, would you prefer to take notes by typing or with a pen and paper? Most people would probably prefer a laptop. And the reason is obvious: you can write much more quickly using a keyboard and therefore take down more information.
But the truth is that faster isn’t always better. A new study, done by Princeton University and University of California, found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops, reported The Atlantic. In the study, 65 college students watch a video of a lecture and take notes either with pens or laptops. Students were then asked to complete different tests based on how well they remembered and understood the lecture. Results shows that pen users performed better than those who took notes with their laptops.
Curious about the results, they compared the notes of the two groups and immediately saw the difference — pen users’ notes were shorter and taken mostly in their own words. Laptop users, however, usually type down word by word what the lecturer said in a “mindless” way. They found that students with laptops always try to take more notes, so they usually write down information without processing its meaning while pen users know that they cannot possibly record every word in a lecture. Instead, they listen, think and focus on understanding the content of the lecture. Besides brain activities, there is another reason that laptops are not so useful in class. According to Scientific American, when college students use laptops in class, they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping, which obviously harms their school performance.
Indeed, technology is making our lives easier and doing things more efficiently. But learning may not be one of those things. As Scientific American put it: “When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power.”
result &causes
phenomenon
suggestions
reasons
If you were allowed to bring a laptop to class, would you prefer to take notes by tying or with a pen and paper? Most people would probably prefer a laptop. And the reason is obvious: you can write much more quickly using a keyboard and therefore take down more information.
topic / phenomenon(para 1)
Most people would probably prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker.
写作思路解读
But the truth is that faster isn‘t always better. A new study -- done by Princeton University and University of California, -- found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops, reported The Atlantic.In the study , Muller and Oppenheimer had 65 college students watch a video of a lecture and take notes either with pens or laptops. Students were then asked to complete different tests based on how well they remembered and understood the lecture. Results shows that pen users performed better than those who took notes with their laptops.
pay attention to some signal words !
Study showed that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops
写作思路解读
Curious about the results, Muller and Oppenheimer compared the notes of the two groups and immediately saw the difference --pen users’ notes were shorter and taken mostly in their own words. Laptop users, however, usually type down word -by- word what the lecturer said in a “mindless” way. They found that students with laptops always try to take more notes, so they usually write down information without processing its meaning while pen users, know that they cannot possibly record every word in a lecture. Instead, they listen, think and focus on understanding the content of the lecture. Besides brain activities, there is another reason that laptops are not so useful in class. According to Scientific American, when college students use laptops in class, they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping, which obviously harms their school performance.
Compared with laptops, using pens to take notes can contribute to more brain activities while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
pay attention to the linking word!
写作思路解读
Indeed, technology is making our lives easier and doing things more efficiently. But learning may not be one of those things. As Scientific American put it: “when it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs (电脑性能)and more brain power.”
Always consider the author’s writing purpose!
Students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
写作思路解读
写作思路解读
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，形成一段概要：
Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly. (Point 1) But a new study found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops. (Point 2)Besides brain activities, another reason that laptops are not so useful in class is that they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping. (Point 3) When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power. (Point 4) (98 words)
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数严重超标，而且基本都是抄袭原文句子，不符合高考五档评分标准要求。此外上下文间有些句子是重复的，又缺乏连贯性，更不像一个段落。因此，我们有必要学习一些表达微技能来润色我们的段落。
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
下面我们将以此文本为例，再次聚焦“同义/近义词（组）替换及句型转换”技能在概要写作中的运用。
Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly.（要点1）
prefer to do sth. = would rather do sth. = prefer doing sth. = tend to do sth.; and the reason is that = because = as; be probably = be more likely; using a laptop = by typing
我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Most people may be more likely to prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker.
② Most people would tend to take notes by typing since it is much quicker.
③ Most people would probably rather take notes by using a laptop as it is much quicker.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
But a new study found that students who took handwritten notes actually learned more than those who used laptops and performed better than those who took notes with their laptops. （要点2）
but转换成however; a new study found that = A new study showed/suggested that = According to a new study
综合第二段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① However, a study showed that students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those taking notes with their laptops.
② However, according to a new study, students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those taking notes by typing.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
3.Besides brain activities, another reason that laptops are not so useful in class is that they spend on average 40 percent of class time doing things such as visiting social media sites or shopping.（要点3）
besides = apart from = in addition to = one reason is that ... while ...; another reason ... is that = is because of/ due to/ owing to/ as a consequence of/ as a result of = result from = is responsible for (也可以用bring about/ contribute to/ give rise to/ result in等去改写句子); brain activities = brain power
我们可以将文章主题句信息概括为以下的句子信息：
① Pen users employ more brain power while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
② Apart from brain power, another reason is that laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites.
3.表达微技能之同义/近义词替换及句型转换
4. When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs(电脑性能) and more brain power.（要点4）
when it comes to taking notes可以替换成 it is suggested that = be advocated to do = you had better do = it is better for sb. to do sth.; fewer gigs and more brain power = take notes rather than laptops.由于这是文章的最后结论，所以可以给句子加上衔接词 Therefore。
综合第四段信息，我们可以将文章主题句信息转换成以下的句子信息：
① Therefore, students are advocated to use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
② Therefore, it is better for students to use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
③ It is suggested that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
可见，要写好这篇概要，我们在平时的学习中要多积累同义词、近义词、
反义词和上下义词，掌握相关的同义表达句式。
一、根据句意和要求改写句子，使句意保持不变。
1. 同（近）义词（组）替换
① In the follow-up class, the teaching activities are similar to those used in conventional classes.
= In the follow-up class, the teaching activities _______________ those used in regular classes.
② Most people would probably prefer a laptop to take notes and the reason is that you can write much more quickly.
= Most people would probably _______ take notes with their laptops __________ it is much quicker.
③ Besides brain activities, another reason is that laptops are not so useful in class.
= _____________________ brain activities, another reason is that laptops are not so useful in class.
5.牛刀小试
do not differ from
rather
Apart from/ In addition to
as/because
2. 词性转换
① A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are crucially important.
= It is ___________________ to keep a balanced diet _____ well crucially important ______ a healthy eating habit.
② In biological terms, a species becomes extinct when its last individual dies.
= _____________, a species becomes extinct when its last individual dies.
③ The researchers suggested that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= It’s ____________________ that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= The __________________ is that students should use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
5.牛刀小试
of great importance
as
as
Biologically
advised/ suggested
suggestion/advice
3. 短语替换
① A healthy diet can make us healthy and strong.
= A healthy diet can _______ us _______ a strong and healthy body.
= A healthy diet can _______ us _______ a strong and healthy body.
② When it comes to taking notes, students need fewer gigs and more brain power.
= When it comes to taking notes, students ____________________ use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
= When it comes to taking notes, students ___________ use pens to take notes rather than laptops.
③ John fell into the river and before help could reach him, he went down under the water.
= John fell into the river and __________ with no help _________.
5.牛刀小试
equip
build
with
are advocated to
had better
sank
help
available
4. 句式替换
① You can obtain a large amount of information on the Internet nowadays.
= A large amount of information __________________ on the Internet nowadays.
= __________ information is __________ on the Internet nowadays.
② We don’t know its value until we lose health.
=_________ we lose the health ______ we know its value.
③ Undoubtedly, the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.
=_________________ that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.
5.牛刀小试
can be obtained
available
Not until
do
There is no doubt
Abundant
参考范文欣赏
Most people would probably prefer to take notes with a laptop because it is much quicker. (1) However, a new study showed that students taking handwritten notes actually learned more and performed better than those who took notes with laptops (2) because using pens to take notes can contribute to more brain activities while laptop users spend time doing other things in class, like visiting social sites. (3) Therefore, it is better for students to use pens to take notes rather than laptops. (4) (80w)